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Awesome part. that was sooo long!!!!

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yuh neha! when I start typing I stop only when my idea comes to an end and it endsup with long part...sometimes feel like cut it but it cuts in wrong place so I change my mind.
Bear with me Plz! long parts and long story Embarrassed

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hey i just read this ff today and let me tell you YOU ROCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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hey

jsut read both ur ff's today.. they are awesome.. i love the length Wink .. i love how kripa is torturing him..

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ThanQ mansi!

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Part 11

"Saab! Chai garam garam Chai" the tea boy disturbed the dreaming couple.
Kripa blushed and moved away from Angad. Angad looked at boy disappointedly and said 'no'.
"Saab garam garam chai . Baarish mein maza ayega" the tea boy is pleading Angad. Angad smiled and looked naughtily at Kripa "Garam hooney ke liye chai ki zaroorat nahin".
Kripa angrily looked at Angad and smiled at the boy. The boy left disappointedly and confusingly exchanging looks at both. Angad smiled at Kripa and walked to his bike as rain turned to slight drizzle. Kripa followed him hiding her shy. Both silently rode for sometime. Angad also not anymore hurry now as he remembering Kripa's words about staying together is more important than going away somewhere in search of privacy. Kripa's touch is giving him more security now than ever before.
They reached Nivli, one of the hill stations on the way to Goa, after riding over hilly areas for couple of hours. Angad took inside the village and stopped in front of a small bungalow.
Kripa is puzzled but followed Angad. He took out some keys from his pocket and opened the doors. Kripa is surprised and asked "Yeh kiska ghar hai, Angad?"
"Tumhari nanand ka" Angad answered with naughty tone.
Kripa surprised without observing his sarcissism "Aaliyah ka?"
Angad turned to her and stared at her as she accepted his sister as her sister-in-law. Kripa looked confusingly at Angad and realized the hidden meaning in her question and blushed "Angad! Tum bhi na, wo mujhey 'bhabhi' bulati hai…so…..I…..issliye..…I mean…" she couldn't finish the sentence as she felt shy and walked inside to hide her feelings from Angad.
Angad smiled and thought in his mind "Bus Kripa! Kuch time aur chahiey tumhey mujhey poori tarhan accept kurney mein."
"Yeh resort Mamma ney Aaliyah ki shadi mein ussey gift diya tha. Aaliyah loves very much this location from her childhood." Angad explained about the house in that village. Kripa nodded her head. Angad walked into the kitchen to check if there is anything to eat in the fridge.
Kripa followed him.
"Tum fresh ho jaao, main kuch humarey liye garam, garam banata hoon." he winked at her and showed the guest room and bathroom. Kripa went into bathroom to freshen up.
Angad made coffee for both and heated some snacks left in the fridge. Kripa came out of bathroom and thanked Angad for hot coffee.
While having coffee Angad brought violin from another room and started playing the same song they hard just few hours ago from the tea stall. Kripa's face became red and she moved to the window to see outside and hide her expressions. Angad is playing and watching her from behind for few minutes. He started whistling the same song and dancing in the centre of the hall as if someone is in his hands dancing along with him.
Kripa turned to him and he winked at her and gestured to join him. She nodded her head from left to right. She is also enjoying his happiness by holding right elbow with left hand and right hand fingers rubbing behind right ear.
He walked slowly to her and her heart started beating fast and lowered her eyes but steeling eyes from him.

