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Originally posted by nehagupta_9

KOOL part... so the story is in flashback type thing rite??? KOOL!!!! awesome cont soon...
 
thanx yeah ur on the exact same line as i amBig smile
 
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thanx rach i mean finally u post in one of mine thanxBig smile for a sec i thought u wudn't like itLOL
 
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 i agree, it was KINDA short!!! LOL but anywazz continue soon!!!! Tongue
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thanx i know kinda short but u understand rite..........don't worry next part will be longer than thisLOL
 
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cute part can't wait wait for the flashback Smile
 
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Previously
 
D - really? mom aap bataiye aapko papa se kaise pyaar hua?
K - mujhe tho ab bhi yaad hai jab hum pehli baar mile the
 
Angad holds Kripa's hand
 
A - mujhe bhi
 
Part 2
 

A bike was shown outside the school, someone was on the bike, no one knew who cause his face was covered with a helmet. The bike stopped and the person on the bike took off his helmet. The boy was none other than Angad Khanna:

 

 

Reality

D- Oh tho aap the hi sabse bara bachelor

A- Jee haan

D- Ok so carry on

 

Flash Back

 

A girl walked past Angad she was wearing a suit. While she was walking her dupata flew on his face. The girl turned around it was Kripa Sharma.

 

 

K- Mera dupata

A-Oh sorry

 

Angad took the dupata off his face and gave it to Kripa.Angad's friend Prithvi came up to him.

 

Reality

 

D- Oh tho aise shooru hui thi aap mein aur Prithvi uncle mein chagra

A- Haan Lekin hum the hi bohat ache dost

D- Teek hai aab jao kahani batao

 

Flash Back

 

P- Dude whats wrong with you man. Kya tum pagal ho chuke ho. Hum 1st class vale larke hain aur woh middle classed hai

 

Kripa stopped because she heard there conversation. She ran off to the toilets and started to cry.Angad ran after her. he stayed outside the girls toilets.

 

A- Jee aap dhekiye mein apka naam nahin jhanta hoon lekin mere dost ki taraf se mein apko mafi mangta hoon.

 

Kripa came out.

 

K- Nahin apki koi ghalti nahin hai. Aap bareh vale logo ki adat par gayi hai hum middle classed vale se aise baat karni ki. Aur haan Kripa naam hai mera

 

Kripa ran off. Angad felt sad and went to Prithvi

 

A- Prithvi dhekho tum yeh sab karna bhand karlo. Tum kisi na kisi ko humesha kuch kehte ho.

P- Chill dude teek hai us se kuch nahin kahun ga lekin tum mujhe dhoosro se aisi bate karne ke liye rok nahin sakte ho.

A- By the way uska naam Kripa hai

P-- Yeah yeah whatever.

 

Kripa went home. She went to her bedroom flashes kept coming in to her mind about what happened before. Gayatri her mum comes through the door.

 

G- Kripa beta kya baat hai. College mein koi jhagra hua kya?

K-Nahin maa koi log mere bhare mein baat kar rahe the bas

G- Kya kahan tha unho ne?

K- Woh actually mein pehdal jhar rahi thi aur mera dupata kisi larke ke cherhe par argaya tha. Aur jab mein jhanhe vali thi tho ussi larke ka dost keh raha tha ki ''Hum 1st claas  larke hai agar kisi ne tumko uske saat dheka tho humhari tho reputation kharab ho jaye gi.''

G- Kripa ek baat yaad rakhna ki agar usne tumhare saat kuch bhi kia tho mein us se baat karoon ghi. You don't worry na ok

 

Kripa nodded her head.

 

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Next day

 

Next day Kripa went to school. While she was walking she tripped over Prithvi's foot but before she could fall Angad grabbed her from the shoulders. Kripa and Angad looked into each others eyes but then realised where they were  

 

Reality

D-Oh my god kaisi ghandi soch thi Prithvi uncle ki, agar mein vahan hota tho tange thorta uski. Mere maa ke saat aisa karta hai. Bloody idiot

A- Dheko dhruv zada over react maat karo

 

Flash Back

A- Prithvi yeh kya thamasha kahra kar diya hai tumne.

P- Maine koi thamasha nahin kara kia hai. Thamasha tho iss larki ne kia hai. (to Kripa) Kabhi dhek ke chal nahin sakti.

K- Dhekiye mujhe pata nahin hai ki apko mujhse kya problem hai lekin mein jhanti hoon ki aap sab mujhe akele chordo please

P- Ohh tho agar hum tumhe chore ge nahin tho kya kar lo gi. Tumhari pyaari si mummy ko yahan bhulayo gi ya phir papa ko bhulayo ge.

 

Kripa gave Prithvi a dhamaka slap. Prithvi was about to slap her but before he could Angad grabbed his hand.

 

A- Prithvi maine kaha tha ki tum Kripa se kuch nahin kaho ge tho tum kyun is se tang kar rahe ho. Ek minute ke liye bechri ko chordo

 

Prithvi ignored him

 

P- Dost kehte ho apne aap ko. Hum dhono das saal se dost the.Lekin tumne woh rishta thor diya hai sirf iss middle classed larki ke liye

A- Prithvi!!!!!!!!!!!

 

Angad punched Prithvi then Prithvi punched his face thenů

K- Bas karo kya kar rahe ho. Agar mere vaje se yeh chagra hua hai tho please mujhe maaf ki jiye. Agar mujhe koi problem hai tho mujhse kaho apas mein kyun lar rahe ho. Tharas atta hai tum dhono par . I am sorry. Mein mafi mangta hoon aap sab ki zindagi mein anne ke liye.

 

Reality

D- (mocks Angad) 'Dhruv zada over react maat karo'  Over reacting mein nahin aap kar raha tha, Papa over react tho aap kar rahe the. Carry on mujhe aur batao

Flash Back

 

Kripa runs away but somebody stops her. His feet are shown, then his eyes, his lips and then his face.

 

Coming up: Who will the person be, and what will he do

 

xxAnuxx



Edited by Anu1993 - 09 March 2007 at 1:50pm

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Excellent part!!!! I like the switch between flashbacks n reality, dats kool!!!!

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great part
i love druv's dialogue D- (mocks Angad) 'Dhruv zada over react maat karo' Over reacting mein nahin aap kar raha tha, Papa over react tho aap kar rahe the. Carry on mujhe aur batao

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Posted: 09 March 2007 at 2:33pm | IP Logged
awww... love ar first site or just respect for women.. either U GO BOY!!!        that guys is her friend. rite?

continue soooonnn

i thought vivan was the kid's name...

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