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Big smile"HELLO, FRNDS SORRY I AM WRITING THIS IN CAPITAL LETTER,BUT JUST WANTED TO HIGHLIGHT THIS THING THAT LATEST UPDATED are PART 53ON PG 28AND PART 54ON PAGE 29 , n till part 4 is on first page as U CAN SEE TURN TO THE 2ND PAGE TO READ from PART 5" hi everyone, you will laugh at me when u will get tht today i spent all my day in writing fanfic for KT....you all somewhere mayb has read the fanfic of KT part 1 to 5..... but in this tensed situation, where i can see everybody is posting everything bout KT's rape n her rapist... i thought to change everyone's mood, by a new topic.. Pari is 1 of my fav. character in kyunki.. she is smart, cute..i really like her role... so lets introduce a new love story now... So frnds,here is the 1st part of it...

P- [it's morning, n pari is getting ready 4 goin to archita's dance performance, she is quickly coming downstairs, tulsi is standing near the dining table], T- are pari beta nashta to kar le[ n by saying this she looks back n gets surprised,this time pari is not in her usual cool jacket n jeans, instead she is wearing a beautiful suit...n her hair is open] [ tulsi smiles at this n then gayatri n daksha comes n looks at pari n says] D- are vah pari! aaj tu kuch kuch hota hai ki kajol se veer zaara ki preity zinta kaise ban gayi..[then gayatri n tulsi smiles] G- arre haan pari aaj to tu bohot acchi lag rahi hai ... P- [feels shy, n 2 get out of this shyness she says] accha tulsi daadi main chalti hoon, varna aaj archita mera khoon pe legi.. T- are nashta to karti jaa, P- nahi dadi main vahin kuch kha loongi...

[Daksha says to tulsi] D- arre tulsi dekh dekh hamare ghar ki larkiyan TV seriels ke saas bahuon se kitni zayada better lagti hai dekh.. [Tulsi n gayatri giggles].. [Tulsi then suddenly says] T- ohh ho! baaton baaton mein to main ek baat batana bhool hi gayi, G- kya tulsi, T- aaj aapne mausam dekha chachi, kitna khrab hai, lagta hai barish hone vali hai.. aur ye dono pagal larkiyan bina chatri ke chali gayin. D- araaraa tulsi, tu kyun aise nirupa roy ki tarah pareshan hoti hai... agar aaj pari barish mein pari bheegegi naa to ekdum raja hindustani ki karishma kapoor lagegi... main to prathna karti hoon ki aaj meri iss aishwarya ko uska abhishek mil hi jaae...aur vaise bhi vo to car mein hi gayi hai naa to bheegegi kaise. [Gaytri n tulsi starts laughing] G- kya didi aap bhi....



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part 2 with the continuation of the first part [D- main to prathna karti hoon ki aaj meri iss aishwarya ko uska abhishek mil hi jaae...aur vaise bhi vo to car mein hi gayi hai naa to bheegegi kaise. [Gaytri n tulsi starts laughing] G- kya didi aap bhi.......[ pari is driving n then tiny drops of rain starts falling,n then pari's mobile starts ringing] Archita- hello pari... archita bol rahi hoon, aur kitne der mein aaegi, mera performance next hai..P- are stupid, koshish to kar rahi hoon naa, jaldi aane ki, vaise bhi abhi barish shuru ho gayi hai..A- hello?hello? P- hello? kya hua kuch sunaiyi nahi de raha kya? hello? ohh god main mobile charge karna bhool gayi thi. s**t.A- lagta hai ye pagal nahi aaegi, tabhi bahane bana rahi thi.. (archita's class mate)- chalo archita tumhara turn aa gaya, jaao tumhara group wait kar raha hai. A- yaa ok.[while going to her group, she mutters),pari ki bacchi dekh loongi tujhe...[pari was driving suddenly her car stops]... P- ohh gaud ye car ko bhi issi waqt kharab hona tha.. gaud ab main kaise show pe time par kaise pohochungi...[ pari suddenly notices tht it has started raining heavily, but fortunatly where she parked her car there was a temple near, pari looks at it,n then she puts the duppatta on her head n goes inside the mandir, but she completly gets wet. she goes near His statue n prays, then a pandit comes n gives her prashad, pari thinks to call tulsi but her phone was not working.. so she asks the pandit ]P- pandit ji,kya yahan aas paas koi telephone booth hai kya,actually mera phone aur car khrab ho gaye hai.. so kya aap meri madat kar denge....

