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Great part....OOOO the genral is angad cont sooon

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oke every one next part coming soon Smile




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WOW!!!!!!! interesting FF!!!!!!! Clap Clap Clap
continue soon!!!!! Big smile




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just read it now amazing im so happy youve started anotha ff i missed urs theyre so good Tongue cant wait for the next part and genaral angad right? Tongue

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part 3

when arrived at the base kripa relised why the guys complained about running around it. the base was big about 10 time bigger then the military camp back home.

prithiv helped kripa get her bag out of the jeep and then the 3 guys invited kripa to join them for coffe

j-hey kripa whan to join us for coffe then we can go check were are houseing will be for the next 2 long years

p-as long as i dont get housed with genral hitler, i will be happy

k-wait the genrals name is hitler

kripa said suprised that a guy by the name of hitler would be named genral

s-no the genrals name is angad khanna but he could fit in with the hitler family

all 4 new friend talked a liitle more about genral angad and how they all hate him. at the coffe house the houseing was listed and prithv shaun and josh were paired together.
kripa tried looking for her name but couldnt find it, so she looked at the next page which only had two names on it. the paper said it loud and clear kripa jones paired with genral angad khanna.
josh shaun prithiv and kripas eyes all poped out in amazement


k-i think iam going to die


j-nice knowing you

s-any one ask we never meet you before

all 3 of the boys took one step back from kripa as a little joke but it wasnt helping kripas fear of staying in the same room with the genral that every one called hitler

j-ok, you know what we will pay for your coffe as a little "make you feel better present"

s-but i dont see how it will help of the fact that you are so tost

pripa hit shaun in the stomch a little to get him to shut up

josh paid for the coffe and all 4 of the friend sat down at one of the side tables drinking coffe

s-tell us kripa how did you get shifed in to a camp base with all guys any way.

k-long story short all the good places were taken and this was the only base opend for excepting new soilders


there was a pause in the conversation for about 5 secs

k-iam going to go dump my coffe and go meet our genral hitler

p-may all the luck be with you

k-thanks prithiv

as kripa was headed toward the trash can a big stong body out of no where hit kripa causeing kripa to spill the coffe on the guy and her slef

k-iam so sor...

kripa paused in the mid word becuase she noticed 2 things one the guy was turning super red in anger and two the guy was wearing a unifom diffrent from every one else the kind a genral would wear.

by now every one in the little coffe house was stareing at kripa and angad

a-what is your name

angad said in the most dangeres way ever. angad khanna was a very hot tempered man, anything and every thing ticked him off and the spilling of the coffe realy ticked him of

k- k-k-kripa(realy scard)

a-oh so your the one thats my roommate for the next 2 years. iam going to be keeping a close eye on you tommrow when runing laps, one mistake and you will suffer so bad that you will wish to go home

by saying that he left

kripa was now realy scared not because of the way angad said it but because she hated running laps it was her bigest weakness and now she knows for a fact that she can expect the worst out of her new roommate

hope you like this part
next part comeing soon
comeing up-angad and kripa liveing together(that cant turn out well)

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wow! Superb part! i loved it, i cant wait for the next part, it was a very halarious part, cont. soon!




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awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!!!!! Clap


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gr8 part

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