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Posted: 17 years ago

πŸ˜ƒ"HELLO, FRNDS SORRY I AM WRITING THIS IN CAPITAL LETTER,BUT JUST WANTED TO HIGHLIGHT THIS THING THAT LATEST UPDATED are PART 53ON PG 28AND PART 54ON PAGE 29 , n till part 4 is on first page as U CAN SEE TURN TO THE 2ND PAGE TO READ from PART 5" hi everyone, you will laugh at me when u will get tht today i spent all my day in writing fanfic for KT....you all somewhere mayb has read the fanfic of KT part 1 to 5..... but in this tensed situation, where i can see everybody is posting everything bout KT's rape n her rapist... i thought to change everyone's mood, by a new topic.. Pari is 1 of my fav. character in kyunki.. she is smart, cute..i really like her role... so lets introduce a new love story now... So frnds,here is the 1st part of it...

P- [it's morning, n pari is getting ready 4 goin to archita's dance performance, she is quickly coming downstairs, tulsi is standing near the dining table], T- are pari beta nashta to kar le[ n by saying this she looks back n gets surprised,this time pari is not in her usual cool jacket n jeans, instead she is wearing a beautiful suit...n her hair is open] [ tulsi smiles at this n then gayatri n daksha comes n looks at pari n says] D- are vah pari! aaj tu kuch kuch hota hai ki kajol se veer zaara ki preity zinta kaise ban gayi..[then gayatri n tulsi smiles] G- arre haan pari aaj to tu bohot acchi lag rahi hai ... P- [feels shy, n 2 get out of this shyness she says] accha tulsi daadi main chalti hoon, varna aaj archita mera khoon pe legi.. T- are nashta to karti jaa, P- nahi dadi main vahin kuch kha loongi...

[Daksha says to tulsi] D- arre tulsi dekh dekh hamare ghar ki larkiyan TV seriels ke saas bahuon se kitni zayada better lagti hai dekh.. [Tulsi n gayatri giggles].. [Tulsi then suddenly says] T- ohh ho! baaton baaton mein to main ek baat batana bhool hi gayi, G- kya tulsi, T- aaj aapne mausam dekha chachi, kitna khrab hai, lagta hai barish hone vali hai.. aur ye dono pagal larkiyan bina chatri ke chali gayin. D- araaraa tulsi, tu kyun aise nirupa roy ki tarah pareshan hoti hai... agar aaj pari barish mein pari bheegegi naa to ekdum raja hindustani ki karishma kapoor lagegi... main to prathna karti hoon ki aaj meri iss aishwarya ko uska abhishek mil hi jaae...aur vaise bhi vo to car mein hi gayi hai naa to bheegegi kaise. [Gaytri n tulsi starts laughing] G- kya didi aap bhi....

