Originally posted by: nehagupta_9
Excellent part!!!! I like the switch between flashbacks n reality, dats kool!!!!
Originally posted by: IndianCutie13
great part
i love druv's dialogue D- (mocks Angad) 'Dhruv zada over react maat karo' Over reacting mein nahin aap kar raha tha, Papa over react tho aap kar rahe the. Carry on mujhe aur batao
Originally posted by: brainychild92
awww... love ar first site or just respect for women.. either U GO BOY!!! that guys is her friend. rite?
continue soooonnn
i thought vivan was the kid's name...
Originally posted by: janu_2006
hi
just read yr ff n is too gud
cont. soon
great part continue soon π π π
Flash Back
Kripa runs away but somebody stops her. His feet are shown, then his eyes, his lips and then his face.
Part 3
Flash back
The person is Eklavya (Kripa's brother)
E-Kripa yeh kya kar rahi ho mafi tum kyun mang rahi ho. Tumne kuch ghalat tho nahin kia.
K- Lekin bhaiya
E- Tum dhono idhar aaho
Prithvi and Angad walk to Eklavya
E- Mafi yeh nahin mange gi tum dhono mange ge. Mafi mango
A- Kripaβ¦.mujhe maaf karo. Mein yeh sab karna nahin jhata tha, lekin mein aurtho ki izat karta hoon isliye. Lekin mera dost kabhi yeh nahin maan sakta
E- Dhekho jho bhi tum dhono ka naam hai, tum dhono ke paas dhoosri aurate hain. Unse koi problem nahin hai, phir Kripa se kya problem hai,
A- Mera naam Angad hai mujhe Kripa se koi problem nahin hai. Aur iska naam hai Prithvi, Mein inkhi taraf se mafi mangta hoon
E- That is not done Prithvi ko bhi mafi mangna parega varna mera hath uth jaye ga
P- Tho..tumhe kya Lagta hai mein tumse dartha hoon oooh dhekho mere hath kamb rahe hai oooh mujhe bohat dar lag raha hai (Prithvi laughs)β¦aur haan agar tum mujhe paise bhi dhete tho bhi mein kabhi mafi nahin mangta hoon
E- Teek hai iske liye tumhe bohat bhari pehga
And before you know Eklavya punched Prithvi. Prithvi fell on the floor and with a jump he got up and Them two had a little stare at each other and then started beating each other up as if they were in a wrestling ring. On one hand Angad was trying to stop Prithvi and on the other hand Kripa was screaming her head off
K- Bhaiya yahan se jhaiye please yeh sab band karo
Reality
D- Mum mein samaj sakta hoon ki aap uss waqt kaise mehsoos kar rahe the, aap uss waqt roh rahe the?
K- Haan lekinβ¦..
D- Lekin mere paas tho koi bhai behen nahin hai iss liye mein poori thara samaj nahin pa raha hoon
A tear fell out of Dhruv's eyes
D- Anyways carry on (crying)
A- Aww bechara
Flashback
Kripa kept constantly crying. While Eklavya was fighting Prithvi on the front Kripa kept hitting him on his back with her bag. Prithvi pushed her
P- Chal hat
Kripa went flying back but Angad ran and grabbed her
A- Prithvi you *******
Reality
D- Haw papa apne ghali kadi. I am ashamed of you. Arre mujhko hamesha kehte ho yeh na karo woh na karo
K- Woh hai is liye kyun ki humne tumhe ache diye hui sanskaar diye hai
D- Tho aap dhono ke maa baap ne apko kuch bhi nahn kaha. Jab jahe yeh karo jab jhahe who karo
Flashback
Angad ran it and joined hands with Eklavya. Those two never stopped; after Prithvi was beaten up he was so badly injured he had tp be admitted to hospital. The principal came
Prin-Yeh kya ho raha hai mere college mein . Guards, guards. In ko hospital mein admit karo. Now as for you toβ¦β¦.tum dhono ek mahine ke liye iss college mein kabhi nahin ayenge samje. You two are excluded.
Eklavya and Angad looked at each other shook hands and hugged each other
E- Thanks buddy Angad tumne tho mere jaan hi bachali
A- Thanks tumhe nahin mujhe kehna chaiye agar tumhare liye nahin tha tho mein kabhi realize bhi nahin karta ki Prithvi din raat kya karta hai
Kripa was looking at them both in confusion
E- Haan Kripa mere behen mujhe pata hai ki tum kya soch rahi ho
K- Kya
A- Yehi ki um dho ek doosre se itni achi tarha kaise jhante hai
K- Haan
E- Actually hum dhono nursery ek saat jahte the. Anagd mera sabse acha dost hai
A- Haan Kripa iss liye mein tumhe har takleef se bachata aiyan
E- Arre haan Angad tumne kabhi Prithvi ko bataya kyun nahin ki tum Kripa se koi pyaar vyaar nahin karte ho balki you know what na
A- Kher main ghar chalta hoon
E- Nahin tum aise kaise jha sakte ho mein aur Kripa tumhare saat chalet hai
Kripa, Angad and Eklavya were walking back to there homes together
Coming up: What talks will go on in between Angad and Kripa
xxAnuxx
Originally posted by: janu_2006
gr8 part anu π π π
angad n eklavya knew eachother lol π
n angad punched prithvi
cont. soon
Originally posted by: brainychild92
yes! he is in the hospital. no, he will want revenge..
continue soonnn
Originally posted by: nehagupta_9
Excellent part
Originally posted by: johnrocks96
great part anu!!!!!!cont soon π
Flash Back
A- Kher main ghar chalta hoon
E- Nahin tum aise kaise jha sakte ho mein aur Kripa tumhare saat chalte hai
Kripa, Angad and Eklavya were walking back to there homes together
Coming up: What talks will go on in between Angad and Kripa
Part 4-The talk between A and K
A- Tho kahan rehthi ho tum
K- Umm.....
