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Laws of the land/ last part page 29

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Laws of the land

By Night Girl

 

after a long time have I started writing again so hang on to the story just a little. I will try and make it the best as I can  



Edited by night girl - 13 March 2007 at 11:12pm

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Posted: 04 March 2007 at 6:46pm | IP Logged
hey ur bac after a long time
     i really loved all ur fan fics but u left some unfinished so are u goin 2 continue them or not
   it is really gud 2 have u bac Smile can't wait 2 read this one Smile
write the character sketch soon and continue soon


Edited by pal89711 - 04 March 2007 at 6:47pm
goldi2 Goldie
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thats all ur gonna write???!!!!
i thought u were gonna post the first part or sumthing
night girl IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 04 March 2007 at 7:15pm | IP Logged
part 1

all the intro will happen in the story

kripa at age 4

"mommy,mommy that boy says I dont have a daddy is that true" we see a little kripa in tears about to cry

kripa at age 8

"miss.kripa jones welcome to the 3rd grade i see you brought you mom with you, why didnt you bring your dad also" a smiling 3rd grade teacher says in delight

kripa at age 16

"left, left, left, right, left. come on ladies this is military camp not barbie land GET MOVING!"

yells an angry officer then his eyes catch kripa walking

"MISS.JONES GIVE ME 50 PUSH-UP NOW! didnt you dad teach you any thing about listing to your commanding officer!"

kripa who was fed up with the **** went up to the officer and yelled back in his face

"I have no father. MY DAD IS DEAD"



hope u like this part
next part comeing soon
comeing up-mom enters the story and just as fast kripa leave the counry Tongue
i know realy short part but i kind of want to mess with your heads about whats going to happen next so keep posted Wink

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Posted: 04 March 2007 at 7:15pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by goldi2

thats all ur gonna write???!!!!
i thought u were gonna post the first part or sumthing

i posted it now didnt iBig smile

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Posted: 04 March 2007 at 7:17pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by pal89711

hey ur bac after a long time
     i really loved all ur fan fics but u left some unfinished so are u goin 2 continue them or not
   it is really gud 2 have u bac Smile can't wait 2 read this one Smile
write the character sketch soon and continue soon

i dont plan on finishing the fan fic i didnt finish just becuase its been a long time and the intrest has just left me Crysorry

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Posted: 04 March 2007 at 7:38pm | IP Logged
poor kripa..

continue sooonn
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great part

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