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Excellent part

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Posted: 18 March 2007 at 11:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by janu_2006

gr8 part anu Clap Clap Clap
angad n eklavya knew eachother lol LOL
n angad punched prithvi Ouch
cont. soon
 
Thanx i know u feel bad bpou prithvi gettin beaten up by his best frend sorry but spicing it up now
 
Originally posted by brainychild92

yes! he is in the hospital. no, he will want revenge..


continue soonnn
 
lol thanx lol
 
Originally posted by nehagupta_9

Excellent part
 
thanx neha
 
thanx everyone for commenting lov ya loads Hug

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Posted: 20 March 2007 at 10:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by johnrocks96

great part anu!!!!!!cont soon Clap
 
soz about not quoting u b4 anyways thanx jaspreet Big smile
 
xxAnuxx

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Previously:

Flash Back

A- Kher main ghar chalta hoon

E- Nahin tum aise kaise jha sakte ho mein aur Kripa tumhare saat chalte hai

 

Kripa, Angad and Eklavya were walking back to there homes together

 

Coming up: What talks will go on in between Angad and Kripa

 

Part 4-The talk between A and K

 

A- Tho kahan rehthi ho tum

K- Umm.....

A- Kya iss ke liye soch na pare ga

K- Nahin woh dukaan jhante ho jahan sabseeyaan (vegtables) kareed the hain

A- Haan

K- Uske samne ek mansion hai vahan main rehthi hoon

A- Ooh, tho tum mansion mein rehthi ho. bohat barah hoga na

K- Haan barah hai lekin mein nahin jhathi hoon ki koi iss ghar ko nazar lag jaye

A- Haan lekin tareef (praise) tho karni paregee

K- Haan woh tho hai

A- (To Eklavya) Teek hai mein tumhe milne ahoonga aur ghar bhi dhekloo ga

K- Woh tho nahin ho sakta

A- (To Kripa) Kyun?

K- Woh issliye hai ki har friday Eklavya bhaiya dubai jahte hain

A- Woh kyun?

K- Kyunki bhaiya vahan job karte hai. Issliye tum bhaiya ko weekend mein nahin mil sakte.

A- Oh thats not fair. Eklavya tumne batayaa kyun nahin?

E- Because it was a surprise aur mein jhata tha ki Kripa hee tumahe batayegi samje

A- Haan samaj gaya

K- Tho angad tum job kare ho

A- Haan mere papa family buisness samalte hain. Aur ussne mere liye ek office save ki hai. Main vahi mein kaam karta hoon. What about you?

K- Me?

A- Yes you?

K- Mein kaam nahin karti hoon mere papa kehte hain ki, betiyaan family buisness nahin karte.

A- Oh,

K- Lekin hum dost tho baan sakte hai aab hum dho ek doosre ke bhare mein khafi jahnte hai. Mujhse dosti karoge

A- Haan

K- Great 

E- Yeh kya hai tum dhono tho aise baat kar rahe hai jaise ki main yahan nahin hoon

 

Reality

 

D-Bohat lambhi conversation thi pata nahin aap dhono kaise bored nahin hui kyun ki mujhe sone ka maaan kar raha hai

K- Badmash tu chup re pata nahin tumhari zuban se aur kya niklega. Agar dubara kuch kaha tho zuban keech lu gi main tumahari

D- Mother apne just chill gana suna hai

K- Haan

D- Tho aap bhi zarah sa chilled ho jayiye....oh haan mein tho bhul gaya tha aap tho aab bhudi ho gayi hai

K- Dhruv!!!!!

D- Sorry sorry (laughing) mein iss lambhi kahani mein swaad la raha tha, phir kya hua 

K- Phir... 

 

Angad and Kripa laugh

 

A- Anyways main chalta hoon mera ghar tho raste mein hai

E- Nahin Angad mein aur meri pyaari behen tumhe aise nahin jhane de ge. Kyun nahin Kripa?

K- Haan bhaiya teek hee tho keh rahe hai. Chalo main aur bhaiya tumhe ghar valo se milate hain

A- Ok it's fine with me

 

A comes along with K and E to their house. They come inside the house. When the family see Angad they all freak out. Gayatri comes up to Angad

 

G- Oh Angad Khanna. It is nice to meet you again

K- Maa aap Angad ko jante hain?