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Posted: 17 years ago
part 2 with the continuation of the first part [D- main to prathna karti hoon ki aaj meri iss aishwarya ko uska abhishek mil hi jaae...aur vaise bhi vo to car mein hi gayi hai naa to bheegegi kaise. [Gaytri n tulsi starts laughing] G- kya didi aap bhi.......[ pari is driving n then tiny drops of rain starts falling,n then pari's mobile starts ringing] Archita- hello pari... archita bol rahi hoon, aur kitne der mein aaegi, mera performance next hai..P- are stupid, koshish to kar rahi hoon naa, jaldi aane ki, vaise bhi abhi barish shuru ho gayi hai..A- hello?hello? P- hello? kya hua kuch sunaiyi nahi de raha kya? hello? ohh god main mobile charge karna bhool gayi thi. s**t.A- lagta hai ye pagal nahi aaegi, tabhi bahane bana rahi thi.. (archita's class mate)- chalo archita tumhara turn aa gaya, jaao tumhara group wait kar raha hai. A- yaa ok.[while going to her group, she mutters),pari ki bacchi dekh loongi tujhe...[pari was driving suddenly her car stops]... P- ohh gaud ye car ko bhi issi waqt kharab hona tha.. gaud ab main kaise show pe time par kaise pohochungi...[ pari suddenly notices tht it has started raining heavily, but fortunatly where she parked her car there was a temple near, pari looks at it,n then she puts the duppatta on her head n goes inside the mandir, but she completly gets wet. she goes near His statue n prays, then a pandit comes n gives her prashad, pari thinks to call tulsi but her phone was not working.. so she asks the pandit ]P- pandit ji,kya yahan aas paas koi telephone booth hai kya,actually mera phone aur car khrab ho gaye hai.. so kya aap meri madat kar denge.... Edited by duyus - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
part3:
with the continuation of part 2 [pari thinks to call tulsi but her phone was not working.. so she asks the pandit ]P- pandit ji,kya yahan aas paas koi telephone booth hai kya,actually mera phone aur car khrab ho gaye hai.. so kya aap meri madat kar denge....
Pandit[PT]- haan beta! yahan mandir se thore aage jaake tumhe ek telephone booth nazar aa jaayega.P-(smiles)thank you.[pari keeps the duppata on her head, n starts walking towards the telephone booth..]P- lo. telephone booth aa gaya.[ she gets inside and calls  at SN,tulsi picks up the phone]P-hello, dadi main pari bol rahi hoon..T- are beta tu kahan hai archita ka do baar phone aa chuka hai vo keh rahi thi ki show over ho chuka hai aur tera koi pata nahi... P-[ pari was talking to tulsi suddenly she saw a white maruti car stoped near the telephone booth.. she looked at it 4 a while n then she again started talking] tulsi dadi vo kya hai naa ki car khrab ho gayi hai, aur main aaj apna mobile charge karna bhul gayi thi..main abhi archita ke college nahi jaa paaungi..aur main yahan kaali mata ka ek mandir hai vahan se thori door ek telephone booth se bol rahi hoon..dadi aap kisi mechanic ko bol dijiiyega ki yahan pe pohonche, aur car repair kar de. main auto se aa jaaoongi]..T- haan theek hai lekin tu apna khayal rakhna.P-ok dadi.[and she puts the phone down, and as she was about to open the door of the T.booth, she hears some voice n then she see tht some studs types are beating a boy...Pari gets afraid n she stands inside the T.booth n watches everything. suddenlly the front door of the car opens...n a guy comes out from the driving seat...n he moves 2wards the T.booth,pari gets more afraid..then very roughly he opens the door]n everybody(all those studs stops beating the guy n looks at the T.booth, pari looks terrified]somebody from the studs says Rahul, the guy turned n see his frnd..... Rahul- haan kya hai? ye larka ab principal ke saamne apna muh nahi kholega... [rahul gives a devilish smile]
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Posted: 17 years ago
Well done....Nice script.Thanks yaar.I really njoyed
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Posted: 17 years ago
i luv it. really nice script. looks like you spent a lot of time on it. keep up the good work πŸ‘πŸΌ
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Posted: 17 years ago

part 4 [with the continuation of the 3rd part [suddenlly the front door of the car opens...n a guy comes out from the driving seat...n he moves 2wards the T.booth,pari gets more afraid..then very roughly he opens the door]n everybody(all those studs stops beating the guy n looks at the T.booth, pari looks terrified]somebody from the studs says Rahul, the guy turned n see his frnd..... Rahul- haan kya hai? ye larka ab principal ke saamne apna muh nahi kholega... [rahul gives a devilish smile]......

[ now rahul turns around and looks at pari, who is already afraid] R- kya hua? aise kyu dekh rahi ho, koi matinee sho chal raha hai kya? HAAN? jaao ghar jaao? P-[tries to gain some courage and speaks up] dekho, tum log uss larke ko iss tarah maar rahe ho, tum logo mein koi insaaniyat hai yaa nahi? R- madam, jis baare mein aap kuch nahi jaanti, bekar mein apna waqt kharab mat karo. samjhi.NOW GET LOST[he shouts at her n pari gets afraid]
[n then somebody from his frnds says]...Rahul lets go.[then he sits in the car leaves the place, then pari looks at the boy who was ailing in pain..pari helps him n takes him to the hospital]....n then she comes back home...[scene now shifts to SN to Archita,Pari n other members, when pari enters the living room she looks a bit tensed, then archita comes] A- aagaye madam,[pari was in some thought n when archita talks to her she suddenly comes out of it], P- haan bol,A- tune mujhe promise kiya tha ki tu mere sho par aaegi..aur aayi nahi..P- are main kya karti yaar main to nikal gayi thi par raaste mein car kharab ho gaya tha..A- haan pata hai? tulsi dadi ne bata diya tha. P- archita aaj pata hai jab main telephone booth se baat kar rahi thi naa[n she tells everything wat happened there] A- kyaa? aise larko se zara door hi rehena chahiye? they r dangerous u kno? chal tu bohot bheeg gayi hai jaake change kar le. P-(smiles), ok.

