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A man with a bag -- One shot... completed (Page 2)

datspreets Goldie

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Posted: 13 March 2007 at 9:36pm | IP Logged
Sam, is this the one you wrote for Storyteller challenge? It's really good! I know the tips our guruji's gave us were superb..Neelam was my guruji for that contest :)

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Posted: 15 March 2007 at 7:19pm | IP Logged
I love the plot. Very intelligent and unique.
Naughty_n_nice IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 17 March 2007 at 3:55am | IP Logged

*yay!* I got compliments from some genius writers! *yay!*

Nope, preets... That was another one... very complicated, and totally french... I think I'll post that one too... I really like that story! Naina was my guruji, and lol, Gunia and she kept fighting LOL LOL LOL
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Posted: 17 March 2007 at 5:05am | IP Logged
It was awesome Sam and the way you began it, really made me read on to find out what is Ryan carrying in the bag adn whether he erached safely. Its very unique. keep writing. would love to read more
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Posted: 17 March 2007 at 12:36pm | IP Logged
Hey Sam!
I just read through the entrie story, and it's amazing!!! Clap Clap Clap
I loved the ending,specially LOL ...it really made you smile!! Embarrassed And the suspenses gripped you throughout as well!! Big smile
Great work!! Clap Clap Clap
Loved it!! Embarrassed
Naughty_n_nice IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 19 March 2007 at 9:33am | IP Logged

Thank you so much both you, you really made my day! Will definitely post more!

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