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wadhwaniki

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Posted: 15 March 2007 at 4:20am | IP Logged

hello guys ,this is the first time where i m going to write a fan fiction ,

my story starts after the leap of 20 yrs,

kumkum ,veena n dadi r in the puja room doing puja ,after the puja is over ,

veena -tells kk tat yeh 20 yrs ,20 pal ke jaise beth gaye ,

dadi- tells kyun naa hoga kk aur su dil se ise ghar ki seva ki haiaur har sapna pura kiya hai  ,yeh sukk ka pyaar hi toh hai jisne is ghar ko ek door mein bhandh rakha hai .

veena - haan maaji aap bilkul sahi kah rahi hai ,kk yeh su kahan hai aaj puja main bhi nahi aaya???

kk-mummyji aaj 5 saal ke baad sharman ghar aayega toh iseliye su a surprise party arrange kar raha hai ,aur aap ko toh bata hai su apne bacho se bahut pyar karta hai ,dhruv ne uska sar business handle kar rah hai aur sharman apni degree complete karli aur ab toh woh bhi dhruv ko business mein help kar rega  

veena- su akela sari party ki tayari kaise kar sakega??

kk-mummyji ashka aur siya dono su ko help kar rahi hai !

dadi-yeh sharman ki filght kab aayegi??

kk-sham ko 6 0clock uski land hogi aur  7oclock tak woh ghar mein hoga  .

kk then goes to the hall to give prasad to everyone ,but she cant find su ,she is searching in  the whole hall n her room but in vain su was not there ,kk get upset cos she cant find su anywhere

kk- siya beta ,su kaha hai ??

siya-aunty ,uncle toh terrace par hai

kk wonders why su is in terrace!!!

kk goes in terrace ,she is calling out su 's name and su is behind her then then hugs her tightly

kk-su yeh kya kar rahe ho??teen bacho ke baap ho aur

su-chup chup kk aaj main bahut khush hoon ,aaj mera beta 5 saal ke baad ise ghar mein kadam rakega

kk-janti hoon tum is duniya mein aapne 3 bacho se bahut pyar karte ho!

su-nahi ise duniya mein main sab se zayad tumse pyar karta hoon

kk-acha???

su-kyun koi shak???and hugs her more tightly n tries to kiss her and then suddenly siya n aashka enter to spoil the scene

su- softly tells kk tat he wont leave her in nite in the room

kk smiles n goes frm there

su -kay hai party ki tayari hogagi??

aashka-sar kaam hame de diya aur khud yahan mom ke saath romance kar rahe hai

su-nahi main toh tumrahi mom ko yeh bata raha tha ki sharman ka saugat kaise karna chahiye

siya n aashka- acha abb aap sar kaam ki giye hum dono palour ja rahe hai sham ki party ke liye

and finally sumeet is left to do the whole work

its 6 and the whole family is waiting for sharman

veena-kk sharman to receive karne kaun gaya hai ??

kk-mummyji dhruv gaya hai .

veena -itni time ho gaya hai dhruv aur sharman aab tak nahi aaye hai,su beta zara ph toh karna ,aur dhuv se pooch ki woh kaha hai ???sab mehman aa rahe hai!!!

su was abt to call but ,before tat he see dhruv standing on the doorway,

su- dhruv sharman kaha hai ???

dhruv is standing still like a pillar ,

su ask him where is sharman again n again ,abt sharman but dhruv is not saying anything ,

finally dhruv starts crying ...........su ,kk n the whole family is shock

wht happen ,??why was dhruv crying ????

to knw stay tune wid my f-f ,

i will be back wid the story,

thanks for reading

nikiBig smile



Edited by wadhwaniki - 21 March 2007 at 4:36am

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wadhwaniki

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Posted: 15 March 2007 at 4:21am | IP Logged
hey guys pls do share ur comments ,
if u liked it then i will contd my ff ,
thanks
niki

