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candyprincess IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 06 March 2007 at 7:14pm | IP Logged
great part

night girl IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 06 March 2007 at 8:13pm | IP Logged
part 4

kripa tried to avoid angad all day but as it started turning dark she had no choise but to go to her room with her roommate

inside the room kripa saw the room was very small bearly enought space to move around. there was a bunkbed and a small bathroom beside the bunkbed. inside kripa saw angad on the bottom bunk already asleep to her luck

as kripa headed for the top bunk she tirped on her way there and she ended up slightly turning while falling and landed right on top of angad, who woke up in shock


angad opened his eyes to see kripa right now top of him with her eyes twice as shock as angad was


kripa couldnt move she was in to much shock. It took kripa another 5 sec to enter in her head of what just happend and started getting up

k-iam so sorry

a-YOU LITTLE ***** I cant belive i got bunked with you!!!!

angad was relay angry a lot more angryer then this morning. kripa was now getting angry, she said sorry what more could she do.

k-WHAT THE HELL IS YOUR PROBLEM!!! I said sorry what more can i do

kripa knows never to talk to a genral like that. nice or mean genrals will murder you.
angads face was turning red in anger. so red that the color red it self couldnt get any reder

a-that is it get out NOW!!!

k-YOU CANT MAKE ME!!!! we are not in training right now.

a-I will get back at you tommrow moring 6am sharp when training starts and i will keep working you untill 8pm when training ends!

angad said this with all anger in his body, head to toe

kripa quickly took the top bunk and tried to control her anger before she made angad even more angry and made things worse for her self

angad on the other hand, smashed his hand into the wall makeing a large dent and then went to the bottom bunk and went to sleep

hope u like this part
next part comeing soon
comeing up-training with genral angad khanna

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goldi2 Goldie

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Posted: 06 March 2007 at 9:39pm | IP Logged
lol omg!! lmao lol thats sooo funny!!! i mean seriously i swear i would NEVER wanna bee in Kripa's place right now i mean trainging 6-8 thats plain cruel!!!
but ny how great parts!!
continue ASAP!!:D:D:D i'll be waitinglol

Numera* Goldie

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Posted: 06 March 2007 at 10:04pm | IP Logged
OHHHH MAN!! ANGAD's mean!! but i love that fact that the both hate each other and are in the same room!!
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Posted: 06 March 2007 at 11:44pm | IP Logged
wow. ur fan fic is really awesome. good part. cont soon. Clap
insia12 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 07 March 2007 at 7:25am | IP Logged
hahaha angad is tuff man!!cont sooon
miss_neha IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 07 March 2007 at 8:27am | IP Logged
Awesome parts!!!! Jus read da 3 dat i missed... awesome!!!! Kool i think the training will be funny, poor kripa!!!! LOL
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Awesome Parts

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