Joined: 08 November 2006
hey guys i thought to start a fanfic it is a story of a small town girl gauri she belongs to a middle class family he had a father alok and a young sister kaya and he also had a brother but they dint have a good relationshp with him gauri is a very sweet and simple girl and deserves a loving and caring husband so read to know that what the fate has store for her part 1   ; ; it s tarts with durga puja then .............
alok...beta kaya kaha reh gai thi itni der kyu laga di
kaya..baba voh traffic mein phas gai thi
alok..beta tumhari behen kaha hai and a voice from the back says gauri ma ki puja main gauri kaise nahi aati
Gauri....baba gauri ma ki puja mein me kese nahi aati (she was wearing a simple but a nice churidaar suit with matching chodiya and earings ) when aarit was over
Gauri..acha baba mein office chalti hoon thoda time hi liya tha
alok.. acha beta aur haan aaj sham ko mahen mere dost mumbai se aa rahe hai sare parivaar ke saath sham ko jaldi aajan unke aane ki taiyaari bhi karni hai haan aur shiv beta bhi aa raha hai bohaut chota tha jab dekha tha patanahi ab kaisa dikhta hoga kher tum ghar jaldi aa jana
Gauri..kya bade papa aa rehe hai vo bhi pure parivaar ke saath kitni khush ho main ki aapko bata bhi nahi sakti acha baba mein chalti ho shaam ko jaldi aa jaoingi bya
alok..acha beta bye
and there shows shiv wearing goegles and putting his stylish jacket on its none other then shiv (iqbal khan) and there gauri thinks that how does he looks and is he will be a good and nice guy and then there is a double screen one side gauri thinking and othere side shiv a hot and a handsome guy .
ok guyz do tell me should i continue or should stop it here do reply soon i am waiting
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