hello guys ,this is the first time where i m going to write a fan fiction ,
my story starts after the leap of 20 yrs,
kumkum ,veena n dadi r in the puja room doing puja ,after the puja is over ,
veena -tells kk tat yeh 20 yrs ,20 pal ke jaise beth gaye ,
dadi- tells kyun naa hoga kk aur su dil se ise ghar ki seva ki haiaur har sapna pura kiya hai ,yeh sukk ka pyaar hi toh hai jisne is ghar ko ek door mein bhandh rakha hai .
veena - haan maaji aap bilkul sahi kah rahi hai ,kk yeh su kahan hai aaj puja main bhi nahi aaya???
kk-mummyji aaj 5 saal ke baad sharman ghar aayega toh iseliye su a surprise party arrange kar raha hai ,aur aap ko toh bata hai su apne bacho se bahut pyar karta hai ,dhruv ne uska sar business handle kar rah hai aur sharman apni degree complete karli aur ab toh woh bhi dhruv ko business mein help kar rega
veena- su akela sari party ki tayari kaise kar sakega??
kk-mummyji ashka aur siya dono su ko help kar rahi hai !
dadi-yeh sharman ki filght kab aayegi??
kk-sham ko 6 0clock uski land hogi aur 7oclock tak woh ghar mein hoga .
kk then goes to the hall to give prasad to everyone ,but she cant find su ,she is searching in the whole hall n her room but in vain su was not there ,kk get upset cos she cant find su anywhere
kk- siya beta ,su kaha hai ??
siya-aunty ,uncle toh terrace par hai
kk wonders why su is in terrace!!!
kk goes in terrace ,she is calling out su 's name and su is behind her then then hugs her tightly
kk-su yeh kya kar rahe ho??teen bacho ke baap ho aur
su-chup chup kk aaj main bahut khush hoon ,aaj mera beta 5 saal ke baad ise ghar mein kadam rakega
kk-janti hoon tum is duniya mein aapne 3 bacho se bahut pyar karte ho!
su-nahi ise duniya mein main sab se zayad tumse pyar karta hoon
kk-acha???
su-kyun koi shak???and hugs her more tightly n tries to kiss her and then suddenly siya n aashka enter to spoil the scene
su- softly tells kk tat he wont leave her in nite in the room
kk smiles n goes frm there
su -kay hai party ki tayari hogagi??
aashka-sar kaam hame de diya aur khud yahan mom ke saath romance kar rahe hai
su-nahi main toh tumrahi mom ko yeh bata raha tha ki sharman ka saugat kaise karna chahiye
siya n aashka- acha abb aap sar kaam ki giye hum dono palour ja rahe hai sham ki party ke liye
and finally sumeet is left to do the whole work
its 6 and the whole family is waiting for sharman
veena-kk sharman to receive karne kaun gaya hai ??
kk-mummyji dhruv gaya hai .
veena -itni time ho gaya hai dhruv aur sharman aab tak nahi aaye hai,su beta zara ph toh karna ,aur dhuv se pooch ki woh kaha hai ???sab mehman aa rahe hai!!!
su was abt to call but ,before tat he see dhruv standing on the doorway,
su- dhruv sharman kaha hai ???
dhruv is standing still like a pillar ,
su ask him where is sharman again n again ,abt sharman but dhruv is not saying anything ,
finally dhruv starts crying ...........su ,kk n the whole family is shock
wht happen ,??why was dhruv crying ????
to knw stay tune wid my f-f ,
i will be back wid the story,
thanks for reading
niki😃
Edited by wadhwaniki - 17 years agomeera-itna badad ghar par kisi ko bhi ek ph attend karne ka time nahi!!sara kaam mujhe hi karna par ta hai.
meera-Hello ,kaun???
shar-Hello,MAA....
mera-MAA????main maa nahi meera hu,aap kaun???
shar wants to play a prank on meera
shar-ji, main sharman ka dost hu ,kya shar ghar par hai??
meera-kaise dost ho aap ,aap ko bata nahi shar bhaiya ,toh itne saalo se melbourn mein rahete hai
shar-par usene toh mujhe se kaha tha ki woh bahut jald INDIA aa jayega!
meera-hai woh kal shaam ko panch baje ki flight se aa yege,aur unke honour mein su uncle ne ek surprise party bhi arrange ki hai ,aap zarur aana
shar-ofcourse,ofcourse
aaska -aaye meera kise bat kar rahi hai??
meera- koi shar bhaiya ka dost hai!
aashka is wondering ,cos shar's all frnds are in melbourne
aashka-mera zara ,uske ladke ka naam toh pooch?
meera(back on ph)-hello ,hello ,hello
di shayad usne ph cut kar diya hai!!
