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Previously:

K- Kya mein tumse kuch pooch sakti hoon

AA- Haan poochon

K- Tumhari girlfriend ka naam kya hai

  A- Mere girl friend ka naam hai...

Coming up : What will be the name of Angad's girl friend and who will she be find out in Part 9

 

  Part 9

A-… Anu, woh kal London se aah rahi hai

  K- Mera sabse acha dost kal aah raha hai woh bhi London se raha hai

A-Cool

K- Tumhari Anu kaisi hai, what is she like?  

A- Mere Anu loh dekhte re jhate hai kyun ki mere Anu sabse alag hai

You hear the intro of Tumse Milke Dil Jo Haal from Main Hoon Na. You see Anu's eyes

  A- Mere Anu ko agar tu dekhe git ho tum tho gayi kyun ki mere girl friend hawaa ki tarah hai, when she is walking and she goes past someone, tab who meri Anu ko kabhi  dekhna band nahin karte hai

K- Tumhe jhalan nahin hoti

A- Bilkul nahin mujhe pasand hai jab sab uss se dekhte h  hai, mujhe yeh ehsaas dhilat hai ki mere girl friend sabse alag hai aur who kitni kupsuraat hai

K- Woh tho description se hi pata chal gaya tha

 The airport in Mumbai. Some random dude starts to sing

  Black-all       Blue on its own

  Ishq Jaisi Hai Ek Aandhi

  Ishq Hai Ek Toofan

  Ishq Ke Aage Bebas Hai 

  Duniya Mein Har Insaan

  Ishq Mein Sab Deewane Hain 

  Ishq Mein Sab Hairan

  Ishq Mein Sab Kuch Mushkil Hai

  Ishq Mein Sab Aasaan

  Dekho Pyaare

  Yeh Nazaare

  Yeh Deewane

  Yeh Parwane

  Hai Ishq Mein Kaise Yeh

  Haye, Tumse Milke Dil Ka Hai Jo Haal Kya Kahe

  Ho Gaya Hai Kaisa Yeh Kamaal Kya Kahe

  Tumse Milke Dil Ka Hai Jo Haal Kya Kahe

  Ho Gaya Hai Kaisa Yeh Kamaal Kya Kahe

 

  Anu turns around the guy stops singing. Angad is now thnking of her and him dancing…

  

  Dil To Hai Ek Raahi Jaana Dil Ki Tum Manzil Ho

  Dil To Hai Ek Kashti Jaana Jiska Tum Saahil Ho

  Dil Na Phir Kuch Maangega Na Tum Agar Haasil Ho

  Dil To Hai Mera Tanha Jaana Aao Tum Mehfil Ho

 

  Ishq Se Hi Saari Khushiyan Ishq Hi Barbaadi

  Ishq Hai Paabandi Lekin Ishq Hi Azaadi

  Ishq Ki Duniya Mein Yaaron Khwabon Ki Abaadi

  Kho Gaya Woh Jisko Manzil Ishq Ne Dikhladi

  Dekho Pyaare

  Yeh Nazaare

  Yeh Deewane

  Yeh Parwane

  Hai Ishq Mein Kaise Yeh

 

  Haye, Tumse Milke Dil Ka Hai Jo Haal Kya Kahe

  Ho Gaya Hai Kaisa Yeh Kamaal Kya Kahe

  Tumse Milke Dil Ka Hai Jo Haal Kya Kahe

  Ho Gaya Hai Kaisa Yeh Kamaal Kya Kahe

 

  Tumko Puja Hai Tumhari Hi Ibaadat Kee Hai

  Humne Jab Kee Hai To Phir Aise Mohabbat Kee Hai

  Humne Jab Kee Hai To Phir Aise Mohabbat Kee Hai

  Dil Mera Pagal Hai Jaana Isko Tum Behlado

  Dil Mein Kyon Halchal Hain Jaana Mujhko Tum Samjhado

  Mehka Jo Aanchal Hai Jaana Isko Tum Lehrado

  Zulf Jo Baadal Hai Jaana Mujhpe Tum Barsado

 

  Jaana Leke Jaan Aaya Hai Tera Yeh Deewana

  Jaana Tujhpe Mit Jaayega Tera Yeh Parwana

  Jaana Mere Dil Mein Kya Hai Tune Yeh Na Jaana

  Jaana Tujhko Yaad Aayega Mera Yeh Afsaana

  Dekho Pyaare

  Yeh Nazaare

  Yeh Deewane

  Yeh Parwane

  Hai Ishq Mein Kaise Gum

Haye, Tumse Milke Dil Ka Hai Jo Haal Kya Kahe

Ho Gaya Hai Kaisa Yeh Kamaal Kya Kahe

Tumse Milke Dil Ka Hai Jo Haal Kya Kahe

Ho Gaya Hai Kaisa Yeh Kamaal Kya Kahe

Angad shakes his head and gets out of this thought

 A- Oh ****. Mein tho bhul gaya mujhe Anu ko lene jaana hai bye Kripa

K- Bye.

