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cool story and banner.. prettyyy iwth all the hearts.

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sounds like a cool story and banner.. prettyyy iwth all the hearts.

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Part 1
 
Angad and Kripa are shown in a big house (the one from kumkum) they were sitting next to each other.  Their son Dhruv came and sat on the floor in front of Kripa to get his hair oiled
 
D - mom
K - hmm
D - voh aaj college mein pata kya hua.....
A - kya hua?
D - main chup chaap bet raha tha canteen mein ke achanak ek larki ne aake mujhe zor se chata mara
K (laughs) - kya?
D - I know mom, mujhe tho pata nahin tha ke voh kaun thi....mujhe kyun maar rahi thi
A - tune hi kuch kiya hoga
D - me?
 
Dhruv turned around and faced his dad
 
D - kehna kya chahte hai papa?
A - yehi ke tune hi kuch kiya hoga jo voh larki ne tujhe maara
D - thats not fair, ma tell him, maine kuch nahin kiya
K - acha? tho usne maara kyun?
D - mujhe kya pata? shahid ke usse kuch bahana chahiye tha Dhruv Khanna ke kareeb aane ke liye
A - haan.....Dhruv Khanna...most elegible bachelor of all of India kyun?
D (smiles proudly) - haan voh tho hai
 
Angad smiles, Kripa hits him lightly, Dhruv realises that Angad is being sarcastic
 
D - papa...aap mera mazak ura rahe hai?
A - main? aur mazak? bilkul nahin........main tho tumhari taang keech raha hoon
D - ma!!! inhe kahiye
K - acha bas bhi karo Angad, kyun sata rahe ho mere bete ko
 
Dhruv puts his head on Kripa's lap and hugs her
 
D - thats like my good mom
K - of course
A - oh tho saare pyaar bete ke liye? mere liye kuch nahin?
D - papa....aapko tho mom bees saal se pyaar karti aayi hai, mujhe ab thoda sa tho lene di jiye
A - nautanki kahin ka
D - main nautanki kar raha hoon? me? Mr Dhruv Khanna?
A - yes you Mr Dhruv Khanna!
D (laughs) - aakhir beta kis ka hoon
 
Kripa and Dhruv laugh, Angad gets upset
 
A - Dhruv! behave yourself!
K - kya Angad......
A - vaise baat tho sahi kahi isne
D - kaunsi?
A - aaj yeh Mumbai ka sabse elegible bachelor hai
D - correct
A - tho jab main teri umar ka tha....pata kaun Mumbai ka sabse elegble bachelor tha?
D - definately Prithvi uncle
A (laughs)  - Prithvi!! pagal hogaya hai....bachelor main tha! sab ladkiyan mere peeche bhaag thi thi
 
Dhruv starts laughing
 
D - papa jhoot mat boliye
A - main jhoot nahin bol raha! I was the most handsome guy in my college.....tabhi tho teri maa mujhpe fida hui
D - really? mom aap bataiye aapko papa se kaise pyaar hua?
K - mujhe tho ab bhi yaad hai jab hum pehli baar mile the
 
Angad holds Kripa's hand
 
A - mujhe bhi
 
I know its not that long but it's just the introduction, the next part will be longer
 
 


Edited by Anu1993 - 23 March 2007 at 5:23am

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Posted: 02 March 2007 at 4:31pm | IP Logged
KOOL part... so the story is in flashback type thing rite??? KOOL!!!! awesome cont soon...

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Posted: 02 March 2007 at 4:50pm | IP Logged
gr8 ff n gr8 part Clap

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Posted: 02 March 2007 at 5:15pm | IP Logged
awww, such an AMAZING nd CUTE prt!! Clap
i agree, it was KINDA short!!! LOL but anywazz continue soon!!!! Tongue
with a longer prt!!! Wink LOL

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Posted: 02 March 2007 at 7:23pm | IP Logged
looking foward 4   ur next part Clap

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cute part can't wait wait for the flashback Smile

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