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*~Sapna~*

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Posted: 09 February 2007 at 1:59pm | IP Logged

hi guys...here is a sher I wrote...plz forgive me if its bad...par kya karo...am not that good Cry

Pyar aur wafa ke sab baatein karte hain...

Lekin kuch hi din mein sab bhool jaate hain..

Marte Dham tak saat nibhane ke baatein karte hain...

lekin Zindagi bhar ke liye zakhm de kar chale jaate hai... Cry

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bheegi palkein

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Posted: 09 February 2007 at 3:54pm | IP Logged

thats touchy n shayari tho vohi hai jo dil se likhi ho..

its nice sher sapna..tfs Smile

sweethoney06

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Posted: 09 February 2007 at 4:23pm | IP Logged

wah wah..very touch sapna Cry

love it great job

*~Sapna~*

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Posted: 09 February 2007 at 5:06pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by bheegi palkein

thats touchy n shayari tho vohi hai jo dil se likhi ho..

its nice sher sapna..tfs Smile

aww...thanks a lot...and i love the message in ur sig...very true...

thanks Sehrish Smile

Naina_Manam

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Posted: 09 February 2007 at 5:27pm | IP Logged

Wow Sapu!! Such a touching sher.... lagta hai kisi nein bohut dard diya hai.. Cry

But don't worry, I am always here to share it! Hug

amisra

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Posted: 09 February 2007 at 9:20pm | IP Logged

Very nicely written Sapnaji! Clap

Very true but sad in many terms. I hope nothing similar happened to you. Confused

Btw, I'm really impressed by your sher. Do you still think you need my tutions? Wink

Kahin aisa na ho ki chela apne guru se acha nikle. Confused

Cheers,

Anjali

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Posted: 10 February 2007 at 6:20am | IP Logged

Great Sher Sapna! Would love to see more from you.

*~Sapna~*

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Posted: 10 February 2007 at 9:02am | IP Logged

Originally posted by amisra

Very nicely written Sapnaji! Clap

Very true but sad in many terms. I hope nothing similar happened to you. Confused

Btw, I'm really impressed by your sher. Do you still think you need my tutions? Wink

Kahin aisa na ho ki chela apne guru se acha nikle. Confused

Cheers,

Anjali

arre Guru jee...aap humse bahut zyada achche hai...I will still need training... woh kya hai nah...now I write once in like 5 months...I want to write more...par its hard to think of anything...and I can't write during the day...is there anyway that u help me with that...? LOL

and Naina...jee when I see u online...I will share it all with u...not that interesting though... Smile

and Azzy jee...thank u very much...humne sona hai ke u r in love...hope to see some shers from u Wink LOL

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