G- Haan dharasal Angad ke papa tumhare papa se nafrat karte hain

K- Kya matlab hai aap ka?

G- Mera matlab hai ki Angad aur usske papa Dilip Khanna humare rivals hai

 

Surya comes down the stairs.

 

S- Gayatri ghar pe kaun aiyaa hai

G- Tum yahan aaho. Jhatka lag jayega

 

Surya comes downstairs and gets the shock of his life

 

S- Yeh yahan kya kar raha hai

K- Papa yeh tho Eklavya bhaiya ka dost hain

S- Acha Eklavya bhaiya ka.........Tum dhono sunlo aaj ke baad isse ghar mein koi Khaana rishtedhar nahin aahyega

 

Reality

D- Aap dhono aab kaise ek saat hai jab ki aap ke parivaar ek doosre se nafrat karte the

K- Nahin Dhruv hum aap nahin aab bataonge varna surprise kaise re ga 

 

Angad leaves, Kripa runs up stairs and Eklavya gets ready to go to dubai for his job. After Eku packs up he goes to Kripa

 

E- Kripa tum.....

K- Main roh rahi nahin hoon

E- Tum teek tho ho.....Mera matlab hai ki tum dhono ki dosti hui ek ghanta bhi nahin hua aur toot gaya

K- Haan bhaiya but i don't care. Main mama ki baat sunogee. aur mujhe lagta hain ki tumhe bhi mama ki baat sun ni chaiye

E- Teek hai lekin chalta hoon

K- Bye

 

Kripa goes up to Eklavya and hugs him

 

K- Jhaldi anna

E- Teek hai

 

The scene shifts to Angad's house he is talking to someone in his office and is very dark

 

Reality

D- Haaww papa what were you up to

A- Woh mein kal bataoon ga tu aab sonja

D- Teek hai

 

Coming up: Who do you think Angad is talking to?

 

xxAnuxx

 

 



Edited by Anu1993 - 23 March 2007 at 8:26am

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Gr8 part... poor angad n kripa... i wonder hu he is tlkin to???

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great part continue sooon Clap

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Posted: 05 April 2007 at 3:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by nehagupta_9

Gr8 part... poor angad n kripa... i wonder hu he is tlkin to???
 
thanx nehagupta
 
Originally posted by tava

great part continue sooon Clap
 
thanx tava keep reading all and thanx for the commentsBig smile

Anu1993

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Posted: 05 April 2007 at 5:06am | IP Logged
 
 
Previously:

The scene shifts to Angad's house he is talking to someone in his office and is very dark

 

Coming up: Who do you think Angad is talking to?

 

Part 5: The Mystery

 

A- Arre mujhe kya pata tha ki woh Kripa ussi ghar mein rehti hai aur agar main jhanta tha ki Eklavya bhi ussi khandan ka hai tho kya tumhe lagta ki mein usse bhi dosti karta (laughs)

??- Yehi tho tumhe karna tha jab log tumhe vishwas karne lage thab sab paise chooralo aur Prithvi ke sar pe dhalo. Phir tum bach jao ge aur mein bhi. Vaise bhi lota behta hai adopted son

A- Vaise bhi tumhe uss ghar ka kya rishta hai

??- Rishta hai lekin abhi nahin bataoonga mein baad mein bataoonga

 

Angad leaves the room (who do u think the person is cuz i am not goning to reveal him as yet)

 

A- (in his thoughts) Pata nahin uss ghar ka kya rishta hai iska bas yehi jhanta hoon ki woh paise mujhe choorane parege aur mujhe aisa scene banana parega ki Prithvi pas jaye aur mein aur woh nahin 

 

The scene shifts to Kripa's house

 

K- Kya karabee hai us mein, Angad bohat acha ladka hai aur mein yeh baat khanti haoon

G- Kaise khanti hoon, kitna jhanti ho tum uss lardke se

K- Zada nahin...Lekin usne mera humiliation bacha ya tha

G- Jho bhi ho mein behes nahin karna jhati samjhi

 

Kripa goes away angrily. Scene shifts to Angad. Angad is walking to Prithvi

 

A- Prithvi!!

