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fanfic _ kya yehi pyaar hai updated part

tanyaaaa26 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 14 March 2007 at 5:14am | IP Logged

hey guys i thought to start a  fanfic  it is a story of a small town girl gauri she belongs to a middle class family he had a father alok and a young sister kaya and he also had a brother but they dint have a good relationshp with him gauri is a very sweet and simple girl and deserves a loving and caring husband so read to know that what the fate has store for her   part 1           ; ;     it s tarts with durga puja then .............  

   alok...beta kaya kaha reh gai thi itni der kyu  laga di

 kaya..baba voh traffic mein phas gai thi         

alok..beta tumhari behen kaha hai and a voice from the back says gauri ma ki puja main gauri kaise nahi  aati

Gauri....baba gauri ma ki puja mein me kese nahi aati (she was wearing a simple but a nice churidaar suit with matching chodiya and earings ) when aarit was over

Gauri..acha baba mein office chalti hoon thoda time hi liya tha

alok.. acha beta aur haan aaj sham ko mahen mere dost mumbai se aa rahe hai sare parivaar ke saath sham ko jaldi aajan unke aane ki taiyaari bhi karni hai haan aur shiv beta bhi aa raha hai bohaut chota tha jab dekha tha patanahi ab kaisa dikhta hoga  kher tum ghar jaldi aa jana

Gauri..kya bade papa aa rehe hai vo bhi pure parivaar ke saath    kitni khush ho main   ki aapko bata bhi nahi sakti acha baba mein chalti ho shaam ko jaldi aa jaoingi bya

alok..acha beta bye

and there shows shiv wearing goegles and putting his stylish jacket on its none other then shiv (iqbal khan) and there gauri thinks that  how does he looks  and is he will be a good and nice guy and then there is a double screen one side gauri thinking and othere side shiv a hot and a handsome guy .

ok guyz do tell me should i continue or should stop it here do reply soon i am waiting Confused

Edited by tanyaaaa26 - 11 March 2008 at 2:05am

prab_rockinn Goldie

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Posted: 14 March 2007 at 5:33am | IP Logged
ya go ahead.....
sounds nice....

sum2005 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 14 March 2007 at 7:39am | IP Logged
please do continue with a long update so that we will hook to it Embarrassed
fida-cute Goldie

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Posted: 14 March 2007 at 7:55am | IP Logged
good start Clap rock on Wink
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Posted: 14 March 2007 at 12:11pm | IP Logged
4 sure continue it Big smile
Rock_Star IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 14 March 2007 at 12:19pm | IP Logged
good start Clap continue soon
pritig Senior Member

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Posted: 14 March 2007 at 12:37pm | IP Logged
wow1! plz cont!!!! Smile
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Posted: 14 March 2007 at 7:38pm | IP Logged
it is great Clap ........ plzzzzzzzzz cont soon

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