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Hey guys here is my laksh and kt fan fiction

i just felt like writing as it's my fav jodi...Tongue

hope u enjoy reading it...

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Edited by Angelic_Pari - 15 October 2008 at 5:53pm

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Part 1

here it goes...

(This story takes place after laksh and kt were married. It has been a week since they married…)



It was early morning, everybody was downstairs 4 breakfast.

Kt, Ganga, Tanya, were in the kitchen getting the breakfast ready.. and Damini were setting the table..


Kt had made a kheer for the first time after she married laksh… she offers it to Ganga to taste it…


G: arre wah…. Ye to bilkul vaise hi hai jaise pehle ma(tulsi) banaya karti thi… aur vaise bhi kyu nahi hoga akhir tum ma ki hi to parchayi ho….


KT: maa.. aap ne ye te keh diya ki mai baa ki parchayi hu par kya mai apni maa ki tarah nahi hu..? kya mai aap ki parchayi nahi hu?


G: tu meri parchayi nahi mera aayna hai….


Kt (smiles so cutely)


T: Kya baate chal rahi hai saas bahu mai, zara mai bhi to sunu…

G: kuch nahi, tu ye chakh.. (offers her the kheer) meri beti ne banayi hai...

T: (eats the first spoon and her eyes goes wide) arre waa kt.. kya baat hai….

(kt and ganga smiles awwetly)

G: achhi hai na..?

T: tu puch rahi hai aur vo bhi muje..?

G: (laughs) then she takes off the chain with heart shaped pendal and gives it to kt)

Kt: maa. Ye..?

T: rakhle beta.. ye ek maa ka pyaar hai apni beti ke liye…

Kt: (takes the chain and touches ganga's feet)

T: abhi chale? Sab log ready hai breakfast ke liye…


They goes out for the breakfast…


Everybody was at the breakfast table and ganga asks kt to serve the kheer to everyone…

(pari was sitting on the right side of laksh and the left side was empty)


Kt serves the kheer to everyone and is standing there looking for a seat, then pari says: babhi kya soch rahi hai… abhi beth jao na.. itna bhi mat sharmao bhaiya ke baju mai bethne sai ( don't be shy by sitting next to ur husband)


Kt feels shy and just goes by laksh and sits down while everyone was eating laksh was keep touching kt's hand and kt hitting his hand telling him and telling him to stop.. while this romance was going on, they didn't notice that pari was watching all this and is gigaling…


Anyways it was almost time for the man of viani's to go tto office…


Laksh always goes to meet kt before he goes to office in his room, I mean their room…


Kt was in the room, was making the bed while laksh slowly enters the room and hold kt from her waist


Kt: ahhhhhh…

Then laksh puts his chin on her shoulder.

L: kya hua…? (mak her turn around to face him)

KT: blushes and looks down

L: umm.. bataogi nahi?

Kt: wo..

L: wo..?

Kt: aaj ma ne muje kuch diya…

L: kya diya?

Kt shows the chain…

L: arre wah… kitni achhi hai na…

Kt: wo…(looks worried)

L: kya hua..? tumhe pasand nahi ayi..?

Kt: nahi nahi… asi baat nahi hai..

L: to kya baat hai..?

Kt: wo maine le kar theek to kiya na..? itni mehgi(expensive), achha nahi lagta…

L: pagal ye to ek ma ka pyaar hai apne bet eke bahu ke liye…

Kt: wo to hai… (and smiles)


Do comment plzzzz and tell me how can I improve it

And ya ur ideas too…

Hope u like it..


Love

pari



Edited by pari213 - 16 March 2007 at 4:54pm

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Part 2

Recape:
L: to kya baat hai..?
Kt: wo maine le kar theek to kiya na..? itni mehgi(expensive), achha nahi lagta…
L: pagal ye to ek ma ka pyaar hai apne bet eke bahu ke liye…
Kt: wo to hai… (and smiles)


Then she suddenly remembers what the hell he is doing here, doesn't he have to go to office…?