 

Prithvi looks back and right in front of him is Angad

 

P- **** off

A- Prithvi mujhe pata hai ki maine bohat bharee ghalti ki hai humari dosti torne ke liye

P- Tho kehna kya jhate ho

A- Yahi ki i want to be friends again

P- Kya...Angad tumhe pata nahin hai aaj tumne kaisi kushi di hai mujhe

A- (in his thoughts) Ok mission accomplished dosti ki hai aab mujhe Prithvi ko yakeen dhelana hai ki Kripa ek bohat achi lardki hai(smiles evily) (to Prithvi) Tho hum chale

P- Kahan

A- Kripa se milne ke liye

P- Nahin dheko mein Man u ko kitna nafrat karta hoon sarak pe mein man u t-shirt pa sakta hoon lekin usske ghar kabhi nahin jaoonga

A- Tho chale

 

Prithvi looks at Angad. Angad has this real big smile on his face

 

P- What ever chale

A- Yes...Lekin tumhe ghanti bajani paregi

P- Woh kyun

A-Professional (he bends his two fingers) jealousy

 

5 minutes later them two reach Kripa's house. Angad hides and Prithvi does the doorbell. Inside Kripa is reading a book the doorbell rings and she shouts...

 

K- I'll get it

 

She runs down stairs, she opens the door

 

K- Prithvi!! What a pleasant surprise andhar tho aaho

 

Prithvi grabs her by the hand and takes her outside

 

K- Btw sexy jacket yo

P-(Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh)

 

Angad comes out and they all three run

 

P- Tumhe woh saab kehni ki kaya zaroorat thi

K- Zaroorat thi

P- Lekin kyun 

 

Kripa walks around him and hits him with her bum everytime she talks

 

K- Kyun ki...agar mein...yeh nahin...karti tho...mama ko lage ga ki...hum dono lar rahe hai

P- Can you stop that

K- If you say so

 

They all laugh. Kripa looks at Angad she looks at his smile and melts a song called Thare Vaste plays in the background from Shakalaka Boom Boom

 

Thare vaste dhedenge jaan ve

Thare vaste dil hai qurbaan ve

 

Thare vaste dhedenge jaan ve

Thare vaste dil hai qurbaan ve

Love you i love you jaana tu hi armaan ve

 

Love you i love you jaana tu hi armaan ve

 

Thare vaste dhedenge jaan ve

Thare vaste dil hai qurbaan ve

Love you i love you jaana tu hi armaan ve

 

Thare vaste dhedenge jaan ve

Thare vaste dil hai qurbaan ve

 

Mere dil mein kya hai kya hai tera pyaar hai

Tujhe milne ko humesha bekarar hai

Mere chen ki manzil jana tere paas hai

Mere dharkan mein tera hi ehsaas hai

Door door nahin jhana nahin jhana nahin jhana

Na mujhe tharpana tharpana tharpana

Love you i love you jaana tu hi armaan ve

Thare vaste dhedenge jaan ve

Thare vaste dil hai qurbaan ve

Love you i love you jaana tu hi armaan ve

Thare vaste dhedenge jaan ve

Thare vaste dil hai qurbaan ve

 

Tujhe paake mit thi hai mere tanhaiya

Mere kwaabon mein rehti hai tere rubaaiya

Mere aahon mein kya hai tere hi kawahishe

aah poori karde karde mere parmahishe

Tera mera har charaha hai mere mere har baat mein

Tuhi tuhi basti hai basti hai mere jasbaad mein

Love you i love you jaana tu hi armaan ve

Thare vaste dhedenge jaan ve

Thare vaste dil hai qurbaan ve

Love you i love you jaana tu hi armaan ve

Love you i love you jaana tu hi armaan ve

Thare vaste dhedenge jaan ve

Thare vaste dil hai qurbaan ve

Thare vaste dhedenge jaan ve

Thare vaste dil hai qurbaan ve

 

Kripa gets out of her thoughts and thinks what am i doing what if mama finds out

 

Coming up: What is Angad going to do if Kripa does not exept his friendship cuz of her mum

 

xxAnuxx



Edited by Anu1993 - 05 April 2007 at 9:02am

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