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*~Sapna~*

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Posted: 09 February 2007 at 1:59pm | IP Logged

hi guys...here is a sher I wrote...plz forgive me if its bad...par kya karo...am not that goodCry

Pyar aur wafa ke sab baatein karte hain...

Lekin kuch hi din mein sab bhool jaate hain..

Marte Dham tak saat nibhane ke baatein karte hain...

lekin Zindagi bhar ke liye zakhm de kar chale jaate hai...Cry

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Posted: 09 February 2007 at 3:54pm | IP Logged
thats touchy n shayari tho vohi hai jo dil se likhi ho..

its nice sher sapna..tfs Smile

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Posted: 09 February 2007 at 4:23pm | IP Logged
wah wah..very touch sapna Cry Cry love it great job

*~Sapna~*

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Posted: 09 February 2007 at 5:06pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by bheegi palkein

thats touchy n shayari tho vohi hai jo dil se likhi ho..

its nice sher sapna..tfs Smile
aww...thanks a lot...and i love the message in ur sig...very true...

thanks SehrishSmile

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Wow Sapu!! Such a touching sher.... lagta hai kisi nein bohut dard diya hai.. Cry But don't worry, I am always here to share it! Hug

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Very nicely written Sapnaji!Clap Clap Clap

Very true but sad in many terms. I hope nothing similar happened to you.Confused

Btw, I'm really impressed by your sher. Do you still think you need my tutions?Wink Kahin aisa na ho ki chela apne guru se acha nikle.Confused Wink

Cheers,

Anjali

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Posted: 10 February 2007 at 6:20am | IP Logged
Great Sher Sapna! Would love to see more from you.

*~Sapna~*

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Posted: 10 February 2007 at 9:02am | IP Logged

Originally posted by amisra

Very nicely written Sapnaji!Clap Clap Clap

Very true but sad in many terms. I hope nothing similar happened to you.Confused

Btw, I'm really impressed by your sher. Do you still think you need my tutions?Wink Kahin aisa na ho ki chela apne guru se acha nikle.Confused Wink

Cheers,

Anjali
arre Guru jee...aap humse bahut zyada achche hai...I will still need training... woh kya hai nah...now I write once in like 5 months...I want to write more...par its hard to think of anything...and I can't write during the day...is there anyway that u help me with that...? LOL

and Naina...jee when I see u online...I will share it all with u...not that interesting though...Smile

and Azzy jee...thank u very much...humne sona hai ke u r in love...hope to see some shers from uWinkLOL

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