Kt( pushes laksh away)
L: arre… ye kya trika hai, apne pati ko dhakka deti ho..?
Kt: laksh tum yaha kya kar rahe ho..? tumhe late nahi ho raha hai?
L: kiske liye..?
Kt: office nahi jana kya..?
L: arre haa… mai to bhol hi gaya.. chalo abhi jaldi se ek kiss dedo muje late ho raha hai…
Kt: nai….tum jao… tumhe late ho raha hai na…
L: (makes cute face) plz….
Kt; laksh….
L: Kt……
Kt: plz…
L; plzzzz…..
Kt: pushes him towards the door to go to office…
L: kt… kt… ek min meri baat to suno…
Kt: kya hai….?
L: (he turns around to face her…) plz…….
Kt: laksh… jao…. And pushes him out of their bed room…
L ( comes back at the door and says plzzzzz…..)
Kt; puts her hands on her hips and stare at him…
L: theek hai theek hai ja raha hu…. Wo mera beg dena zara…
Kt: picks up his bag and goes to hand it to him…. And then.. again he hold her by her waist and says… mai jao… ?
Kt: jao naa….
L: shayam ko jaldi aao…?
Kt: (nods as a yes… ) and smiles shyly..
L: laksh kiss her on her forehead and then quickly on her cheek and leaves..
Kt: pagal…. And smiles…

IN THE EVENING

When kt goes downstairs in the kitchen, she doesn't find anyone but it was time to make the dinner.
She goes to ganga's room and she finds her there…. (lucky)

Kt: ma..
G: haa bol..
Kt: koi neeche kyu nahi hai.. kitchen mai? Khana nahi pakana kya?
G: nahi..
Kt: par..?
G: dekh hum subhi bahar ja rahe hai dinner ke liye sivai…
Kt: sivai?
G: laksh ke..
Kt: kyu?
G: usne kaha ki uski zaroori meeting hai issiliye nahi aa sakta par kaha ki tumhe saath legaye.. to ja jaldi tayaar hoja.
Kt: nahi maa… (makes a sad face)
G: kyu?
Kt: mai nahi anna chahti..
G: par kyu..?
KT: yuhi mera maan nahi hai ….
G: kyuki maan nahi hai ya phir kyuki laksh nahi aa vaha hai?
    Hmmm….
Kt: (smiles shyly) ma…
G: achha thik hai to tu tere liye aur laksh ke liye kuch bana lena , kyuki ki hamne aaj kuch bhi nahi banaya hai…
Kt: jee…
G: to mai chalti hu… bahar sab mera intzaar kar rahe honge, laksh ko anne mai der hogayegi aur hum bhi der se hi ayenge thik hai na…..
Kt: jee.. ma.. bye…
G: bye….


That's for part 2 guys
DO COMMENT IT GIVES ME COURAGE…. TO WRITE MORE…
Love
pari



Edited by pari213 - 16 March 2007 at 4:53pm

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here is PART 3

Recap:
G: kyuki maan nahi hai ya phir kyuki laksh nahi aa vaha hai?
    Hmmm….
Kt: (smiles shyly) ma…
G: achha thik hai to tu tere liye aur laksh ke liye kuch bana lena , kyuki ki hamne aaj kuch bhi nahi banaya hai…
Kt: jee…
G: to mai chalti hu… bahar sab mera intzaar kar rahe honge, laksh ko anne mai der hogayegi aur hum bhi der se hi ayenge thik hai na…..
Kt: jee.. ma.. bye…
G: bye….


AT NIGHT

Kt have made full dinner for laksh and herself. She was waiting for laksh in the living room. For like an hour she watched tv but then she got board so she went to her room and was trying to find something that excites her so she can stay awake.

She remembers that she had made a diary, where she collected all her and laksh's aweet moments. ( just like how amrita did for shahid in ishq vishq) she pulls it out and looked at it…. And then she went to her daydreaming… she was dreaming about her and laksh dancing outside in the garden and it was snowing….