Edited by duyus - 25 April 2007 at 2:48pm
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part3:
with the continuation of part 2 [pari thinks to call tulsi but her phone was not working.. so she asks the pandit ]P- pandit ji,kya yahan aas paas koi telephone booth hai kya,actually mera phone aur car khrab ho gaye hai.. so kya aap meri madat kar denge....
Pandit[PT]- haan beta! yahan mandir se thore aage jaake tumhe ek telephone booth nazar aa jaayega.P-(smiles)thank you.[pari keeps the duppata on her head, n starts walking towards the telephone booth..]P- lo. telephone booth aa gaya.[ she gets inside and calls  at SN,tulsi picks up the phone]P-hello, dadi main pari bol rahi hoon..T- are beta tu kahan hai archita ka do baar phone aa chuka hai vo keh rahi thi ki show over ho chuka hai aur tera koi pata nahi... P-[ pari was talking to tulsi suddenly she saw a white maruti car stoped near the telephone booth.. she looked at it 4 a while n then she again started talking] tulsi dadi vo kya hai naa ki car khrab ho gayi hai, aur main aaj apna mobile charge karna bhul gayi thi..main abhi archita ke college nahi jaa paaungi..aur main yahan kaali mata ka ek mandir hai vahan se thori door ek telephone booth se bol rahi hoon..dadi aap kisi mechanic ko bol dijiiyega ki yahan pe pohonche, aur car repair kar de. main auto se aa jaaoongi]..T- haan theek hai lekin tu apna khayal rakhna.P-ok dadi.[and she puts the phone down, and as she was about to open the door of the T.booth, she hears some voice n then she see tht some studs types are beating a boy...Pari gets afraid n she stands inside the T.booth n watches everything. suddenlly the front door of the car opens...n a guy comes out from the driving seat...n he moves 2wards the T.booth,pari gets more afraid..then very roughly he opens the door]n everybody(all those studs stops beating the guy n looks at the T.booth, pari looks terrified]somebody from the studs says Rahul, the guy turned n see his frnd..... Rahul- haan kya hai? ye larka ab principal ke saamne apna muh nahi kholega... [rahul gives a devilish smile]


Edited by duyus - 14 March 2007 at 1:27pm
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Nice
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Posted: 07 March 2007 at 12:40pm | IP Logged
Well done....Nice script.Thanks yaar.I really njoyed
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i luv it. really nice script. looks like you spent a lot of time on it. keep up the good work Thumbs Up
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part 4 [with the continuation of the 3rd part [suddenlly the front door of the car opens...n a guy comes out from the driving seat...n he moves 2wards the T.booth,pari gets more afraid..then very roughly he opens the door]n everybody(all those studs stops beating the guy n looks at the T.booth, pari looks terrified]somebody from the studs says Rahul, the guy turned n see his frnd..... Rahul- haan kya hai? ye larka ab principal ke saamne apna muh nahi kholega... [rahul gives a devilish smile]......

[ now rahul turns around and looks at pari, who is already afraid] R- kya hua? aise kyu dekh rahi ho, koi matinee sho chal raha hai kya? HAAN? jaao ghar jaao? P-[tries to gain some courage and speaks up] dekho, tum log uss larke ko iss tarah maar rahe ho, tum logo mein koi insaaniyat hai yaa nahi? R- madam, jis baare mein aap kuch nahi jaanti, bekar mein apna waqt kharab mat karo. samjhi.NOW GET LOST[he shouts at her n pari gets afraid]
[n then somebody from his frnds says]...Rahul lets go.[then he sits in the car leaves the place, then pari looks at the boy who was ailing in pain..pari helps him n takes him to the hospital]....n then she comes back home...[scene now shifts to SN to Archita,Pari n other members, when pari enters the living room she looks a bit tensed, then archita comes] A- aagaye madam,[pari was in some thought n when archita talks to her she suddenly comes out of it], P- haan bol,A- tune mujhe promise kiya tha ki tu mere sho par aaegi..aur aayi nahi..P- are main kya karti yaar main to nikal gayi thi par raaste mein car kharab ho gaya tha..A- haan pata hai? tulsi dadi ne bata diya tha. P- archita aaj pata hai jab main telephone booth se baat kar rahi thi naa[n she tells everything wat happened there] A- kyaa? aise larko se zara door hi rehena chahiye? they r dangerous u kno? chal tu bohot bheeg gayi hai jaake change kar le. P-(smiles), ok.



Edited by duyus - 14 March 2007 at 1:31pm
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seriously appreciate it, really good script

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