EPSB- Angad n Neevs punishmentPt-11 Pg-9 - Page 6

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Posted: 16 years ago

Previously:

K- Angad yeh kya hua tujhe!

Ang- Anu se pooch humesha karti hai aise iss liye mein darta tha iss se lekin dad ne zabardast kaha tha ki agar tune Anu ko kush nahin rakha tho.

Kripa started laughing out loud at Angad's state

Ang- Mein iss halat mein hoon aur tum has reahi ho

Angad and Kripa chased each other

Part 10-The wild ride of Angad and Neev

Next morning- Kripa's house

K- Bye mum bye dad mujhe drama lessons mein jhaldhi jana parega aur mein late nahin hona jhati

S/G- Teek hai beta

G- Lekin itni dher mat lagana

K- Don't worry mum

Kripa got out of the house notices a red ferrari standing there:

K- Woh ghaddi kis ki hai

She looks carefully and sees someoine eating a banana.

The person throws the banana peel on the floor and doesn't notice that there is someone coming Kripa notices that it is a girl the girl was on the phone and wasn't paying attention and slips. Neev looks at her and trys to hide his face. The girl looks at him

G- Tumhe kuch dekhayi nahin detha

N- I can explain

G- Whatever

Kripa starts to laugh. The girl gets up she is:

Natasha from Kayamat, Neevs ex girl friend

N- Oh my gosh Natsha tum

Nat- Arre Neev tum yahaan kaise tum London mein the

N- I know lekin mujhe Kripa ki vaje se yahaan aahna para

Nat- Oh Kripa she was a nice girl

N- Haan and she is my best friend

Neev and Nat stop talking and Kripa comes in between

K- Hi Natasha

Nat- Hi Kripa tum kaisi ho

Nat hugs Kripa

Nat- (whispers) Neev se door raho

K- Mein teek hoon tum

Nat- Mein bhi teek hoon, mera aur Neev ka break up ke baad tho...

There was a long silent moment

Nat- Teek hai tho phir mein chalti hoon

N- Yeh

Nat goes

N- Aab tho ghaadi mein beth jao madam mein koi taxi nahin hoon joh ghanto tak intezaar kare

K- Neev

Those two start to laugh

Kripa reaches college and goes to drama class

Her teacher Professor Bajaj comes through the door

PB- Kripa!

K- Jee Professor

PB- Tumhara partner aaj ke baad Prithvi nahin hoga kyun ki tum dhono ke beech chagre hote rehte hai iss liye aaj ke baad tumhara partner Angad hoga

Kripa is very shocked

K- Teek hai Professor Bajaj

Kripa's friend Harshani...

...comes through the door and sits by Kripa

H- Tumhara partner kaun hai

K- Angad

H- Oh my gosh wow Kripa your so lucky

K- I know lekin agar papa ko pata chal gaya tho pat nahin kya hoga Khanna's Sharma ke rivals hai aab, pehle dost the aab pata nahin kya ho gaya

H- Dont worry sab kuch teek ho jaye ga

K- I am pretty sure

Half way through the lesson

K- Angad mein tumhare bina nahin jee sakti tumhe pata hai ki maine tumhare liye kya kuch nahin kia hai

Anu and Neev come through the door

A- I know Kripa lekin tum mere type kee larki nahin ho

K- Teek hai agar tum mere nahin ho sakte tho kisi aur

ke nahin ho sakte

Kripa grabs a knife...

PB-Cut!!! What a brilliant performance

N/Anu- Thank god

N- I know mujhe lagta tha ke in dhono ke beech kuch ho raha tha

Anu -Mujhe bhi aisa laga tha

Kripa and Angad finished drama lessons

Anu and Kripa hug

Anu- Kash mein tumhari tarah act kar sakti thi (whispers) Angad se door raho varna mein...

Neev grabs Kripa and takes her some where else

K- Neev yeh kya kar rahe ho tum

N-mujhe kuch baat karni hai

K- Angad ke samne nahin ke sakte the

N- No akele mein baat karni thi

K- Kis bare mein

N- Yeh kehne ke liye lee yeh dosti mere liye aab dosti nahin rahi hai dosti se zada bhar gaye hai

K- Kya kehna hai tumhe

N- Kripa I...

