devilsoul
Senior Member
Joined: 12 February 2006
Posts: 222
He guyz....i've written a number of poems in my ff "Humko Deewana Kar Gaye"...Hope u like this poem which I wrote when I moved away to a new house...I changed school...I gave this poem to the one who I "loved" b4 moving...do tell me how u like it!
A Trip Down Memory Lane
I take another trip down memory lane,
I do it everyday, again and again.
My heart grieves thinking about the past
How long will these disturbing memories last?
This question is gradually killing me from inside
And puts me through pain I can no longer hide.
Have I been wasting my time all these years?
Faking a smile and choking back my tears?
As I make my way down memory lane,
Sorrowful thoughts drive me insane.
Nothing but pain lies in my past,
These wounds will take time, they won't heal fast.
I am still waiting, my emotions are still,
Hoping these memories aren't overwhelming enough to kill.
I don't know what is tomorrow, I live in yesterday
Not making any effort to store my thoughts away.
I constantly ponder, What went wrong?
Why our relationship was so short, and my life so long?
I happened so quickly, why did it have to die?
God didn't even give me a chance to say goodbye.
It seems even today we are linked by a chain
Thus everyday, I take a trip down memory lane.
syreen_786
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Joined: 11 December 2006
Posts: 446
omg..omg...dats so touchin...i duno wa 2 say...i m totali speechless...mormali i m classed as big mouth lol.
.alwyz av sumfin 2 say ba ur poem as left anum wiv no words.
..i m reli sori 4 wa hapened 2 ya....i m sure whr eva dat lad is he will alwyz memba ya n every word in ur poem has shown ur feelinz 2 him...we jus gota accept life n mova along..i knw itz hard ba u av 1 fing dat no1 can take 4rm ya n dats his memories...awww...blesh...luv is so innocent n sweet n i agree 2 da fact dat true luv onli hapnez once aww....hope ya find sum1 dat givz ya da luv hapiness ya deserve...derz alwyz sum1 out der 4 every1...
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but m going pakistan in 2 days and m gonna see him!!!
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