Hum bhi samajh rahey hai
Tum bhi samaj rahey ho…..hmmmm…

He whispered the last lines of the song and kissed her nose and stared into her eyes. She lowered her eyes with . "Jaldi Confess karona" he requested softly, she nodded her head and turned away to the window again. He kissed her on left shoulder and walked backwards into kitchen. She smiled and touched his kiss with her right hand after he disappears and closed eyes to feel the warmth. He bent from kitchen and observed Kripa and smiled thinking in his mind " Lagta hai abb seedhey raastey parr aa rahi hai"
He cooked some haka noodles for both while she standing at the kitchen entrance and watching him cooking. He smelled the food and walked into dining room looking at Kripa "You are so lucky achasa pati-cook mil raha hai, soch lo."
She smiled and followed him "Wohi soch rahi hoon Angad! Apney ghar mein tumhey pati sey zyada cook bananey ki." She rolled her eyes and stopping laugh by touching teeth with tongue in closed mouth. Angad placed the bowl on table and put his hands on waist nodding his head as he thinking to say something. He walked to her "cook jaisa kaam bhi chaleyga taakey roz tumhey kuch aisi cheez banakey doo keey tumharey mann mein merey liye pyar badh jaaye."
Both laughed.
"Tum koi moukha chodtey nahin" Kripa commented while serving noodles in two plates. "I can't" he tied his hands around her waist from behind.
"chalo romance band karo, noodles thundey hojaiengey," Kripa removed his hands and started eating "Mmmm, really! tum bahut achey cook ho" she praised him and enjoying hot noodles in rainy weather. Both finished their supper and relaxed in the sofa.
Angad switched TV and sat besides her. He grabbed her as she got up to move away from him.
"Main ney tumhey nahin kaha jaaney ko, baitho" Angad pulled her in his lap and tied with hands.
""Yeh thodi kum hai khaney sey" Kripa rolled her eyes and struggling to get up.
"Dikhadoon khana kaisey hota hai?" he sounded naughty making her shy.
"Angad! Please, chodo. Yeh meri ghalti hai tumharey saath bina sochey, samjhey chali aaiee" Kripa is pleading and still struggling.
"Nahin chodunga, seedhey baitho, mein kuch nahin karoonga promise!" Angad firmly told his decision. Kripa stared at him for a moment and stopped trying to release herself. He put her head on his shoulder and surrounded her with hands and watching TV humming some song. Kripa went to sleep in no time and Angad put her on bed, covered with blanket, and closed the door walking into another room.

"Goodmorning sweety!" Angad wished when Kripa entered into kitchen.
"Morning Angad! Jaldi uth gaye ho? Nice coffee smell" Kripa wished him back.
"Soya kahan? Tum uss kamerey mein aur main iss kamerey mein Akeley, neend kaisey aayegi?" he winked at her pouring coffee into two cups.
"Phir shuru hogaiey" Kripa hit her head with right hand and took coffee.
Angad smiled "Aaj mein tumhey aisi jagah ley kur jaaoonga keey tum surely appreciate karogi."
"Kaunsi?" she raised her eyebrows two times.
"Ratnagiri, Mango plantation" you will love it as you love mangoes" Angad explained about the place to visit.
Kripa is excited and Angad came to her and said "Iss baar main nahin chakney waala"
Kripa blushed "Angad! Tum bhi". Angad laughed and asked her to get ready with one of Aaliyah's dresses.
Kripa came back with nice pink and blue long sleeves and rajasthani collared shalwar with loose hair. Kripa tied her hands around Angad's waist while riding and Angad pressed her face to him with his right hand. Kripa removed his hand "Concentrate on road, MY Boy"
Angad stopped the bike on the sideway "phirsey bolo."
"Tum har baat ka koyi na koyi matlab nikaaltey ho" Kripa showed anger.
"Pyar mein sab kuch pyar hi nazar aata hai, Kya karoon" he winked at her.
"Jaao main nahin aati tumharey saath" she pretended anger and walked into the fields on the side of the road. Angad parked the bike and followed her.
"Chalo, Sorry kehdiya, aur nahin sataoonga promise," Angad started pleading her.
"After couple of minutes she agreed and both headed to the plantation. Kripa is excited to see the plantation. She picked some fruits and thanked Angad to show such a beautiful place. Angad smiled at her excitement. They had some delicious Goan food for lunch.
From there they rode through hilly Western ghat roadway for an hour. Angad parked at a beautiful hilly and beach place on Kripa's request.
She ran into the hill side as he following her. "Wow what beautiful scenery" Kripa stretched her hands and swirled enjoying the location.
Angad is enjoying her excitement and lay on the grass. She came to him after few minutes and noticed he is taking a nap, "lagta hai raat mein such much nahin soya" She talked in her mind.
She bent on his face and blew air on his face. Her mind felt some mischievous thoughts again as he didn't respond for her blow. She feather touched his forehead, nose and stopped at upper lip and watched his face longingly. She bent to kiss his lips. Angad opened his eyes and pressed her face towards him. He kissed her passionately for a moment and lifted her face. Kripa became red with shy and ran away from him. She turned to him. He got up and stretched his hands. She nodded her face from left to right. He gestured at her and she couldn't stop to run to him. He hugged her passionately and kissed all over her face "Flying kiss sey real kiss tak aaney mein itna dair? " he whispered in her ears, she hid her face in his neck fold. "Wo bhi keh hi do ab jiska merey dil ko intaizaar hai"Angad kissed her hair.
She lifted her head and looked into his eyes and caressed his face slowly, I LOVE YOU……., I'M IN LOVE…., I'M IN LOVE and ran away from him.
She shouted I'M IN LOVE…., I'M IN LOVE' and swirled.
Angad stood with excitement and is watching her. She excitedly ran all over the place and hugged him and kissed his cheeks passionately.

