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hehe great part LOL LOL lol kripa's funny.....continue soon

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u know wen the guy said blame it on Eklavya he was ment to say Prithvi soz guys

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Originally posted by Gaurav''s Love

hehe great part LOL LOL lol kripa's funny.....continue soon
 
thanx rach
 
Originally posted by monikaseth

Clap so sweet
 
thanx moni
 
Originally posted by tava

great part continue soon Clap Clap Clap
 
thanx tava
 
xxAnuxx

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Previously:
 

Kripa gets out of her thoughts and thinks what am i doing what if mama finds out.

 

This Part:

 

What is Angad going to do if Kripa does not exept his friendship cuz of her mum.

 

Part 6

 

The Kidnap

 

Kripa is in town doing shopping. While she is walking sha bumps in to...

 

K- Arre Mishti tum London se kab aayi

M- Bas kal hi

K- Aur tumhara pati Sahil Kaisa hai

M- Woh bilkul teek hai aur guess what sirf ek hafte pehle mera aur Sahil ka ek naya mehman aaya tha

K- Sach!!! Congratulations

M- Teek hai main chalti hoon u take care

K- I will

 

Reality

 

D- Main kabhi Mishti anuty ko pasand nahin karta tha. You know she is one of those people who **** you off

A- Dhruv

 

Angad grabs hold of Dhruv's ear they all laugh and the story goes on...

 

Flashback

 

While Kripa is waving goodbye Angad comes up to her and taps her on the head. Sha looks back and sees no one there. So she keeps on walking and some dude accidently pushes her she trips and has her eyes closed. When she opens them Angad is in front of her carrying her. 

 

K- Tum!!!

A- Haan main aur kaun

K- Mujhe neeche utaro

A- Kyun

K- Kyun ki maine kaha!!!

A- Teek hai karta hoon. Itna gusaa haune ki koi zaroorat nahin

 

Angad let goes of Kripa and she falls on the floor

 

Reality

 

D- OOOOH! Aap dhono uss waqt kitne close the na

A- Haan but i could not help my self

 

Flashback

 

K- Angad!!!

 

Kripa gets up and runs after him. Angad keeps running and says

 

A- You run like a man

 

Kripa looks at him very angrily as if she is about to kill him. While them two are running they reach thi very dark place. Kripa holds Angad's hand tightly. Amgad looks at his hand

 

A- (Thinking) Agar iski vaje se mera mission possible nahin hua tho mera kya hoga yeh sirf main jhanta hoon. Yeh mera haath kyun fhar rahi hai. (To Kripa) Mera haath choro

K- Lekin Angad hum yahaan ek jhage main hai jahan sirf hum doh hai kher..

 

Kripa let goes of his hand

 

A- (Thinking) Phew!

 

Someone grabs Kripa by the arm and gives her an injection to make her go to sleep

 

A- Thankgod tum aagaye varna pata nahin kya hota.

??- Kare kare mu kyun dhek rahe ho jao

A- Jee sir

??-Aur mujhe sir mat bhulao main koi sao(100) saal ka bhuda nahin hoon.

 

Reality

 

D- Papa aap kise baat kar rahe the. Mere ser main chakar aah rahe hai ,phir kya hua...

 

Flashback

 

Angad leaves the place with Kripa thier. All of this makes Angad realise that why he is doing all this and for his boss. Angad vows to find out what is the whole secret and truth behind what ever is happening.

 

A- Woh adami mujhe yeh saab karne ke liye itna paisa dheta hai. Aur mujhe paiso ki sak zaroorat hai.

 

Angad leaves and goes clubbing with his mates and sees people messing around with his sister Tanu (frm KGGK)

 

 

Reality

 

Dhruv- Papa vaise aaj Tanu bua kahan hai

K- Beta jab tum pandra saal ke the..

 

A tear falls out of her eyes

 

Dhruv- Mama kya hua

 

A- Beta Tanu iss duniya mein nahin hai

Dhruv- Kya. Agge batao na 

 

Flashback

 

A- Ahhy. Mere behen ko chordo

 

A dude comes in front of him

 

D- Tu kaun hai. Hum jho bhi kare tumse kya hai. Yeh apun ka life hai aur tu iss life se door raho

 

Tanu runs up to Angad and hugs him

 

T- Bhaiya!!!

 

Reality

 

D- Papa are you going to beat the crap out of them

A- Hum kal batayenge aab suanjao

D- This is not fair humesha kal kal khete rehta hai, kher its ok you can tell me tommoro

 

 

Flashback next part coming up:

Angad beats the heck out of the dudes and says no to his boss for the first time. He makes friends (propaly this time not for a purpose) with Kripa anf instead of hurting her he will protect her all her life

 

xxAnuxx



Edited by Anu1993 - 13 April 2007 at 9:31am

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Previously:

What is Angad going to do if Kripa does not exept his friendship cuz of her mum.

A dude comes in front of him

D- Tu kaun hai. Hum jho bhi kare tumse kya hai. Yeh apun ka life hai aur tu iss life se door raho

Tanu runs up to Angad and hugs him

T- Bhaiya!!!

Reality

D- Papa are you going to beat the crap out of them

A- Hum kal batayenge aab suanjao

D- This is not fair humesha kal kal khete rehta hai, kher its ok you can tell me tommoro

Angad beats the heck out of the dudes and says no to his boss for the first time. He makes friends (propaly this time not for a purpose) with Kripa and instead of hurting her he will protect her all her life

Part 7:

Angad picks up a rock...

