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Posted: 12 February 2007 at 3:51pm | IP Logged

hey guys this iz gona b da story i'll b submiting for the valentines day contest on pulkitmouni.piczo.com...plz comment on how i m doing...so i can submit a best one!!!

PART 1

This story takes pplace efore kt n lakshya had confessed their love to each other

They loved each other very much… but didn't really hv the courage to say it.

Kt in the kitchen as usual along with damini n ganga.

Lakshya meanwhile was in this room tlking to him friend Amit on the phone.

 

Lakshya {lying on his stinky LOL bed} : no yaar, I cant cum to the valentines day party

Am: y not!!

L: cuzzz…cuzzz…. I dunt hv a date

Amit waz shocked… thinking dat the most popular (n HOTTEST) guy of da college refusing to cum b/c he doesn't hv a date

Am:wa r u serious… our college's heartrob no hving a date… I dunt believe dat!

L: no itz not dat… I can find any date anytime…but I m in love

Amit bursts into laaughters

Am: (laughing)lakshya tum aur ek ladki…. Its soo im-

Lakshya interrupts him

L: wats soo funny….aur haan  yaar …leking

Amit does the same , interrupts

Am: kya lekin… u r sooo good w/ girls… aur sari ladkiiya tumpe toh marti hai toh fir problem kya hai

L: wohh meeri college ki ladkiyon ki tarra nahi hai…bohot simple si…kute hai…pyarri si smile ( kt's pic cums up in his head… as he describes it to amit)

Am: ok ok… she wont say no…trust meee yaar… n I DUNT CARE UR CUMING!

Amit hangs up on lakshya

L: ammmit.>!! phone kat diya….

Lakshya put the receiver down… n shuts his eyes. Lying on the bed he thinks abt all the special moments he spent with kt… his dreams r once agin interrupted by the knocking

It waz archita…

A: lakshya bhaiyya… mein shopping jaah rahi huan…

L: toh mein kya karoo.. naachu (smiles n gets up from his bed)

A: (makes an angry face) verry funny….

Lakshya begins to laugh

L: ok sorry …bolo kya hai

A: who… kya hai… mami bahar gayi hai aur memre pas enough money nahi hai

L: (touches his forehead) haii bhagwan… tum ladkiya kitna shopping kare the hoh.

A: (irritated) paise dene ho toh doh varna mein jaah rahi huan (starts to leave)

L: thhekk hai… de that huan…(he reaches for his bak pockets n takes out ten Rps.500 bill (srry dunt knoe Indian currency sign) yeh loh.. khush

Archita jubilantly hugs lakshya… n kisses him on his cheeks

L: ok ok… lekin mera ek kaa,m karogi

A: kya hai

Lakshya whispers stuff in archita's ear

A: (smiles) ok bahiyya…thnkx again for the money

Archita walks downstairs and runs to the kitchen

She sees damini, ganga… n kt… working

G: arree …itni tayaar hoh kar kaha jahrehi ho

A: waise mein shopping jahrehi huan….mein wohh kehe nahi aaiiya hi keeh lakshaya bahiyya paani chiaayya( she raises her eyebrows at kt.. n smiles.. kt shyly proceeds doing the dishes)

G: bilkul baap peh gaya hai….khud neechai aah sakta tha. Anywayz….kt tum hamare  raja koh pani dekar aooh

Kt smiles..: "ok"

IN LAKSHYA'S ROOM

L: who abh tak nahi aaiya

Then he hears footsteps coming towards his room. Kt cums in with a glass of waer to is room

Kt: paani

Lakshya takes the glass  n drinks from it. But her eyes on the shy kt  looking down

Lakshya gives kt the glass n kt proceeds to leave … as she waz leaving lakshya holds her hand

L: sunno

KT: (shyly): kya hai… choodo muhje

L:9pulls her closer to his chest) aaj raat.. kaaha khaanai keh baad kyat um thoode tyme keh liye aaogi terrace paar.