Kripa looks at her watch

K- Oh god mein apni best friend ko lene kaise bhool sakti hoon

They both run it to the airport in there own paths

At the airport-Kripa

K- Neev

Neev turns around the camra shows the whole of him

N- Kripa, tumko dekh kar kitna kush hoon

K- Kush tho hona hi parega, saalo baad mile hai hum

N- Haan, lekin

K- Kya

N- Tum thodi alag lag rahi ho

K- Kya, Tumhara matlab kya hai

N- Tum zada khati tho nahin ho

K- Nahin

N- Phir tum pehle se zada moti kyun ho

K- (Gasps) Neev!

 Kripa is chasing Neev all around the airport and Neev keeps laughing

 N- Bas, bas, bas chalo ghar chalte hai varna meri tho bestee ho jaye gi

K- Neev stop it na

At the airport-Angad

Angad is walking till he bumps into someone. It was a girl she turns around and…

A- Anu

 

Anu- Haan mein tumhari Anu, Vaise kaise ho tum

Anu hugs him

Ang- Main teek hoon, chalo tho tum aah hi gayi ho main tume mere dost se milatha hoon

Anu- Teek hai

Angad and Anu leave to find Neev and Kripa. Angad and Anu were walking past a restaurant. Angad looked at the label at the top which said Chandni Chawk

Anu- Chale andar bohat bhook lag rahi hai

Ang- Teek hai

As soon as they came in Angad saw Kripa he and Anu went down where they were sitting

Ang- May we join you

Kripa looked and saw that is it was Angad

K- Arre Angad yeh koi poochne vali baat hai kya

Anu- Tum isse jhate ho

Ang- Yeh hi tho hai meri dost

Anu- Sach

Ang- Kya tum jhanti ho iss se

Anu- No but let me have a guess, umm…, tum Kripa Sharma ho na

K- Bilkul sahee

Anu-Yes I knew it, aur yeh jho tumhare saat behta hai voh

Ang- Now let me guess, Kripa yeh tumhara best frined hai na

K- Haan

Ang- Vaise naam kya hai iss ka

K- Neev, Neev Kapoor, aur tumhari girlfriend ka poora naam kya hai

Ang- Anu, joh tum jhanti ho, Anu Deshmukh

K- Nice name

Anu- Thanks, Kripa tumhe pata nahin hai ki Angad tumhare bare mein kitni baate karta hai, It is amazing, woh hamesha kehta hai ki Kripa jaisi dost kahin nahin mil sakti and it is true. London mein har larka mere saat flirt karta hai lekin yahan kitna sweet hai Angad ko kabhi ,now how do you say, farak hi nahin pehta hai

K- Kyun ki uss se acha lagta hai

Anu-Oh, tum mujhse zada Angad ko janti ho na

K- Well no lekin Angad ne mujhe baya tha tumhare aane se pehle

Anu- Oh, by the way tumhe dekhte hi mujhe pata chala ki tum ek bohat achi dost ho

Neev and Angad bring their head together and start whispering

 N- Tumhe nahin lagta hai ki tumne ghalat girlfriend ko chuna hai I mean come on tum Anu se zada Kripa ko jhante ho. Just admit it buddy tumhe pyaar ho gaya hai, lekin sacha pyaar, mein yeh jhanta hoon kyun ki tumhara dil mujhe yeh kehne ki koshish kare raha ki ki kuch tho garbar hai lagta hai dad ne tumhe zabardast anu ke saat aisa karne ke liye kaha hai

 Ang- Neev just shut up tumhari bato se mujhe koi lena dena nahin hai samje

Anu and Kripa turn around

K- Yahan kaisi baate ho rahi hai

A/N- Kuch nahin

Anu pulls Angads ear and Kripa pulls Neevs

Anu- Aab batana hi pare ga varna

Ang- Ahhhhhhhhh aaj please mujhe marna nahin

Anu- Kyun, aab chale

Anu took Angad behind in some private place when Angad came out he had lots and lots of bruses on him

  Kripa looked and she ran to Angad. Neev was sitting on his chair not bothered about what is around him and had a very evil look on his face

KK- Angad yeh kya hua tujhe!