Edited by duyus - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
seriously appreciate it, really good script
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Posted: 17 years ago

part 5:- with the continuation of 4th part[[n she tells everything wat happened there] A- kyaa? aise larko se zara door hi rehena chahiye? they r dangerous u kno? chal tu bohot bheeg gayi hai jaake change kar le. P-(smiles), ok.

[next day pari,archita n mayank goes to a shopping mall] M- pari mujhe nayi toy chahiye,A- mayank pahele pari ke liye naye kapre le lein phir,M-nahi mujhe abhi chahiye..P- archita tu ek kaam kar, tu mayank ko lekar toys shop chali jaa, main akele jakar hi kapre kharid loongi n then i will come back. A- theek hai. chalo mayank.[pari goes to the 2nd floor, an as she enters the lift she gets surprised to see rahul there...pari gets annoyed n somewhere afraid also.. rahul looks at her n passes a devilish smile, but pari ignores her..then rahul come closer to her n do not say anything.. but pari feels uncomfortable n constantly ignores him.. n then the lift door opens.. n she quiclky steps out of the lift,n for a minite she looks back and see tht rahul was standing inside the life n looking at her constantly n slowly the lift door closes]...[after an hour of shopping she thinks] P- arre ye archita or mayank kahan reh gaye, abhi tak aaye kyun nahi..[she goes to the ground floor where she last talk with archita...[then pari calls archita]A-hello?
P- archita,main pari bol rahi hoon? kahan ho tum aur mayank? [in a nervous tone] A-pari, mayank kahin chala gaya hai, pata nahi kahan mujhe mil nahi raha hai..P- WAT? archita tujhe uska dhyaan rakhna chahiye? accha pehele tu vahin aaja, jahan humne aakri baar baat ki thi? lift ke paas.. A-[in a nervous tone], haan aa rahi hoon? [then pari n archita meets] P-archita, mayank kaise chala gaya.. A- pata nahi mujhe, main uske liye khilone dekh rahi thi.. tab achanak kahin chala gaya.P- tu aisa kar use rite mein dhoond main use upar jaakar dhoondti hoon[ when pari goes upstairs in that same palce where she was shopping for clothes she gets shocked to see mayank sitting on the floor n crying, n rahul is standing near to him, pari this time gets annoyed n goes near rahul.. as he turned back he see pari is standing behind him, he was bout to say something then pari slaps him.. n she says] P- TUM APNE AAP KO SAMJHTE KYA HO?HAAN ?tumhe sharam nahi aati ek bacche pe haath uthate hue..yaad rakhna jo log kamzoro pe haath utha kar khud ko strong samjhte hai unse zyada kamzor insan iss duniya mein nahi hota[ rahul looks at her n keep on smiling,] P- tumse zayada besharam maine kahin nahi dekha, jo thapar khane ke baad bhi muskura raha ho,[ then mayank stands up from the floor.. n says] M- pari, ise mat maro,plzz, isne kuch nahi kiya... main gir gaya tha to ye mujhe utha raha tha..ye mera dost hai[ pari looks embarassed n she looks at the ground] Rahul looks at her n says- jab maine tumhe peheli baar dekha to usi waqt mujhe laga ki tum ek bawakuf larki ho,[ pari looks at him apologetically]haath mera uth sakta tha, par main aurton pe haath nahi uthata...aur haan ek aur baat jis larke ki kal tum itni vakalat kar rahi thi naa,aur use hospital pohonchaya...usne exams ke papers leak kiye the aur principal ko hamara naam bataya tha, P-[pari gets shocked]i'm sorry...mujhe tumhari baat pehele sun leni chahiye the.[rahul then smiles at her n then he looks behind and looks at mayank...then archita comes from the back n looks at mayank then rahul leaves the palce.n pari looks at him n smiles...

