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ANGAD-KRIPA:UNFAITHFUL part 48.A pg 55 (Page 3)

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Posted: 23 February 2007 at 6:50am | IP Logged
great part
kripa should tell angad she loves him
nice to hear that dadi is better

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Posted: 23 February 2007 at 7:19am | IP Logged
i just read the wholle FF nd i loved it specially the last part thatw as awsome! do continue soon cant wait to read more Tongue Clap Clap
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Posted: 23 February 2007 at 8:57am | IP Logged

great part

this was the best part ever

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wow super mind blowing     gr88888888888888 con soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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great fanfic.. kripa is in such a big predicament.. what will she do.. hmmm

continue soooooon
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guyz thanx for all yer replies!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thanx a zillion LOL
i m about to post the next part and hope u like that as well..........its gonna b gud for a while until i turn my mind evil!!!11 Tongue
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The nextscene shifts to night, kripa is in her bedroom, standing by the window,
'I am sorry mishty. I betrayed your trust.tum jisse pyar karti thi maine usi se.' and a tear stroked down her eye.
'wah ri kismet, kya khel khela hai. Jisse mishty pyaar karti hia ussi se tune mera dil judwa diya.' And she did not sleep the rest of the night.
The case was the same with angad.
"angad Khanna ne pehli baar kisi se pyaar kiyaaur usi ne use thukra diya.. par kripa kya samajhti hai, uske naa kehne se uska pyar jhutla jayega? No no ways kripa. I know u love me just the ways I love you.' He thot nad then the flashes of him and kripa kissing came back in his mind and left a smile on his face.

The next day kripa went to the hospital ot meet dadi, but she was still in I.C.U., she could not meet her. The whole day neither of them, angad or kripa, met each other. But noth missed each other.
So at night when angad could bear it no more, he decided to call kripa and discuss the matter. But she had switched off her cell.

The next day dadi is released from the hospital. At her home,
"dadi ab kaisa lag raha hai?" angad asked.
"Ab theek hai beta." She said weakly. Then she noticed that angad was looking very worn out. "kya hua angad?, itne pareshan kyun lag rahe ho?"
"dadi aap beemar theen naa isiliye. Ab aap jaldi theek ho jaiye, toh main bhi theek ho jaaunga." He said, though he knew he was upset majorly because of kripa. He wanted to tell her the truth, but wasn't sure whether he should or not because the doctor had told her not to take stress."
"angad tujhe toh maaloom hai kit u dadi kea age jhooth nahi bol sakta., toh fir koshish hi kyun karta hai?" she smiled and added, "mujhe sabh such such bata. Kya baat hai?" she had that convicing power in her eyes. Finally he made up her mind and told ger each and everything.
"angad kya tum usse sachi main pyaar karte ho?"she asked. She knew he did, but she wanted to tell him the real value of love, but then thot that it was not the right time.
"haan dadi. Dadi main kripa ko pehle bilkul pasand nahi karta tha.par main galat tha dadi, amine apne pyaar ko nafrat samajh liya tha." A little smile then flickered on his face. "dadi", he said looking nowhere and lost, "love is beautiful. Par kripa mishty ki wajah se inkaar kar rahi hai. Kuch kariye naa dadi." She felt that angad was really in love. As there came a warmness in his eyes whenever he took her name. and moreover she felt that kripa was wrong to a certain extent.
"angad main kripa se baat karungi, par ek shrt par."
"theek hai dadi, bataiye kya shart hai. Iskeliye kuch bhi."
"jab main kripa se baat karungi, tab tum yahan nahi hoge.". she said. She thought that if he would be present then kripa will not be able to take hre decision.
"bolo, tum jaoge naa?"
"pakka dadi. Main bahar rahunga aur aap aur kripa aat kar sakte hain."
"lekin ab aap use bulao toh sahi."
"uski zaroorat nahi hai angad. Meri usse subah hi baat ho gayi, she will be here within half an hour."
And the kripa came, but she was trying to ignore him.
"addi and angad were sitting on the sofa, buta as she came, he got up and left.
"ab aap kaisi hain dadi." She asked, but she was surprised to see that angad left.
"main theek hoon beta. Tum akisi ho?"
"main bhi. Dadi ab aap kum boliye aur yeh kya, aap bedroom mein jaa ke rest kariye naa."
"bhai kripa, tumhe toh pata hi hoga ki kisi maa ke bache mushkil main hain toh wo maa kaisi chayan se baith sakti hai."
'oh god. Yeh dadi kya keh rahi hain, kahin angad ne unhe sab kuch toh nahi bata diya.' She wondered.
"nahi dadi. Who khush nahi reh sakti."
"toh kripa, jab main aayi toh angad ne bataaya ki who khush nahi hai."
Kripa kwhat was coming.what wud she tell dadi now?
"kripa", dadi said in a commanding voice, "kya tum angad se pyaar karti ho?"dadi was to the point.
Kripa was in a now. She was in a situation in which she wanted to tell the truth, but it was tooo bitter.
"kripa tumhari aankhien sab keh rahi hain. Beta main toh pehle se hi ajnti thi kit um dono ek dusre se pyaar karte ho. Ek rishte ko banana ke liye, beta pehle uski buniyaad ko banana zaroori hota hai. Agar tum aisa karoge, to who rishta khud ba khud banat chala jayega. Kripa ab main thak ho gayi honn aur aaram karne jaa rahi hoon. Tum aur angad, plz, apne liye isska solution nikalo kripa. Angad tumhara bahar intezaar kar raha hai." She said this and left.
Dadi had convinced her to think about their relation. All kripa wanted to do now was to forget everything and just go to angad and tell him that she loved him very much. So she went outside and found angad standin beside the entrance door. As she came his eyes looked her expectantly.
"kripa", before he could say anythingelse, she ran towards him and hugged him tightly, which he welcomed.
"kripa, main janta tha, who ek galti nahi thi." He said half crying, half laughing.
"angad mujhe chod ke mat jaana, mujhe tumhaari bahut zaroorat hai. I love you."
He brot her to face her, and looked at her with so much intensity, that made her legs weak.
[guyz……remember this:

"kripa", he said shaggily,"agar tum mere saath ho toh main kisi se bhi lad sakta hoon, kuch bhi kar sakta hoon. Bus tum mera saath kabhi mat chodna."
"kabhi nahi angad, kabhi nahi."
They both smiled and looked at each other. And they felt that the world was theirs. Angad pulled kripa a little closer and said,
"kripa, aaj amin tumhe apna farm house dikhana chahta hoon. Kya tum aur main dinner ikkathe kar saktein hai?"
"haan angad, main aaungi." She said smilingly.
Angad and kripa then left dadis place and headed their respective homes. They were both smiling at each other. Then this song plays,…

Thandi hawaayein hai, jaadoo ka mausam hai...
Har shakh ujli hai...
Har dhoond roshan hai...

Kaisa ghazab ka samaa hai...
Aise mein dil sochtha hai...
Shaayad kisi pal mein...
Apni mohabbat ka, hone ko deedaar hai...

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Posted: 24 February 2007 at 12:10am | IP Logged
that was a gr8 part
plz continue soon

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