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EPSB- Angad n Neevs punishmentPt-11 Pg-9 (Page 9)

~*~john_4_lyf~* Senior Member

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Posted: 06 June 2007 at 3:13pm | IP Logged
Great Part Anu i loved the song it was funny please continue Clap

Anu1993 Goldie

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Posted: 08 June 2007 at 11:46am | IP Logged
Hey Ganpat, hey ganpat, hey ganpat
Pan yeh Ganpat kaun hai......
Coming up: Part 11 What will happen when Kripa and Anu find out about Angad and Neevs night will they think that they are cheatin on them to see wait till next part
Part 11

Kripa is waiting for Neev, she tries to call him but he foesn't answer, she calls Angad but he also doesn't answer, Kripa then tries and calls Anu, who answers
An - hey Kripa
K - hey, Anu voh main Neev ka wait kar rahi thi lekin voh abhi tak aaya nahin, aur na voh phone uta raha hai
An - really? main bhi Angad ko phone kar rahi thi lekin voh bhi nahin uta raha
K - what? kya voh bata ke gaya ke voh kahan ja raha hai?
An - nope, did Neev?
K - ....nahin
An - hmmm shayad voh bahar gaye hai.....i mean Angad likes to drink and have fun...maybe they went to a bar
K - nahin nahin Neev aisa nahin hai
An - are you sure? hum dhek tho sakte hai
K - ok then, tum mere ghar aa jao aur hum saath mein sab bar aur clubs mein dhekte hai
An - ok im coming
Anu comes to Kripa's house and they both leave to go search for Angad and Neev, they go into about 5 clubs and 3 pubs but don't find them, Kripa sees a club nearby
K - Anu vahan dhekte hai
An - chalo
Anu and Kripa go into the club and look around, Kripa spots Angad
K - Anu voh dhek, Angad
Anu looks then sees Neev
An - vahan Neev bhi hai
K - kya!
Kripa looks and gets shocked, both girls are further shocked to see all these random girls surrounding them dancing and touching them all over
An -'re dead
K - Neev...I'm going to kill you
Both girls watch as Angad and Neev smile at the random girls letting them touch and feel them and also feeling some of them, Kripa and Anu make their way through the crowd, Angad sees Anu but thinks he is dreaming and continues having fun, when he still sees Anu standing there he freezes
A - A....A..A...Anu....
Neev is still dancing around with the girls when Angad taps his shoulder, Neev shrugs him off but Angad pulls Neev away from the girls and points to Anu and Kripa, Neev looks at Angad then both of them fall to their knees in front of their respective girlfriends folding their hands
N - humhe maaf kardo!
A - hum dobara aisa nahin karenge
N - humse galti hogayi
A - hum batak gaye the
N - vaise mere koi ghalti nahin thi woh Angad mujhe zabardast lekar aaya varna mein aisa kabhi nahin karta
Angad pushes him
A - chup kar (whispers)
An - get up now
K - chalo humhare saath
Angad and Neev slowly get up, Kripa and Anu leave the club
A - jante hai ab kya hoga?
N - maar parne vali hai
A - bohat......mujhe abhi se dard hone laga hai
N - anyways, yeh sab teri galti hai, agar tu mujhe yana nahin lekar aata tho yeh nahin hota
A - meri galti?
N - haan teri galti
A - tu mujhe kaise blame kar sakta hai
N - tujhe nahin tho kisko blame karoon?
Neev and Angad begin arguing when Anu and Kripa come and pull them outside. Later both guys are sitting on the couch at Kripa's house watching as Anu and Kripa shout at them
K - tum dono aisa kaise kar sakte ho?
An - bilkul besharam ho tum dono!
K - Angad tum tho teek ho lekin Neev tum? tum bhi aise nikalo ge main
e kabhi socha nahin tha
N - voh tho yeh...
K - chup!
Neev puts a finger on his lips
An - aur Angad tum? tumhe thodi si akal bhi nahin hai? kaise tum un stupid ladkiyion ke saath naach rahe the, chee!
A - akal hai mujhe...
An - shut up!
K - sazaa tho milegi
An - haan voh bhi aisi sazaa ke tum dono yaad rakoge
A - kaisi.....
N - sazaa...
Later Angad is scrubbing the kitchen floor clean while Neev is washing and cleaning the dishes
N - kahan phaas gaye.....phir se keh raha hoon, sab teri galti hai
A - tu chup hota ke ek doon tujhe! chup chap kaam kar
N - yaar...i haven't seen so much dishes in my life
A - ....and i've never cleaned a floor this much
Just when Neev thinks all the dishes are finished, Kripa and Anu come with more and just when Angad thinks he has finished scrubbing the floor, Anu comes to him and tell him to wash the bathroom, both guys begin to cry
N - bas bhi karo...humhe apni galti ka ehsaas ho chuka hai
A - please hum dobara aisa nahin karenge, please aur sazaa mat do humhe
K - tumhe kya lagta?
An - chalo maar kar dete hai
A/N - thank you!
Neev drops the dish in his hand and falls to the floor while Angad drops the cloth in his hand and also lies on the floor, the girls laugh, Neev gets up and leaves the kitchen and Anu follows him, Kripa smiles and puts her hand forwrad to help Angad up but she slips and falls on top of him, both stare at each other until Kripa realises what she is doing and tries to get up but slips again, Angad laughs at her, Kripa gets angry and throws the soap filled sponge on him, Angad retaliates and throws the soapy water on her getting her all wet, Kripa screams and gets up and gets a jug, fills it with water and throws it on Angad then quickly runs away before he can do anything 
coming up - part 12 - Angad begins to feel something for Kripa
10 or more comments and i will continue tommorowBig smile
Rachu_1987 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 09 June 2007 at 8:45am | IP Logged
Great Part it was so funnny espeacially the punishments LOL
~*~john_4_lyf~* Senior Member

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Posted: 09 June 2007 at 8:50am | IP Logged
Great Part the punishments were good Clap and funny LOL
*~Kaynaat~* IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 10 June 2007 at 9:17am | IP Logged
lolz the punishment was funny,i tried ti imagine it and lolz!!!ur fanfic is funny,great part!!!!!!! LOL plz continue soon!
eternal IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 11 June 2007 at 1:15pm | IP Logged
awww how cute Embarrassed
superstar15 Senior Member

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Posted: 30 June 2008 at 8:13pm | IP Logged
hey just caught up wen r u continuing this ff i read dil hi dil mein and its grt ur back but plz con this one too

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