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Mockery (short story - 395 words) (Page 2)

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Posted: 11 February 2007 at 7:57am | IP Logged
LOL i just love how u write such short simple to the point stories!!
this ones real good-loved the part where he was trying to jump out of the window LOLLOL
i dont believe in superstitions lyk the black cat n broken glass/mirror etc..i just bliv in stuff to do with exams LOL bcos i can se all d help i can get wen it cums to exams Unhappy
even now im sposed to be bothered abt my maths exam tomoro n see wht im doing LOL
but real good fic do rite more Wink
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Posted: 12 February 2007 at 2:08am | IP Logged
I read this one just now preeti and i really really like it
the dialogue between the old man and was hilararious. LOL and i really liked this one. Keep wriritng. and yea i believe a lot on superstitions. its fun and its great. if its positive it makes my day. And black cat i believe n and the broken mirror i have experienced... so really... :-??
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Posted: 25 February 2007 at 7:59am | IP Logged
LOL! Nice story! Haha I'm so slow, I didn't get it at first. I was like, "Wait, what happened to the dude standing in front of her house?" And then I realized that it was never a dude, lol. But wow, are there really people like that in real life? That's quite sad.. but anyhow, great story! Keep writing more! Clap

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