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Pyaar ki Kayamat-Full 17th epi page 20!! (Page 6)

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Posted: 17 March 2007 at 4:21pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by Mrs.SalmanKhan


Was it too boring?

NOPE!!! I loved it!
Did you like it?

Liked it? ConfusedI LOVED IT!
Do you think Arjun and Kajjal are.... Wink

They are maybe having some romantic moments! I guess.
Whats going to happen next?

I can't guess! You are just too amazing. I want to read more!!!
please leave comments Big smile

You are an amazing writer! Doc continue soon!!!

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Posted: 17 March 2007 at 9:09pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by uru_hershey

Originally posted by Mrs.SalmanKhan


Was it too boring?

NOPE!!! I loved it!
Did you like it?

Liked it? ConfusedI LOVED IT!
Do you think Arjun and Kajjal are.... Wink

They are maybe having some romantic moments! I guess.
Whats going to happen next?

I can't guess! You are just too amazing. I want to read more!!!
please leave comments Big smile

You are an amazing writer! Do continue soon!!!

HugHugHug awhhh thnkss hun'! u made my dayLOL Will definitly continue soonEmbarrassed

 

 

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Posted: 18 March 2007 at 12:28am | IP Logged

First of all, I'd just like to say thnksssss sooo much for the lovely comments u guys have been sending me! Luv you all Embarrassed and starting from 2day im going to start doing a small recap thing.
6th epi;;
recap: Last epi, Anita and Aaryan had danced and everyone started clapping for them at the resturant.
Aaryan and Anita were eating there butterchicken and chatting about what had just happened.
Anita: I never noticed all those ppl were watching us.
Aaryan: Me neither, it's hard to keep up with this world when all I can see is u.

Anita was about to say something but before she could
another girl nd boy comes out of no where and says
Gurl:Wowee, butterchikken without us?
Anita: LOL LOL Nahien Nahien, Kajjal theres enough for you and Arjun. (It was Kajjal and Arjun!)

Aaryan: Arjun Kajjal pull up sum seats, theres enof food but I'll order some more drinks.
Kajjal and Arjun: Arrite.

Everyone starts eating, while Anita's eating she starts thinking about wht she just saw, Arjun with his hands around Kajjal, Kajjal and Arjun smiling all goofyly. Aaryan notices too. Thats why he asked Anita to come with him, over to the side.
Aaryan: Did you see that?
Anita: Arjun and Kajjal? yup I noticed that! Hand in hand LOL LOL
Aaryan: Saach mei, they look nice together ehh?
Anita: LOL LOL suree. Lets head back b4 they cum looking for us

Anita and Aaryan were walking when Anita slipped and for balance without thinking she grabbed Aaryan. Aaryan fell and Anita fell on top of here. Embarrassed
For a moment they couldnt stop looking at each other
After a moment of gazing into each others eyes. Anita got up.
Anita: Sorry, I was going to fall and I just grapped you-
Aaryan didnt let her finish
Aaryan: No need for sorry, especially since I enjoyed it. It was a beautiful moment.
Anita shyly runs away.
Anita runs to her table smiling and sits dow.
Arjun:Oii hoii, why u smiling so much? Kya kia Aaryan nei?
Anita: ummm...nothing.

Aaryan also smiling comes and starts eating.
Arjun mischieviously starts singing "Humko Deewana Karge" Kajjal starts blushing, alot.
Kaajjal:Anita, I think we should start walking home now. Aunti-Ji had said to not be late.
Anita:Oh yes!!! Aaryan Arjun, this was a lovely afternoon (or evening, whatever 6:30-7:30 is ) But now we gotta rush.
Aaryan: We'll drop you guys off.
Anita: No no, its alrite you guys finish eating, we'll go.
Aaryan: Are you sure?
Anita: yes.

Anita and Kajjal say bye and head home. . .
******************End of Epi*********************
Did you like todays epi?
Was it long enough?
Do you think Anita likes Aaryan now too?
How long will it take Aaryan to confess his love?
....Keep reading Anita and Aaryan's "Pyaar Ki Kayamat"...
Please leave comments Clap
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Posted: 18 March 2007 at 2:10am | IP Logged
nice part actually loved it
do continue soon
aaryan bhi koi kam flirt nahi hai
aaryan ki confession tou app hi karwa sakti hain since you are the writer
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Posted: 18 March 2007 at 9:51am | IP Logged

Originally posted by Mrs.SalmanKhan


Did you like todays epi?

I liked this one! I think you are improving every part.
Was it long enough?

Yah for my need I liked it.
Do you think Anita likes Aaryan now too?

Obviously, She blushed and if she hates him, then why would she keep on blushing.
How long will it take Aaryan to confess his love?

Depends on you! Depends on your thinking. But don't make it too late. Till he gets married to that wierdo aayesha. 
....Keep reading Anita and Aaryan's "Pyaar Ki Kayamat"...
Please leave comments Clap

Your part was great! as always. Can't wait till the next part!

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Posted: 18 March 2007 at 12:41pm | IP Logged
aww I love you guys LOL LOL LOL thnkss for the lovely comments. will continue soon. and I dont think Aaryan will ever marry Ayesha Embarrassed
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Posted: 18 March 2007 at 6:24pm | IP Logged
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Not many people are reading my fanfic, so I've decided not to continue it unless I got sum reply's bakk. Sorry to all the ppl tht wanted me to continue. I might continue if i get sum replies bakk Cry
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Posted: 18 March 2007 at 7:14pm | IP Logged
aw noo.. i like it.. its a good fanfic.. i am just too bzy to comment sometimes. and i didn't have my laptop with me today.. and i cant comment without my laptop.. hehe

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