At like 12:00pm laksh came back from work and kt was still in the room day dreaming… laksh thought that no one is home and he doesn't feel like eating anything without her jaan so… he thought that he would go and chage and finish his some office work. He enters the room and sees kt and the dairy in her hand.. at first he was surprised.. "what the hell she is doing here"

He went by her and saw the diary and the way she had their cute pics in it.. and soo organized. She never showed him the book. He went behind her and kissed her on her cheek. Kt comes out of her day dreaming and look back and she finds laksh standing there…

Kt: tum..? tum aa gaye…
L: haa… kyu?
Kt: nahi wo… kuch nahi (and she quickly hides the diary behing her)
L: kya hai woo dikhao muje…
Kt: kuch nahi … kuch nahi tum chalo change karlo aur mai khana lagati hu.. theek hai../
L: ok..
(kt feel relax)
Then laksh goes to the bathroom and that time kt quickly opens the closet and hides the diary but she didn't notice that laksh had open the bathroom door cause he forgot his towel…..and now laksh knows where is that dieary….)

Kt goes downstairs and gets the dinner ready… on the table.. then she goes back to her room to see if laksh is changed or not.. and guess what she saw….??????

Ok guys that's the end of part 3 Hope u like it and guys plzz comment Thanks a lot

Love
pari



Edited by pari213 - 16 March 2007 at 4:53pm

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Part 4


Recap: Kt goes downstairs and gets the dinner ready… on the table.. then she goes back to her room to see if laksh is changed or not.. and guess what she saw….??????



She sees that laksh is holding her diary and is about to open it. She runs and grabs the diary away from laksh.

Kt: laksh yeh… yeh… kya kar rahe ho….? (and snatches the diary saying that)
L: arre dekhne dona kya hai? (and stuggle to get the diary)
Kt: nahi.. ye meri hai....
L: arre par tum meri biwi ho aur mai tumhara pati, isme kya chupana (and still stuggle)
Kt: nahi.. nahi….
L: arre plz… jaan dekhne dona, kitni acchi decorate ki hai aaur waise uspe mera aur tumhara nam bhi likha hai…. Plzz… dekhne dona…(stuggle)
Kt: nahi…
L: arre muje dekhna hai ke usme tumhara aur mere bare me hi hoga.
(asks her so sweetly )
Kt: (couldn't say no) achha theek hai par..
L: par..?
Kt: khan eke bad?
L: promise…?
Kt: promise…
Kt: abb chale…?
L: haa chalo…

They goes downstairs, laksh goes to the dinning table while kt places the dishes at the table.

L: kya bannaya hai aaj. ( he opens the first bowl)
L: rajma chawal..?(isn't it's his fav…?)
Kt: haa.. tumhe pasand hai naa…?
L: bahot…
Kt: (serves laksh and sit by the next chair and wait while he eats)
L: arre… tum nahi kha rahi ho?
Kt: pehle tum to khalo...
L: arre aise kese chalega?
Kt: wo tum khalo mai bad mai kha lungi..
L: par bad mai kyu…?
Kt: baa ne hamesha se sikhaya hai ki ek patni tab tak khana nahi khati jab tak uake pati aur bachhe nahi kha lete.. issiliye….
L: ye bahot wrong hai .. chalo abhi cup chap khana kao.. (he offers her the spoone filled with rajma chawal)
Kt: ek min..( and she urns the spoon towards him) pehle tum…
L: tum nahi sudhrogi.. (laksh eats it and he picks up another spoon of rajma chawal and offers it to kt..) abb to khalo…
Kt: smiles and eats the rajma chawal)

They both enjoy the dinner and then kt had to clean up so she goes in the kitche and laksh goes after her…
Kt ties her hair up in a bun… n start washing dishes…aksh cums from behind … holds her by her waist n pulls her over close to his chest n takes the hair tie outta her hair….

L: muhje tumhare baal koole aache lagte hai…
Kt smiles
L: ek ladko wala sawal poochu?
Kt blushes….
L: ladkiya raat ko itni cute nightys (night dress) kyu pehenti hai….?
Kt: turns around and put her hand on his mouth and puts her face by his left side off the face.. (kind a hug) chhe….(eeeww.)
L: (moves her hand from his mouth) kahona…?
Kt: blushes and tries to run away but…….

I'll put up the next part by Monday… guys..
Do comment if u liked it….

Love
pari


Edited by pari213 - 16 March 2007 at 4:55pm

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aww loved it pari cont soon
i wz waiting for u to continue thankgod u updated

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its really nice Clap Clap

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awesome!!! its really good. plzzz cont. soon Tongue

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