Reality

D-AHHHHHHHH Papa thank god aap aaj zinda hai pata nahin kya hota

Angad looks at Dhruv in an unmannered. Dhruv stares back at him

A- Tum abhi hatjao varna main tumhari jeeb keech loonga

D- Main aapse dartha hoon bohat darta hoon kyun ki kahin aap bhi pathar mere ser par marde Phir kya hua doh theen thapad tho milne chaiye na (He laughs)

Flashback

Back at Angad's house Naina is wooried for him

N- Itni raat ho chuki hai angad aur Tanu abhi tak bapaas nahin aaye hai

D- Don't worry woh ghar aah jaye ga

Naina puts the television on. Flashes comes on Naina's face after she saw what was on television. A tear feel out of her eyes 

D- Naina kya hua aab kyun ro rahi ho 

Dilip looks at the television screen and flashes come on his face too 

D- Kya yehi humara behta hai jisne humne janam diya tha

Naina looks at Dilip and gets up angrily

N- Yeh sab apki vaje se hua hai zaroor humari shaadi ek samjoda tha lekin iske matlab nahin hai ki aap humesha mere mamta ko tukrao. Apne na kabhi Angad ko behta mana na kabhi use vishwas kia. Aur yeh sirf mein jhanti hoon abhi abhi main us ke liye mamta ka pyaar de rahi thi bareshaan thi main. Lekin apne kaha tha ki don't worry woh aah jaye ga. Sach humesha karva hota hai. Humesha doosre ke moo se sumte aaye hai aap aab aapko mere moo se suna parega kee Angad apka behta nahin hai mera nahin hai balki...

Dilip slaps her Thwak

Reality

D- Ha apki mother India ko thapad mila vaise aap kiske bete ho

A- Tumara (mocking about)

D- Teek hai tho main aap ko bhi thapad dheoon

A- Dhruv you touch me and your dead

D- I know iss liye main kar raha hoon main apka behta nahin ban na jhata hoon aap bohat daroni ho

K- Dhruv

D- Sorry mum

K- That's better

D- Phir kya hua

Flashback 

D- Ahinda kabhi mat kehna ki Angad humara behta nahin hai. Tumne kabhi socha hai kya beete gee uspar agar usko pata chalgaya ki woh humara behta nahin hai

N- Achi tarah se jhanti hoon mein ki aap kitna pyaar mujhse karte hai. Apne kabhi mujhko patni ka darja nahin diya naa hi mujhe kabhi apka patni mana

Naina leaves slamming the door behind her

D- Kahan jaa rahi ho

N- (Shouts from behind) Police station aahna hai tho aaho koi nahin rokhe ga apko

Dilip follows her

When Naina reaches the police station she goes to her uncle who works there

N-Uncle jee kya Angad kee bail ho sakti hai

U- Jee nahin is ke liye tho court main jhana parega kyun ki angad ne ek bohat barah jurm kia hai. Mihir Virani ke behte Karan Virani ko marah tha usse pathar ke saat. Kyun ki Laran apne bhai ke liye lar raha tha Harsh

N- Teek hai kya hum usse mil sakte hai

U- Jee haan

Naina goes up to Angad behind bars. She asks if she can go inside the police said yes she went inside the jail where Angad was. Angad sees her mum and dad

 A-Mama Papa maine kuch nahin kia mera yakin kee jeey   

 

 Naina slaps Angad Thwak

Reality

D- Hahahahahahahahaha dheka maa maine kaha tha zaroor papa ko thapad mile ga phir kya hoga dadi apko ghar se bhar nikalde gi hahahahahahahahahaha

Flashback

N- Tune kuch nahin kia (softly) tune kuch nahin kia!!!!!

Naina slaps him again Thwak

Reality

D- Hahahahahahahahahahahaha papa ko phir se thapad laga

A- Dhruv trust me I will grind you

D- Tho karlo kaun rokh raha hai

A- Actually tu hamesha hasda tha kyun ki mujhe thapad mila aab main tujhe thapad doonga aab pata chal jayega

Angad chases Dhruv round the whole house and trys o hit him

A- Bas bas (breathing in and out deaply) main aur nahin chal sakta

D- Bhude ho gaye hai aap

A- Yeh sach nahin hai main abhi bhi utna sexy ho jitna pehle tha

D- You and sexy Pishhhhhhhhhh what eva phir kya hua

N- Kya um vahi behte ho jisne maine janam diya nahin kyun ki woh Angad kabhi kuch ghalat nahin kar sakta tha. Ajanak itni ghatiya insaan kyun ban rahe ho

D- Naina shant ho jao sab kuch teek ho jaye ga

Dilip and Naina leave. Angad sees Kripa. Kripa looks at him and goes to her

K- Angad (crys) Tum salako ke peeche kya har rahe ho

A- Woh main Karan Virani ko marah pathar ke saat

Flashes come on her face

K- Angad miujhe nahin pata tha kit um aisi ghandi…

A- Bas! Mere mama ne bhi mujhe tane di hai main nahin jhata ki koi mere itne kareeb hokar hbi mujhe daate

K- Main kehne vali thi  ki main tumse poora barosaa karti hoon aur aaj se vaada karti hoon ki main tumhara saat humesha doongi dosti ki khatir

Reality

D- Aap dhono tho zaada hi close aah chuke the

A- Chalo aab raat ho chuki hai aab Dhruv son jao

D- Papa apko pata hai ki sab log mujhe college mein kya bulate hai mujhe

A- Kya

D- DK see Dhruv Khanna, AK for Angad Khanna and yeh tho sabse hasne vali hai KK for Kripa Khanna

Angad fakes to laugh

Coming up: Will Angad beable to get out of jail find out in the next part of EPSB

xxAnuxx

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Edited by Anu1993 - 29 April 2007 at 11:23am

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