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A poem of love

devilsoul Senior Member
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Posted: 08 February 2007 at 3:17am | IP Logged

He guyz....i've written a number of poems in my ff "Humko Deewana Kar Gaye"...Hope u like this poem which I wrote when I moved away to a new house...I changed school...I gave this poem to the one who I "loved" b4 moving...do tell me how u like it!

 

A Trip Down Memory Lane

I take another trip down memory lane,

I do it everyday, again and again.

My heart grieves thinking about the past

How long will these disturbing memories last?

This question is gradually killing me from inside

And puts me through pain I can no longer hide.

Have I been wasting my time all these years?

Faking a smile and choking back my tears?

As I make my way down memory lane,

Sorrowful thoughts drive me insane.

Nothing but pain lies in my past,

These wounds will take time, they won't heal fast.

I am still waiting, my emotions are still,

Hoping these memories aren't overwhelming enough to kill.

I don't know what is tomorrow, I live in yesterday

Not making any effort to store my thoughts away.

I constantly ponder, What went wrong?

Why our relationship was so short, and my life so long?

I happened so quickly, why did it have to die?

God didn't even give me a chance to say goodbye.

It seems even today we are linked by a chain

Thus everyday, I take a trip down memory lane.

 

syreen_786 Senior Member
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Posted: 08 February 2007 at 10:32am | IP Logged

omg..omg...dats so touchin...i duno wa 2 say...i m totali speechless...mormali i m classed as big mouth lol. LOL .alwyz av sumfin 2 say ba ur poem as left anum wiv no words. Confused ..i m reli sori 4 wa hapened 2 ya....i m sure whr eva dat lad is he will alwyz memba ya n every word in ur poem has shown ur feelinz 2 him...we jus gota accept life n mova along..i knw itz hard ba u av 1 fing dat no1 can take 4rm ya n dats his memories...awww...blesh...luv is so innocent n sweet n i agree 2 da fact dat true luv onli hapnez once aww....hope ya find sum1 dat givz ya da luv hapiness ya deserve...derz alwyz sum1 out der 4 every1...



Edited by syreen_786 - 08 February 2007 at 10:33am
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Posted: 08 February 2007 at 10:48am | IP Logged
OMG!!!!! i love it!!!!!! this poem really made me feel sad Cry Cry
i hope ur ok hun.....ive been in the same situation...im in UK and my bf is in pakistan Ouch but m going pakistan in 2 days and m gonna see him!!! Big smile
dont worry hun...as they say everything happens for the best...love ya...im always here if u need 2 talk 2 me!!! Hug
Hinna xxxxxxxxx
Peanutt Butterr IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 08 February 2007 at 11:03am | IP Logged
wow..it's fantastic......rly rly heart-touching....nice one and thxx 4 sharin...
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Posted: 08 February 2007 at 11:04am | IP Logged
wow that was a great poem
punjabi love Senior Member
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Posted: 08 February 2007 at 11:18am | IP Logged
that was great
Clap
Thanx 4 sharing
Heart touching

Edited by punjabi love - 08 February 2007 at 6:54pm
mehak_kapoor IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 08 February 2007 at 8:32pm | IP Logged
such a nice poem really i loved it Clap
kal-el IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 09 February 2007 at 1:24am | IP Logged
thats nice really but very sad Cry

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