Kt shyly says, " choodona muhje"

Lakshya lets go off her

L: loh chood diya

Kt smiles n runs downstairs.

 

continuing soooon

 

rani



Edited by rani712 - 30 May 2007 at 6:57pm

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Posted: 12 February 2007 at 3:52pm | IP Logged
PART 2
AT NIGHT… ON TERRACE
Lakshya waz with a roses… thinking y didn't kt cum yet… he takes rose with its petals he takes one rose petals n does the "she will cum…she will not…she will cum… she will not"{ u knoe da drill …lol}
When he's on his last petal he says " she wont cum!" he then makes a frowning face n decides to go bak downstairs thinking dat she wudnt cum…cuz she doesn't like him.
When he turned he saw kt standing there behind him. He looked at her n smiled in relif!
Kt shyly smiled bak.
L: tum aah gayi (n walks toward her)
Kt: haan…late honai keh liya sorry
Lakshya covers her mouth…. N says "dosti mein sorry jaise words use nahi kar te.. waise yeh baatao keh kisse neh deekha tum yaha aatai hua"
KT: nahi
L: (grins) agar kissne neh tumare room mein dekha toh
KT: aisa koi nahi karenga
Lakshya raises her chin to face his
L: agar dekha toh
KT smiles n says " mein nai blankets keh underneath pillows aur other beadsheets spread kardi…toh aisa laage yeh mei soorahi huan
Lakshya burst into laughters along with kt
L: tumne yeh sabh kiya sirf mere liya….kyunki meinai tumhe bulaya yaha
KT shly cums closer to him
KT: nahi… mein aana chati thi
(
she tries to go towards the railings but lakshya holds her hand (CREDITS GO TO VIVAH..sum parts were used from it)
lakshya cums closer to her, kisses her long smooth ,soft, straight hair.
L(romantically):kyun … him apke hai kaun??? ( n gazes into her eyes)
KT's heartbeats start to increase.. since she had to say sumthing… she jus smiles n says "choodo muhje, koi dekh laga"
"Nahi choodonga"replys lakshya as kt struggles to get out of his arms
" Choodo nah.. varna nxt tyme mein yaha kabhi nahi aaongi" kt continues to protest
But lakshya does let go off her
"theek hai", lakshya responds still not letting her go, "lekin tubh choodonga jab tum mere sawal kah jawab doogi,"
KT: kaunsa sawal… meinai toh nahi suna…
L: already bhulgayi.. cums even closer to her
Kt takes advantage of this n pusheslakshya to the rails... runs… but lakshya grabs her duppata...n pulls her duppta towards him
Kt makes a "DAMN it" face askl she cum closer n closer to him
L:holds her by her waist… " meinai kaha tha nah….keh nahi choodonga jab tak jawab nahi doogi tab thak"
Kt: "kal dungi jawab, theek hai"
L: (questioning face) kal kyun …aaj kyun nahi
Kt: mere paas abh jwab nahi hai…kal sooch kar baataongi…theek hai
L: paaka … bhool toh nahi jaahoh gi
Kt smiles, "of course not…. I promise"
Lakshya lets go of her… n kt runs out of the terrace with a shy blossoming face
Lakshya jus stands there watching her goo!!

plz comment.....improvements comments accepted aswell

rani

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Posted: 12 February 2007 at 4:30pm | IP Logged
i think ur doing a great job

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Posted: 12 February 2007 at 4:50pm | IP Logged
awwww
ii lovee iiiiiittt Big smile Big smile

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Posted: 12 February 2007 at 5:03pm | IP Logged
hey hunny i haven'tead it yet but i'm sure it's going to gr8 i'll read it soon and tell me when it's complete so i can put it on the site..

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pari

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Posted: 12 February 2007 at 5:16pm | IP Logged
wow rani gr8 story do finish it soonso that i can put it on the site..
love
pari

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Posted: 13 February 2007 at 5:58am | IP Logged
wow rani it is gr8.i will surely vote for u.
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