 Ang- Anu se pooch humesha karti hai aise iss liye mein darta tha iss se lekin dad ne zabardast kaha tha ki agar tune Anu ko kush nahin rakha tho

Kripa started laughinf out loud at Angad's state

Ang- Mein iss halat mein hoon aur tum has reahi ho

Angad and Kripa chased each other

Coming up- What will Angad do when he realises that he loves Kripa find out in the next part of Ek Pyaara Sa Bandhan

xxAnuxx



Edited by Anu1993 - 16 May 2007 at 1:13pm

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Note: This ff will now be know as EPSB

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awesome part!!!! is your eijaz bro coming with prachi?????? LOL LOL LOL continue soon i luve this fanfic i always wanted AK in KUMKUM Embarrassed

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Originally posted by rima791

awesome part!!!! is your eijaz bro coming with prachi?????? LOL LOL LOL continue soon i luve this fanfic i always wanted AK in KUMKUM Embarrassed

thanx for commenting love and i hope u read the Note

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Previously:

K- Angad yeh kya hua tujhe!

 Ang- Anu se pooch humesha karti hai aise iss liye mein darta tha iss se lekin dad ne zabardast kaha tha ki agar tune Anu ko kush nahin rakha tho.

Kripa started laughing out loud at Angad's state

Ang- Mein iss halat mein hoon aur tum has reahi ho

Angad and Kripa chased each other

  Part 10-The wild ride of Angad and Neev

Next morning- Kripa's house

  K- Bye mum bye dad mujhe drama lessons mein jhaldhi jana parega aur mein late nahin hona jhati

S/G- Teek hai beta

G- Lekin itni dher mat lagana

K- Don't worry mum  

Kripa got out of the house notices a red ferrari standing there:

K- Woh ghaddi kis ki hai

She looks carefully and sees someoine eating a banana.

The person throws the banana peel on the floor and doesn't notice that there is someone coming Kripa notices that it is a girl the girl was on the phone and wasn't paying attention and slips. Neev looks at her and trys to hide his face. The girl looks at him 

G- Tumhe kuch dekhayi nahin detha  

N- I can explain

G- Whatever

Kripa starts to laugh. The girl gets up she is:

Natasha from Kayamat, Neevs ex girl friend

N- Oh my gosh Natsha tum

Nat- Arre Neev tum yahaan kaise tum London mein the

N- I know lekin mujhe Kripa ki vaje se yahaan aahna para

Nat- Oh Kripa she was a nice girl

N- Haan and she is my best friend

Neev and Nat stop talking and Kripa comes in between

K- Hi Natasha 

Nat- Hi Kripa tum kaisi ho 

 

Nat hugs Kripa

 

Nat- (whispers) Neev se door raho

K- Mein teek hoon tum 

Nat- Mein bhi teek hoon, mera aur Neev ka break up ke baad tho...

There was a long silent moment 

Nat- Teek hai tho phir mein chalti hoon

N- Yeh 

Nat goes

  N- Aab tho ghaadi mein beth jao madam mein koi taxi nahin hoon joh ghanto tak intezaar kare   

K- Neev

Those two start to laugh

Kripa reaches college and goes to drama class

Her teacher Professor Bajaj comes through the door

PB- Kripa!

K- Jee Professor

 PB- Tumhara partner aaj ke baad Prithvi nahin hoga  kyun ki tum dhono ke beech chagre hote rehte hai iss liye aaj ke baad tumhara  partner Angad hoga

Kripa is very shocked

K- Teek hai Professor Bajaj

Kripa's friend Harshani...

...comes through the door and sits by Kripa

H- Tumhara partner kaun hai

K- Angad

H- Oh my gosh wow Kripa your so lucky

  K- I know lekin agar papa ko pata chal gaya tho pat nahin     kya hoga Khanna's Sharma ke rivals hai aab, pehle dost the aab pata nahin kya ho gaya

H- Dont worry sab kuch teek ho jaye ga

K- I am pretty sure

Half way through the lesson

  K- Angad mein tumhare bina nahin jee sakti tumhe pata hai ki maine tumhare liye kya kuch nahin kia hai

Anu and Neev come through the door

A- I know Kripa lekin tum mere type kee larki nahin ho

K- Teek hai agar tum mere nahin ho sakte tho kisi aur

ke nahin ho sakte  

Kripa grabs a knife...

PB-Cut!!! What a brilliant performance

N/Anu- Thank god

N- I know mujhe lagta tha ke in dhono ke beech kuch ho raha tha

Anu -Mujhe bhi aisa laga tha

Kripa and Angad finished drama lessons

 

Anu and Kripa hug

 

Anu- Kash mein tumhari tarah act kar sakti thi (whispers) Angad se door raho varna mein...

Neev grabs Kripa and takes her some where else

K- Neev yeh kya kar rahe ho tum

N-mujhe kuch baat karni hai

K- Angad ke samne nahin ke sakte the

N- No akele mein baat karni thi

K- Kis bare mein

 N- Yeh kehne ke liye lee yeh dosti mere liye aab dosti nahin rahi hai dosti se zada bhar gaye hai

K- Kya kehna hai tumhe

N- Kripa I...

