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Rachu_1987

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Posted: 09 March 2007 at 2:50pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by brainychild92

awww... love ar first site or just respect for women.. either U GO BOY!!!        that guys is her friend. rite?

continue soooonnn

i thought vivan was the kid's name...
 
hey hun.....vivaans the dude who plays dhruv

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hi
just read yr ff n is too gud
cont. soon

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great part continue soon Clap Clap Clap

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Originally posted by nehagupta_9

Excellent part!!!! I like the switch between flashbacks n reality, dats kool!!!!
 
thanx rach my sis thought it was cool aswell
 
Originally posted by IndianCutie13

great part
i love druv's dialogue D- (mocks Angad) 'Dhruv zada over react maat karo' Over reacting mein nahin aap kar raha tha, Papa over react tho aap kar rahe the. Carry on mujhe aur batao
 
u spell dhruv with an h not with out one and thanx i liked that dialogue too i thought it was kinda funny
 
Originally posted by brainychild92

awww... love ar first site or just respect for women.. either U GO BOY!!!        that guys is her friend. rite?

continue soooonnn

i thought vivan was the kid's name...
 
no just as rach said
 
Originally posted by Gaurav''s Love

Originally posted by brainychild92

awww... love ar first site or just respect for women.. either U GO BOY!!!        that guys is her friend. rite?

continue soooonnn

i thought vivan was the kid's name...
 
hey hun.....vivaans the dude who plays dhruv
 
vivaan is the person hu plays dhruv and bout the guy u have to find out Evil Smile i dont want to spill anything out Evil Smile anyways thanx
 
Originally posted by janu_2006

hi
just read yr ff n is too gud
cont. soon
 
thanx so much i am touched
 
Originally posted by tava

great part continue soon Clap Clap Clap
 
thanx
 
thanx for commenting people
 
xxAnuxx

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great part anu!!!!!!cont soon Clap

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Posted: 16 March 2007 at 11:51am | IP Logged
 
 
Previously:

Flash Back

 

Kripa runs away but somebody stops her. His feet are shown, then his eyes, his lips and then his face.

 

Part 3

 

Flash back

 

The person is Eklavya (Kripa's brother)

 

 

 

 

E-Kripa yeh kya kar rahi ho mafi tum kyun mang rahi ho. Tumne kuch ghalat tho nahin kia.

K- Lekin  bhaiya

E- Tum dhono idhar aaho

 

Prithvi and Angad walk to Eklavya

 

E- Mafi yeh nahin mange gi tum dhono mange ge. Mafi mango

A- Kripa….mujhe maaf karo. Mein yeh sab karna nahin jhata tha, lekin mein aurtho ki izat karta hoon isliye. Lekin mera dost kabhi yeh nahin maan sakta

E- Dhekho jho bhi tum dhono ka naam hai, tum dhono ke paas dhoosri aurate hain. Unse koi problem nahin hai, phir Kripa se kya problem hai,

A- Mera naam Angad hai mujhe Kripa se koi problem nahin hai. Aur iska naam hai Prithvi, Mein inkhi taraf se mafi mangta hoon

E- That is not done Prithvi ko bhi mafi mangna parega varna mera hath uth jaye ga

P- Tho..tumhe kya Lagta hai mein tumse dartha hoon oooh dhekho mere hath kamb rahe hai oooh mujhe bohat dar lag raha hai (Prithvi laughs)…aur haan agar tum mujhe paise bhi dhete tho bhi mein kabhi mafi nahin mangta hoon

E- Teek hai iske  liye tumhe bohat bhari pehga

 

And before you know Eklavya punched Prithvi. Prithvi fell on the floor and with a jump he got up and Them two had a little stare at each other and then started beating each other up as if they were in a wrestling ring. On one hand Angad was trying to stop Prithvi and on the other hand Kripa was screaming her head off

 

K- Bhaiya yahan se jhaiye please yeh sab band karo

 

Reality

D- Mum mein samaj sakta hoon ki aap uss waqt kaise mehsoos kar rahe the, aap uss waqt roh rahe the?

K- Haan lekin…..

D- Lekin mere paas tho koi bhai behen nahin hai iss liye mein poori thara samaj nahin pa raha hoon

 

A tear fell out of Dhruv's eyes

 

D- Anyways carry on (crying)

A- Aww bechara

 

Flashback

 

Kripa kept constantly crying. While Eklavya was fighting Prithvi on the front Kripa kept hitting him on his back with her bag. Prithvi pushed her

P- Chal hat

 

Kripa  went flying back but Angad ran and grabbed her

 

A- Prithvi you *******

 

Reality

 

D- Haw papa apne ghali kadi. I am ashamed of you. Arre mujhko hamesha kehte ho yeh na karo woh na karo

K- Woh hai is liye kyun ki humne tumhe ache diye hui sanskaar diye hai

D- Tho aap dhono ke maa baap ne apko kuch bhi nahn kaha. Jab jahe yeh karo jab jhahe who karo

 

Flashback

 

Angad ran it and joined hands with Eklavya. Those two never stopped; after Prithvi was beaten up he was so badly injured  he had tp be admitted to hospital. The principal came

 

Prin-Yeh kya ho raha hai mere college mein . Guards, guards. In ko hospital mein admit karo. Now as for you to…….tum dhono ek mahine  ke liye iss college mein  kabhi nahin ayenge samje. You two are excluded.

 

Eklavya and Angad looked at each other shook hands and hugged each other

 

E- Thanks buddy Angad tumne tho mere jaan hi bachali

A- Thanks tumhe nahin mujhe kehna chaiye agar tumhare liye nahin tha tho mein kabhi realize bhi nahin karta ki Prithvi din raat kya karta hai

 

Kripa was looking at them both in confusion

 

E- Haan Kripa mere behen mujhe pata hai ki tum kya soch rahi ho

K- Kya

A- Yehi ki um dho ek doosre se itni achi tarha kaise jhante hai

K- Haan

E- Actually hum dhono nursery ek saat jahte the. Anagd mera sabse acha dost hai

A- Haan Kripa iss liye mein tumhe har takleef se bachata aiyan

E- Arre haan Angad tumne kabhi Prithvi ko  bataya kyun nahin ki tum Kripa se koi pyaar vyaar nahin karte ho balki you know what na

A- Kher main ghar chalta hoon

E- Nahin tum aise kaise jha sakte ho mein aur Kripa tumhare saat chalet hai

 

Kripa, Angad and Eklavya were walking back to there homes together

 

Coming up: What talks will go on in between Angad and Kripa

 

xxAnuxx

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Posted: 16 March 2007 at 3:03pm | IP Logged
gr8 part anu Clap Clap Clap
angad n eklavya knew eachother lol LOL
n angad punched prithvi Ouch
cont. soon

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Posted: 16 March 2007 at 3:14pm | IP Logged
yes! he is in the hospital. no, he will want revenge..


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