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Posted: 15 March 2007 at 4:30am | IP Logged
hey hun its a great start...maybe u shud do this in the kk forum ur more like 2 get replies hunni

wadhwaniki

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Posted: 15 March 2007 at 4:36am | IP Logged

Originally posted by Gaurav''s Love

hey hun its a great start...maybe u shud do this in the kk forum ur more like 2 get replies hunni

it is there in kk forum too but i got only few replies Cry

wadhwaniki

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Posted: 15 March 2007 at 9:53am | IP Logged
part 2;

su ask him where is sharman again n again ,abt sharman but dhruv is not saying anything ,

finally dhruv starts crying ...........whole family is wondering why dhruv is crying kk goes near him and ask him again

dhruv-maa jis flight se sharman aa raha tha woh flight crash ho gayi hai aur airport authorities ka kahena hai ki ko bhi passenger nahi bacha ,sab ki maut ho gayi

kk shatters completly ,su n kk are holding each other n abt to cry ,

then all the sudden kk screams !!!!!!!!

sharman!!!!!!!!!!!!!

she finds herself on the bed ,su comes running towards her

su - kk kya hua ,tum chikhi kyun ???

kk-kuch nahi main ne a bahut bura sapna dehka ,

kk tells su abt wht she dreamt ,su consoles kk tat nothing will ever happen to their kids ,they will die but they wont let happen anything to their kids,su then hugs kk

everybody is in the hall kk is helping su ,siya,n aashka is the decorations (she forgotten her dream),

kk hears someone calling her 'maa'

kk-su tumhe sharman ki awaj sunayi di ???

su-nahi toh !!waise bhi toh shrif 1'oclock huye hai ,sharman ki flight 5 o'clock hai.

kk is left wondering tat whether it was her imagination or not

now su hears sharmans voice ,he thinks tat it is just his imagination and leaves it.

kk-siya ,aashka yeh kya kar rahe ho aise koi decoration karta hai kya????tum ladkiyon se itna chota sa kaam bhi nahi hota hai!!!!!sharman aise decorations dekhe ga toh woh surprise nahi balki shocked ho jaye ga !!!!!

kk is continuing her scolding ,but none is bother ,

dhruv-maa main a important meeting ke liye ja raha hoon ,main directly sharman ko airport se receive karuga

suddenly kk feels sharman's foot steps sound she turns around and finds

sharman standing infornt of her ,she runs and goes and hugs him....

everyone are surprised seeing sharman ,su also goes and hugs him and tells him tat finally my son is back i m so happy ,and sharman

dhruv (ask sharman) - tumhari flight toh 5 o'clock ki thi naa toh phir tum itni jadi kaise aa gaye ????

siya n aashka tell each other tat ,humari mehanat pe toh sharman ne paani pher diya

sharman tells them tat he already knew about the party so tat is why ,he thought of giving surprise to everyone by coming early

su- par sharman tujhe kaise bata chal ki hum tujhe ek party de rahe hai????

how did sharman came to knw abt the party ?????

stay tune ,i will be back very soon

thanks

niki



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Posted: 16 March 2007 at 12:55am | IP Logged

shar-aaj subha mein ne ghar par ph kiya tha,aur meera ne ph uthaya tha .....
(he recollects the ph conversation,i.e,going back to flashback)
(At Wadhwa House)
Tring Tring.....

meera-itna badad ghar par kisi ko bhi ek ph attend karne ka time nahi!!sara kaam mujhe hi karna par ta hai.

meera-Hello ,kaun???

shar-Hello,MAA....

mera-MAA????main maa nahi meera hu,aap kaun???

shar wants to play a prank on meera

shar-ji, main sharman ka dost hu ,kya shar ghar par hai??

meera-kaise  dost ho aap ,aap ko bata nahi shar bhaiya ,toh itne saalo se melbourn mein rahete hai

shar-par usene toh mujhe se  kaha tha ki woh bahut jald INDIA aa jayega!

meera-hai woh kal shaam ko panch baje ki flight se aa yege,aur unke honour mein su uncle ne ek surprise party bhi arrange ki hai ,aap zarur aana

shar-ofcourse,ofcourse

aaska -aaye meera kise bat kar rahi hai??

meera- koi shar bhaiya ka dost hai!

aashka is wondering ,cos shar's all frnds are in melbourne

aashka-mera zara ,uske ladke ka naam toh pooch?

meera(back on ph)-hello ,hello ,hello

di shayad usne ph cut kar diya hai!!