K- I...what

N- I love you

K- Kya tum sach ke rahe ho

N- Haan Kripa tum mere kayalo mein mere sapno mein sab kuch aab tum ho

K- I love you to Neev

Them two hug each other, they stop hugging

Kripa  starts to laugh

K- Tumhe kya lagta hai kee tum phir se mujhe bevacoof banaoyo ge

  N- Main has nahin raha hoon sach bol raha hoon aur dekha bhi sakta hoon

Neev grabs a knife and

K- Rukho

Neev stops

K- Tumnne sabit kar kiya hai aab chale

N- Haan

A few minutes later- Angad and Kripa

  Angad is messing around with Anu by the time the bell rings

A-Yeh ghanti bhi na ghalat waqt par bajti hai

Anu- Bilkul sayee ke rahe ho tum

Angad goes to his next class which is with Neev

A- Neev kya tum aaj free ho 

N- Kyun date par le jana jhate ho kya 

  A- Shut up, mere baat kan kulkhar sunlo aaj hum dhono 

bar jaa  rahe hai 

N- Kya 

A- Sirf hum dhono, Kripa ko mat batao, aur main Anu ko nahin bataoon

N- Teek hai 

 It is 5 o'clock Neev and Angad are ready and are at the bar them two start singing Hey Ganpat

Blue-Angad

Purple-Neev

Black- All

Pink-Girls

Hey Ganpat, chal daro la

Hey Ganpat, chal daro la

Ice chala soda kum thoda paani mila

Ice chala soda kum thoda paani mila

Thoda table vable saaf kar de na yaar

Thoda table vable saaf kar de na yaar

Hey Ganpat Ganpat

Hey Ganpat Ganpat

Come on come on and everybody

Come on come on and move your body

Come on come on and shake your body

Shake your ass

Shake your ass

In the Mumbai, all over India

We are the bhais

We are the bhais

 In the Mumbai, all over India

We are the bhais

We are the bhais

Bhai mein bhai tu phikar na kar

Usski maa ki uski behen ki joh dekhe idhar

Apun ko bata de kabhi ho gayi fantar
Sabki fatati apane naam se apun jaaye jidhar

Thoda coke shoke tho apun ke dost ko de na yaar

Thoda coke shoke tho apun ke dost ko de na yaar

 Hey ganpat ganpat

Hey ganpat, chal daro la

In the Mumbai, all over India

We are the bhais

We are the bhais  

In the Mumbai, all over India

We are the bhais

We are the bhais  

Bipasha, Mallika, Priyanka ya ho Aishwariya Rai

Jaaye saali jaake jahaan marzi maraaye

Yash Chopra, Subhash Ghai apni picture banaaye

Apun kya lena, jaise taise, paise kamaaye

Apun ko toh chaahiye din mein special chaai

Shaam ko daaru, raat ko ladki aur nind aa jaaye

Hey ganpat ganpat

Hey ganpat chal..

Dekh paltke main hoon kudiye

Har paase main hoon kudiye

Tu dil hain main jaan hoon kudiye

Shake your ass

Shake your ass

Dekh paltke main hoon kudiye

Har paase main hoon kudiye

Tu dil hain main jaan hoon kudiye

Shake your ass

Shake your ass

In the Mumbai, all over India

We are the bhais

We are the bhais

In the Mumbai...

We are the bhais

We are the bhais

Congress smart party ya phir hove bjp

Sabko support hoti only tere bhaai ki

Ohi saala phaalatu vaalatu tapaka daal du main

Maar maar ke maar maar ke phaad daalata hoon main

Thoda murga shurga murga shurga de na yaar

Thoda murga shurga murga shurga de na yaar

Hey ganpat chal doro la

Hey ganpat hmm chal doro la

Come on come on and everybody

Come on come on and move your body

Come on come on and shake your body

Shake your ass

Shake your ass

In the Mumbai, all over India

We are the bhais

We are the bhais

In the Mumbai, all over India

We are the bhais

We are the bhais

Come on come on and everybody

Come on come on and move your body

Come on come on and shake your body

In the Mumbai, all over India

We are the bhais

We are the bhais

Hey Ganpat, hey ganpat, hey ganpat...

Pan yeh Ganpat kaun hai

Coming up: Part 11 What will happen when Kripa and Anu find out

about Angad and Neevs night will they think that they are cheating

on them to see wait till next part

 

10 or more comments and i will continue tommoroBig smile

xxAnuxx


Edited by Anu1993 - 06 June 2007 at 3:10pm

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Great Part i really liked the drama bit Clap

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great job like usual Clap Clap
anyways thanks for updating Smile
continue soon...
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