(I imagine this song only sung by Kripa but cdn't make it as I'm not good v-mix or audio-mix experty ....hope u like it)

http://www.dishant.com/album/Dhadkan.html

I am in love, I am in love, I am in love
I am in love, I am in love, I am in love
Na Na Karte Pyaar Hai Mai Kar Gayi, Kar Gayi, Kar Gayi
Na Na Karte Pyaar Hai Mai Kar Gayi, Kar Gayi, Kar Gayi
O Tune Kiya Kya Yaad, Haay Mai Mar Gayi, Mar Gayi, Mar Gayi
Na Na Karte Pyaar Oy Mai Kar Gaya, Kar Gaya, Kar Gaya
O Tune Kiya Aitbaar, Haay Mai Mar Gaya, Mar Gaya, Mar Gaya
Na Na Karte Pyaar Hai Mai Kar Gayi, Kar Gayi, Kar Gayi
I am in love, I am in love, I am in love
I am in love, I am in love, I am in love

Mehki Hawayen, Yeh Behki Fizayen, Yeh Pagal Sama Kuch Kahe
Hum Hai Akele, Aa Baahon Mein Le Le, Ke Jaage Hai Armaan Naye
Tu Seene Se Lag Jaa Mere, Mai Tujhko Chupa Lu Kahin
Yeh Dhadkan Meri Keh Rahi, Ke Ab Door Jaana Nahin
Sunke Teri Yeh Baat, Ankeh Meri Bhar Gayi, Bhar Gayi, Bhar Gayi
Sunke Teri Yeh Baat, Ankeh Meri Bhar Gayi, Bhar Gayi, Bhar Gayi
O Tune Kiya Kya Yaad, Haay Mai Mar Gayi, Mar Gayi, Mar Gayi
Na Na Karte Pyaar Hai Mai Kar Gayi, Kar Gayi, Kar Gayi

Mai Tumhe Chaahon, Tumhiko Sarahoon, Tumhari Main Pooja Karun
Dil To Hameshaa, Yeh Maange Duaaen, Ke Baahon Mein Teri Marun
Mai Tumhe Chaahon, Ha Tumhiko Sarahoon, Tumhari Main Pooja Karun
Dil To Hameshaa, Yeh Maange Duaaen, Ke Baahon Mein Teri Marun
Zameen Aasmaan Keh Rahen, Tu Mere Liye Hai Bani
Hai Kismat Se Humko Mili, Mohabbat Ki Yeh Roshni
Ho Gayee Tujhpe Fidaa, Main Suli Chadh Gayee, Chadh Gayee, Chadh Gayee
Ho Gayee Tujhpe Fidaa, Main Suli Chadh Gayee, Chadh Gayee, Chadh Gayee
O Tune Kiya Kya Yaad, Haay Mai Mar Gayi, Mar Gayi, Mar Gayi
Na Na Karte Pyaar Oy Mai Kar Gaya, Kar Gaya, Kar Gaya
O Tune Kiya Aitbaar, Haay Mai Mar Gaya, Mar Gaya, Mar Gaya
Na Na Karte Pyaar Hai Mai Kar Gayi, Kar Gayi, Kar Gayi
I am in love, I am in love, I am in love
I am in love, I am in love, I am in love
I am in love, I am in love, I am in love
I am in love, I am in love, I am in love

Angad lifted her and swirled as she ran into his hands. Both kissed each other with passion and love.



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