K- I...what

N- I love you

K- Kya tum sach ke rahe ho

N- Haan Kripa tum mere kayalo mein mere sapno mein sab kuch aab tum ho

K- I love you to Neev

Them two hug each other, they stop hugging

Kripa starts to laugh

K- Tumhe kya lagta hai kee tum phir se mujhe bevacoof banaoyo ge

N- Main has nahin raha hoon sach bol raha hoon aur dekha bhi sakta hoon

Neev grabs a knife and

K- Rukho

Neev stops

K- Tumnne sabit kar kiya hai aab chale

N- Haan

A few minutes later- Angad and Kripa

Angad is messing around with Anu by the time the bell rings

A-Yeh ghanti bhi na ghalat waqt par bajti hai

Anu- Bilkul sayee ke rahe ho tum

Angad goes to his next class which is with Neev

A- Neev kya tum aaj free ho

N- Kyun date par le jana jhate ho kya

A- Shut up, mere baat kan kulkhar sunlo aaj hum dhono

bar jaa rahe hai

N- Kya

A- Sirf hum dhono, Kripa ko mat batao, aur main Anu ko nahin bataoon

N- Teek hai

It is 5 o'clock Neev and Angad are ready and are at the bar them two start singing Hey Ganpat

Blue-Angad

Purple-Neev

Black- All

Pink-Girls

Hey Ganpat, chal daro la

Ice chala soda kum thoda paani mila

Thoda table vable saaf kar de na yaar

Hey Ganpat Ganpat

Come on come on and everybody

Come on come on and move your body

Come on come on and shake your body

Shake your ass

In the Mumbai, all over India

We are the bhais

In the Mumbai, all over India

We are the bhais

Bhai mein bhai tu phikar na kar

Usski maa ki uski behen ki joh dekhe idhar

Apun ko bata de kabhi ho gayi fantar
Sabki fatati apane naam se apun jaaye jidhar
Thoda coke shoke tho apun ke dost ko de na yaar

Thoda coke shoke tho apun ke dost ko de na yaar

Hey ganpat ganpat

Hey ganpat, chal daro la

In the Mumbai, all over India

We are the bhais

In the Mumbai, all over India

We are the bhais

Bipasha, Mallika, Priyanka ya ho Aishwariya Rai

Jaaye saali jaake jahaan marzi maraaye

Yash Chopra, Subhash Ghai apni picture banaaye

Apun kya lena, jaise taise, paise kamaaye

Apun ko toh chaahiye din mein special chaai

Shaam ko daaru, raat ko ladki aur nind aa jaaye

Hey ganpat ganpat

Hey ganpat chal..

Dekh paltke main hoon kudiye

Har paase main hoon kudiye

Tu dil hain main jaan hoon kudiye

Shake your ass

Dekh paltke main hoon kudiye

Har paase main hoon kudiye

Tu dil hain main jaan hoon kudiye

Shake your ass

In the Mumbai, all over India

We are the bhais

In the Mumbai...

We are the bhais

Congress smart party ya phir hove bjp

Sabko support hoti only tere bhaai ki

Ohi saala phaalatu vaalatu tapaka daal du main

Maar maar ke maar maar ke phaad daalata hoon main

Thoda murga shurga murga shurga de na yaar

Hey ganpat chal doro la

Hey ganpat hmm chal doro la

Come on come on and everybody

Come on come on and move your body

Come on come on and shake your body

Shake your ass

In the Mumbai, all over India

We are the bhais

In the Mumbai, all over India

We are the bhais

Come on come on and everybody

Come on come on and move your body

Come on come on and shake your body

In the Mumbai, all over India

We are the bhais

Hey Ganpat, hey ganpat, hey ganpat...

Pan yeh Ganpat kaun hai

Coming up: Part 11 What will happen when Kripa and Anu find out

about Angad and Neevs night will they think that they are cheating

on them to see wait till next part

10 or more comments and i will continue tommoro😃

xxAnuxx

Edited by Anu1993 - 16 years ago

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Rachandeep

@Rachu_1987

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+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

Great Part i really liked the drama bit 👏

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234920

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Posted: 16 years ago

great job like usual 👏 👏
anyways thanks for updating 😊
continue soon...
-Nisha ❤️

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Jaspreet

@~*~john_4_lyf~*

Senior Member

Posted: 16 years ago

Great Part Anu i loved the song it was funny please continue 👏

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Anupreet

@Anu1993

Goldie

Posted: 16 years ago

Previously

Hey Ganpat, hey ganpat, hey ganpat

Pan yeh Ganpat kaun hai......

Coming up: Part 11 What will happen when Kripa and Anu find out about Angad and Neevs night will they think that they are cheatin on them to see wait till next part

Part 11

Kripa is waiting for Neev, she tries to call him but he foesn't answer, she calls Angad but he also doesn't answer, Kripa then tries and calls Anu, who answers

An - hey Kripa

K - hey, Anu voh main Neev ka wait kar rahi thi lekin voh abhi tak aaya nahin, aur na voh phone uta raha hai

An - really? main bhi Angad ko phone kar rahi thi lekin voh bhi nahin uta raha

K - what? kya voh bata ke gaya ke voh kahan ja raha hai?

An - nope, did Neev?