A- Kya iss ke liye soch na pare ga
K- Nahin woh dukaan jhante ho jahan sabseeyaan (vegtables) kareed the hain
A- Haan
K- Uske samne ek mansion hai vahan main rehthi hoon
A- Ooh, tho tum mansion mein rehthi ho. bohat barah hoga na
K- Haan barah hai lekin mein nahin jhathi hoon ki koi iss ghar ko nazar lag jaye
A- Haan lekin tareef (praise) tho karni paregee
K- Haan woh tho hai
A- (To Eklavya) Teek hai mein tumhe milne ahoonga aur ghar bhi dhekloo ga
K- Woh tho nahin ho sakta
A- (To Kripa) Kyun?
K- Woh issliye hai ki har friday Eklavya bhaiya dubai jahte hain
A- Woh kyun?
K- Kyunki bhaiya vahan job karte hai. Issliye tum bhaiya ko weekend mein nahin mil sakte.
A- Oh thats not fair. Eklavya tumne batayaa kyun nahin?
E- Because it was a surprise aur mein jhata tha ki Kripa hee tumahe batayegi samje
A- Haan samaj gaya
K- Tho angad tum job kare ho
A- Haan mere papa family buisness samalte hain. Aur ussne mere liye ek office save ki hai. Main vahi mein kaam karta hoon. What about you?
K- Me?
A- Yes you?
K- Mein kaam nahin karti hoon mere papa kehte hain ki, betiyaan family buisness nahin karte.
A- Oh,
K- Lekin hum dost tho baan sakte hai aab hum dho ek doosre ke bhare mein khafi jahnte hai. Mujhse dosti karoge
A- Haan
K- Great
E- Yeh kya hai tum dhono tho aise baat kar rahe hai jaise ki main yahan nahin hoon
Reality
D-Bohat lambhi conversation thi pata nahin aap dhono kaise bored nahin hui kyun ki mujhe sone ka maaan kar raha hai
K- Badmash tu chup re pata nahin tumhari zuban se aur kya niklega. Agar dubara kuch kaha tho zuban keech lu gi main tumahari
D- Mother apne just chill gana suna hai
K- Haan
D- Tho aap bhi zarah sa chilled ho jayiye....oh haan mein tho bhul gaya tha aap tho aab bhudi ho gayi hai
K- Dhruv!!!!!
D- Sorry sorry (laughing) mein iss lambhi kahani mein swaad la raha tha, phir kya hua
K- Phir...
Angad and Kripa laugh
A- Anyways main chalta hoon mera ghar tho raste mein hai
E- Nahin Angad mein aur meri pyaari behen tumhe aise nahin jhane de ge. Kyun nahin Kripa?
K- Haan bhaiya teek hee tho keh rahe hai. Chalo main aur bhaiya tumhe ghar valo se milate hain
A- Ok it's fine with me
A comes along with K and E to their house. They come inside the house. When the family see Angad they all freak out. Gayatri comes up to Angad
G- Oh Angad Khanna. It is nice to meet you again
K- Maa aap Angad ko jante hain?
G- Haan dharasal Angad ke papa tumhare papa se nafrat karte hain
K- Kya matlab hai aap ka?
G- Mera matlab hai ki Angad aur usske papa Dilip Khanna humare rivals hai
Surya comes down the stairs.
S- Gayatri ghar pe kaun aiyaa hai
G- Tum yahan aaho. Jhatka lag jayega
Surya comes downstairs and gets the shock of his life
S- Yeh yahan kya kar raha hai
K- Papa yeh tho Eklavya bhaiya ka dost hain
S- Acha Eklavya bhaiya ka.........Tum dhono sunlo aaj ke baad isse ghar mein koi Khaana rishtedhar nahin aahyega
Reality
D- Aap dhono aab kaise ek saat hai jab ki aap ke parivaar ek doosre se nafrat karte the
K- Nahin Dhruv hum aap nahin aab bataonge varna surprise kaise re ga
Angad leaves, Kripa runs up stairs and Eklavya gets ready to go to dubai for his job. After Eku packs up he goes to Kripa
E- Kripa tum.....
K- Main roh rahi nahin hoon
E- Tum teek tho ho.....Mera matlab hai ki tum dhono ki dosti hui ek ghanta bhi nahin hua aur toot gaya
K- Haan bhaiya but i don't care. Main mama ki baat sunogee. aur mujhe lagta hain ki tumhe bhi mama ki baat sun ni chaiye
E- Teek hai lekin chalta hoon
K- Bye
Kripa goes up to Eklavya and hugs him
K- Jhaldi anna
E- Teek hai
The scene shifts to Angad's house he is talking to someone in his office and is very dark
Reality
D- Haaww papa what were you up to
A- Woh mein kal bataoon ga tu aab sonja
D- Teek hai
Coming up: Who do you think Angad is talking to?
xxAnuxx
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