Back to present
shar- bas isse tarah muhhe party ke bare mein bata chala
siya n aashka iss meera ko tho hum nahi chodeye ,uski wajah se humari sari mehanat bekar gayi.
siya n aashka running behind meera to hit her,meera ran towards shar
shar-rehene do naa bachi haiaur agar yeh mujhe nahi batati toh kya aap sab ko itni khushi hoti,mujhe yun achanak dekhe ke???
su-haan,shar tum bikul sahi ho ,anjane mein he sahi meera ki wajah se hum sab ko itna acha surprise mila hai.
meera-shar bhaiya mein neaap ki help ki naa ,abb mera gift???
siya n aashka too spranged upon shar for their gifts!!
kk-meera,siya,aashka chup bichara mera beta itni door de aaya hai ,aur tum log iss bhi se hi tang karna shuru kar diya!!
aaj ke liye itna hi,
kal party so dont forget to wear ur best dress😆😆
love
niki😊
Edited by wadhwaniki - 17 years agokk-meera,siya,aashka chup bichara mera beta itni door de aaya hai ,aur tum log iss bhi se hi tang karna shuru kar diya!!
while kk was saying tat ,dhruv tells everyone tat he is getting late and he has to make a move ,
veen tells him to stay back,but dhruv tells tat he has to make a move(dhruv was thinking,siya bas ek baar mera naam lekar mujhe rok lo),on the other hand even siya wanted dhruv to stay back
then aashka softly whispers in siya's ear tat,
aashka-sirf tum bhai ko rok sakti ho!!!
siya-dhruv meri bat kaha sunega,jab usne dadi ki baat nahi suni.
aashka-dadi aur ek premika mein bahut farak hota hai (note tat siya n dhruv are childhood frnds,and love each other deeply)
siya-nahi,nahi aashka sab ke samane kaise??
aashka-aarey ek bar try toh karo!
siya-DHRUV!!!ruk jao naa
both dhruv and siya are looking into each others eyes
shar-AHEM,AHEM!!bhai late nahi ho rahe ho???
dhruv-haan!actually soch raha tha ki itni important meeting bhi nahi hai
everyone are having their lunch,the women serving n men are eating
siya-kisi ko juice chahiye??
shar,aashka,su scream out 'DHRUV KO '
dhruv n siya are blushing,siya was pouring juice in dhruvs glass and everyone are busy looking at dhruv n siya's xpressions ,siya starts blushing n then runs frm there ,everyone started laughing
everyone getting ready for the party ,
In SUKK's bedroom;
su is sitting on the bed n kk is getting ready n as usual su is busy looking n admiring kk's beauty,
kk-main kaise lag rahi hu??
su-as always beautiful,charming,adorable!.....mera toh maan kar raha hai ki..............
kk-ki kya........ sharam nahi aati hai tumhe teen teen bacho ke baap ho.
su-toh kya ek husband apni wife se thoda romance nahi kar sakta hai??
kk-tumse toh koi baato mein jeet hi nahi sakta hai,
su-janta hoon and then hugs her
kk-chalo bhi ,hum already party ke liye itne late ho chuke hai,
su-party koi 5kms door toh nahi hai bas hall mein hi toh hai
kk laughs and then she also hugs su😳
tats it frm me today,
but tom sukk are going to take a decision ,want to knw wht it is ......................
stay tune
love
niki😉
Edited by wadhwaniki - 17 years agoIN THE PARTY
dhruv is the host of the party ,and he request all the couples to join the dancefloor
su to kk-may i have the pleasure to dance wid the the beautiful lady
kk-smiles
dhruv and siya are also dancing,and sharman is searching for his maya
the spot light fall on both the couple ,and to give a good effect the background song is 'bahoo ke darmiya do pyar mil rahe hai' both dh-siy n su-kk are looking into each others eah others eyes .
just then a beautiful girl entered the party ,shar thinks tat he finally found his maya ,he was abt to go near the girl n ask her for the dance when suddenly he see tat he girl is having sindoor in her maang ,he undersood tat there is no vanaccy for him
all the sudden the lites r off ,the spot lite falls on shar n aashka then they start dancing on the song 'dil mein baji guitar',everyone enjoyed their dance
and finally the party was over
In su-kk bedroom
kk-aaj itne dino baad ghar ke saare log khush the
su-haan khush tho hoge hi,shar itne saalo baad ghar jo aaya hai
kk-hum sab itne mahino se shar ka ghar mein aane ka intezar kar rahe the aur aaj woh din aageya
su-hmm,par aab tum mujhe yeh batayo ki tum ka khena chahati ho??
kk-tumhe kaise bata chala ki main kuch kehna chahati hoon???
su-dil ki baat dil jaanta hai!!!
kk-aacha toh yeh batayo ki yeh dil kya chahata hai??
su-woh tho nahi jaanta hai ,par filhal mera dil tumse kuch chahata hai
kk- kya ??
su -tumhari ek smile ,ek hug,ek kiss
kk-su pls main serious hoon
su-aacha baba main jaanta hoon ki tum dhruv aur siya ki shaadi karana chahati ho(hey anku ur guess was rite)
kk-tumhe kaise bata chala
su-kaha tha naa 'dil ki baat dil si nahi chup thi hai,woh toh main tumse mazak kar raha tha
kk-toh theek hai tum subha dhruv se siya ke bare mein poch naa aur main siya se ,waise toh hum unki jawab jaante hai ,par rhir bhi ek formality ke liye hi sahi ,kyun su ???
no reply frm su ,kk turn backand find tat su is fast asleep,she looks at him n smiles n goes to sleep
love
niki
Edited by wadhwaniki - 17 years ago