Edited by duyus - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Part 6th with the continuation of 5th part[P-[pari gets shocked]i'm sorry...mujhe tumhari baat pehele sun leni chahiye the.[rahul then smiles at her n then he looks behind and looks at mayank...then archita comes from the back n looks at mayank then rahul leaves the palce.n pari looks at him n smiles.....
[scene shifts from the S.mall to SN...pari, archita n mayank returns home,it's night n every1 are sitting n having dinner, pari was sitting there but was lost in wat happened in the S.mall, then tulsi suddenly looks at her n says]T- pari? [pari was lost in the thought..so she didn't listened to her, then KT as she was sitting beside her, slowly took her finger n dipped it in hot dal(pulses)] P-ouch? KT tu maar khaeygi, sach mein [KT laughs n eklavya looks at her with a smile] Tulsi- maar Krishna ko nahi tujhe parni chahiye[other members in the family looks at pari] P-kyun dadi? maine kya kiya[ she asks with all the innocence in her face]T- aahhaa aa tune kya kiya? kitne der se bula rahi hoon tujhe, par tu pata nahi, apni hi duniya mein khoyee hui hai..[ to deny the thing, pari argues] nahi nahi dadi, main to yehi hoo...[KT suddenly interuppts] KT- accha to ye bataiye madam jab main aapka haath dal mein dubo rahi thi tab aap kinke khyaaon mein thi..zara hamein bhi bataiye. Tulsi-KT? tu maar khaaegi, chup chap khana kaa..[KT innocently teases pari]...[Daksha sitting next to tulsi in a very shallow voice says] D- arrrara tulsi maine kaha tha naa, dekha ye Madhuri Dixit apna Dr. nene dhoond kar aayi hai. dekha. Tulsi-chachi aap bhi naa, aisa kuch nahi hai.. D-arre tulsi maine duniya dekhi hai, urti chidiya ke pankh gin leti hoon main...[Tulsi giggles slightly].......
[scene now shifts to Rahul sitting in his bedroom n working on his laptop....when he was in the mall, he took some pics of pari n tht he was watching in laptop n remembering everything..the day she met him in telephone booth n was afraid from him n the next day she slapped him] [then he thinks] Rahul- aaj peheli baar mujh par kisi ne haath uthaya, but i am not feeling bad. why? kyun itni yaad aa rahi ho tum? who r u? Lagta hai ab tumse milna hi parega. kuch to baat hai tumme... Edited by duyus - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Part7..wid the continuation of the 6th part[[scene now shifts to Rahul sitting in his bedroom n working on his laptop....when he was in the mall, he took some pics of pari n tht he was watching in laptop n remembering everything..the day she met him in telephone booth n was afraid from him n the next day she slapped him] [then he thinks] Rahul- aaj peheli baar mujh par kisi ne haath uthaya, but i am not feeling bad. why? kyun itni yaad aa rahi ho tum? who r u? Lagta hai ab tumse milna hi parega. kuch to baat hai tumme...]....[next morning..tulsi,damini,KT were praying to tulsi plant,then shobha comes from outside n everyone looks at her and gets surprised n happy..shobha prays to god n then tulsi she says] T- are shobha, tu kab aayi? Sh- bas mamma kal hi mumbai pohonchi hoon, kuch zaroori kaam tha, actually mummy ji iss baar ke election mei jeet gayi hai...to unhone ek party rakhi hai..aur main aap sab ko invite karne aayi hoon, G- arre vah shobha, ye to bohot acchi baat sunayi tune, party kab hai? Sh- aaj? isiliye to aap sabko invite karne aayi hoon[everybody smiles] Sh- vaise mummy,pari kahan hai..T-beta vo andar hai.tu jaake mil e usse,SH-[smiles] ok. [scene shifts to pari's room, where pari was getting ready..pari was combing her hair n watching herself in the mirror suddenly she in the mirror, tht rahul is standing there..she gets shocked n looks back,then she thinks] P- ye kya ho raha hai mujhe main kyun use har pal dekh rahi hoon. why?[suddenly some1 knocks the door] P- come in. [it is shobha],P-mummy app?[she gets surprised, n shobha smiles at her, then both hug ech other]P- mummy app kab aayi? SH- bas abhi?[she notices pari's clothes]are vah pari?kya baat hai?aajkal western kapre chodke indian style kab se apna liya?[pari smiles at it] P- vo mamma, aise hi. SH- hmmm lagta hai, teri dadi se bolkar teri shadi ki baat chalani paregi?kyun? [Pari feels shy] P- kya mummy aap bhi? main shadi vadi nahi karungi bas? SH- accha meri maa theek hai. accha sun teri dadi election mein jeet gayi hai. [pari shouts in excitement]P-WOW, Sh- uff, chilaa mat, aur sun aaj hummne party throw ki hai, saare politicians, industrialists aa rahe hai...maine Maa aur baki sabko bata diya hai..tu bhi shaam ko taiyaar ho jana.[pari again wid excitement] OK MUMMY[n she hugs shobha, n both smiles]