K - ....nahin

An - hmmm shayad voh bahar gaye hai.....i mean Angad likes to drink and have fun...maybe they went to a bar

K - nahin nahin Neev aisa nahin hai

An - are you sure? hum dhek tho sakte hai

K - ok then, tum mere ghar aa jao aur hum saath mein sab bar aur clubs mein dhekte hai

An - ok im coming

Anu comes to Kripa's house and they both leave to go search for Angad and Neev, they go into about 5 clubs and 3 pubs but don't find them, Kripa sees a club nearby

K - Anu vahan dhekte hai

An - chalo

Anu and Kripa go into the club and look around, Kripa spots Angad

K - Anu voh dhek, Angad

Anu looks then sees Neev

An - vahan Neev bhi hai

K - kya!

Kripa looks and gets shocked, both girls are further shocked to see all these random girls surrounding them dancing and touching them all over

An - Angad....you're dead

K - Neev...I'm going to kill you

Both girls watch as Angad and Neev smile at the random girls letting them touch and feel them and also feeling some of them, Kripa and Anu make their way through the crowd, Angad sees Anu but thinks he is dreaming and continues having fun, when he still sees Anu standing there he freezes

A - A....A..A...Anu....

Neev is still dancing around with the girls when Angad taps his shoulder, Neev shrugs him off but Angad pulls Neev away from the girls and points to Anu and Kripa, Neev looks at Angad then both of them fall to their knees in front of their respective girlfriends folding their hands

N - humhe maaf kardo!

A - hum dobara aisa nahin karenge

N - humse galti hogayi

A - hum batak gaye the

N - vaise mere koi ghalti nahin thi woh Angad mujhe zabardast lekar aaya varna mein aisa kabhi nahin karta

Angad pushes him

A - chup kar (whispers)

An - get up now

K - chalo humhare saath

Angad and Neev slowly get up, Kripa and Anu leave the club

A - jante hai ab kya hoga?

N - maar parne vali hai

A - bohat......mujhe abhi se dard hone laga hai

N - anyways, yeh sab teri galti hai, agar tu mujhe yana nahin lekar aata tho yeh nahin hota

A - meri galti?

N - haan teri galti

A - tu mujhe kaise blame kar sakta hai

N - tujhe nahin tho kisko blame karoon?

Neev and Angad begin arguing when Anu and Kripa come and pull them outside. Later both guys are sitting on the couch at Kripa's house watching as Anu and Kripa shout at them

K - tum dono aisa kaise kar sakte ho?

An - bilkul besharam ho tum dono!

K - Angad tum tho teek ho lekin Neev tum? tum bhi aise nikalo ge main

e kabhi socha nahin tha

N - voh tho yeh...

K - chup!

Neev puts a finger on his lips

An - aur Angad tum? tumhe thodi si akal bhi nahin hai? kaise tum un stupid ladkiyion ke saath naach rahe the, chee!

A - akal hai mujhe...

An - shut up!

K - sazaa tho milegi

An - haan voh bhi aisi sazaa ke tum dono yaad rakoge

A - kaisi.....

N - sazaa...

Later Angad is scrubbing the kitchen floor clean while Neev is washing and cleaning the dishes

N - kahan phaas gaye.....phir se keh raha hoon, sab teri galti hai

A - tu chup hota ke ek doon tujhe! chup chap kaam kar

N - yaar...i haven't seen so much dishes in my life

A - ....and i've never cleaned a floor this much

Just when Neev thinks all the dishes are finished, Kripa and Anu come with more and just when Angad thinks he has finished scrubbing the floor, Anu comes to him and tell him to wash the bathroom, both guys begin to cry

N - bas bhi karo...humhe apni galti ka ehsaas ho chuka hai

A - please hum dobara aisa nahin karenge, please aur sazaa mat do humhe

K - tumhe kya lagta?

An - chalo maar kar dete hai

A/N - thank you!

Neev drops the dish in his hand and falls to the floor while Angad drops the cloth in his hand and also lies on the floor, the girls laugh, Neev gets up and leaves the kitchen and Anu follows him, Kripa smiles and puts her hand forwrad to help Angad up but she slips and falls on top of him, both stare at each other until Kripa realises what she is doing and tries to get up but slips again, Angad laughs at her, Kripa gets angry and throws the soap filled sponge on him, Angad retaliates and throws the soapy water on her getting her all wet, Kripa screams and gets up and gets a jug, fills it with water and throws it on Angad then quickly runs away before he can do anything

coming up - part 12 - Angad begins to feel something for Kripa

10 or more comments and i will continue tommorow😃

xxAnuxx

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Rachandeep

@Rachu_1987

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

Great Part it was so funnny espeacially the punishments 😆

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Jaspreet

@~*~john_4_lyf~*

Senior Member

Posted: 16 years ago

Great Part the punishments were good 👏 and funny 😆

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25099

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

lolz the punishment was funny,i tried ti imagine it and lolz!!!ur fanfic is funny,great part!!!!!!! 😆 plz continue soon!

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Rhea

@rheuji17

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

hey just caught up wen r u continuing this ff i read dil hi dil mein and its grt ur back but plz con this one too

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