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Posted: 07 February 2007 at 2:28am | IP Logged
Loved it Preetz....Short but meaningful and very coherent,I will say!!!Thanx for sharing dearie!!!
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Posted: 07 February 2007 at 3:09am | IP Logged
Thanks sapu and Jassu *hugs*
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Posted: 09 February 2007 at 4:39pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by datspreets

Indeed Lakshmi had blessed two houses, though in different forms.

Very nice closure, Preeti. Flash fiction is very hard to write.  

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Posted: 09 February 2007 at 8:43pm | IP Logged
Very good job! A nice fiction though I'd have to say I like The other Inspiration one better just probably a little bit of writing style and choice of words was better.

But nevertheless, excellect job! Flash fictions are so hard to write, I never ever tried LOL

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