Back to present

shar- bas isse tarah muhhe party ke bare mein bata chala

siya n aashka iss meera ko tho hum nahi chodeye ,uski wajah se humari sari mehanat bekar gayi.

siya n aashka running behind meera to hit her,meera ran towards shar

shar-rehene do naa bachi haiaur agar yeh mujhe nahi batati toh kya aap sab ko itni khushi hoti,mujhe yun achanak dekhe ke???

su-haan,shar tum bikul sahi ho ,anjane mein he sahi meera ki wajah se hum sab ko itna acha surprise mila hai.

meera-shar bhaiya mein neaap ki help ki naa ,abb mera gift???

siya n aashka too spranged upon shar for their gifts!!

kk-meera,siya,aashka chup bichara mera beta itni door de aaya hai ,aur tum log iss bhi se hi tang karna shuru kar diya!!

aaj ke liye itna hi,

kal party so dont forget to wear ur best dressLOLLOL

love

nikiSmile



Edited by wadhwaniki - 16 March 2007 at 12:56am

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guys do drop in ur comments

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kk-meera,siya,aashka chup bichara mera beta itni door de aaya hai ,aur tum log iss bhi se hi tang karna shuru kar diya!!

while kk was saying tat ,dhruv tells everyone tat he is getting late and he has to make a move ,

veen tells him to stay back,but dhruv tells tat he has to make a move(dhruv was thinking,siya bas ek baar mera naam lekar mujhe rok lo),on the other hand even siya wanted dhruv to stay back

then aashka softly whispers in siya's ear tat,

aashka-sirf tum bhai ko rok sakti ho!!!

siya-dhruv meri bat kaha sunega,jab usne dadi ki baat nahi suni.

aashka-dadi aur ek premika mein bahut farak hota hai (note tat siya n dhruv are childhood frnds,and love each other deeply)

siya-nahi,nahi aashka sab ke samane kaise??

aashka-aarey ek bar try toh karo!

siya-DHRUV!!!ruk jao naa

both dhruv and siya are looking into each others eyes

shar-AHEM,AHEM!!bhai late nahi ho rahe ho???

dhruv-haan!actually soch raha tha ki itni important meeting bhi nahi hai

everyone are having their lunch,the women serving n men are eating

siya-kisi ko juice chahiye??

shar,aashka,su scream out 'DHRUV KO '

dhruv n siya are blushing,siya was pouring juice in dhruvs glass and everyone are busy looking at dhruv n siya's xpressions ,siya starts blushing n then runs frm there ,everyone started laughing

everyone getting ready for the party ,

In SUKK's bedroom;

su is sitting on the bed n kk is getting ready n as usual su is busy looking n admiring kk's beauty,

kk-main kaise lag rahi hu??

su-as always beautiful,charming,adorable!.....mera toh maan kar raha hai ki..............

kk-ki kya........ sharam nahi aati hai tumhe teen teen bacho ke baap ho.

su-toh kya ek husband apni wife se thoda romance nahi kar  sakta hai??

kk-tumse toh koi baato mein jeet hi nahi sakta hai,

su-janta hoon and then hugs her

kk-chalo bhi ,hum already party ke liye itne late ho chuke hai,

su-party koi 5kms door toh nahi hai bas hall mein hi toh hai

kk laughs and then she also hugs suEmbarrassed

tats it frm me today, 

but tom sukk are going to take a decision ,want to knw wht it is ......................

stay tune

love

nikiWink



Edited by wadhwaniki - 17 March 2007 at 1:42am

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