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Part 4

its been a week naina went to london, its night 1'o clock , angad is still working in the office ,phone started ringing, angad recieved the call without looking at the caller id

a: hello

???: thu abhi thak office main kya kar raha hey

a: josh.......i am driving , ghar ko jaa raha hun, kuch kaam hey kya

j: hello Mr. Angad Khanna, aghar thu drive kar raha hey tho office main kuan hey tera bhooth

a: what?

j: maine office ko phone kiya tha, tera cell koo nahin

a: oh actually i am about to start

j: dadi tere liye pershan ho rahi hey, and tumhari mobile contect nahin ho rahi thi

angad looked at his cell phone, its battery is dead " meri cell ki battery katham hoghayi hey yaar, main abhi ghar jaovungha"

j: jaldhi kar yaar

a: ok ok bye

angad disconnected his phone, packed his files and started driving, after a 10 minute drive suddenly angad's vision got blurry, he was loosing the balance, he is trying to balance but not able to

we see girl carrying a huge bag, and a car passes her almost hitting her, she moved and fell down, she got up and started shouting

g: dhikayi nahin dhe ra kya , rukhja thu, thu rukh  

same car stops after a small distance hitting a tree, she goes towards the car and looks throw the window, we see angad his head is bleeding, and he is unconcious

g: abb kya kare yaha as pass main koi dhikayi nahin dhe raha hey, she shakes angad but no use        

josh who got call from dadi that angad is not back home yet, drives towards the office, on his way he sees a girl asking to stop the car

g: rukhiye rukhiye(waving her hands) ,

he goes near the car and looks at angad and gets shocked

g: oh main yaha se jaa rahi tho, ye achanak vuss paide(tree) ko thakra ghayi

josh called the ambulance, he said that he will be coming in the car, he looked at the girl and said " please kya app unkey sath jayenghey"

g: thik hey

j: apka naam

g: kripa ( now we can see her face and its kripa she is wearing a rajasthani dress lehngha and blouse with a dupatta(scarf))

j: thanks kripa and he went to khanna mansion to  take dadi along with him

when dadi heard about the accident she got worried, she was about to call naina but josh stopped her saying everyone will get worried over there, josh and dadi went to the hospital where kripa is waiting for josh 

josh and dadi came to where kripa is waiting for them, jsut then doctor came out from angad's room

j: how is he now

doc: he is fine, i think he is stressing himself alot , he just needs some rest and his left hand is fractured and 4 stiches on his head, within 3 weeks he will be fine   

j: thanks doctor , can we meet him

doc: abhi oh hosh main nahin hey, in 2 hours he will gain concious then you can meet him

j: ok

josh informed this to dadi and he looked at kripa who was sleeping in the chair outside angad's room, josh went near her

j: kripa

kripa woke up

k: abhi unko kaisa hey , thik tho hey naa

da: josh kaun hey ye ladki

j: haan oh bhilkul thik hey aur dadi ye vohi ladki hey jisne meri gadi ko rokha tha

da: bahuth shukriya beta , tum nahin hothi tho patha nahin kya hotha

k: (innocently) main nahin tho koi dhusra apka madhath kartha tha

j: dadi app isse batey karo main jakar angad ko dekhtha hun

da: tumhe kaha jana hey beti, josh tumhe vaha chod dhegha

k:aaaaaaaaaa( starts crying)

da: arey beta kya huva , kyun ro rahi ho

k: oh kya hey na, hum rajsthan se a rahey tey, lekin dhono alag hoghaye

da: kuan dhono beta

k: ramu aur main

da: ramu

k: (sharma tey) haan main aur ramu ek dhusre se pyaar kartey hey, hum dhono ghar se bagh kar ayetey, phir patha nahin kya huva main bus main so ghayi thi uth kar dekhi tho ramu nahin raha, subha se vusse dhund rahi hun, mujhe yaha koi patha nahin hey  

all the while josh is inside angad's room

da: koi bath nahin beta tum humare sath raho, mera potha jaise hi thik hojayegha oh tumhe ramu ko dhundney main madhath karegha

k: (exccited) sach main

da: haan beta

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thats for now

next part: fun begins

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lol pota bhi theek ho jayega and ramu ko search karne ki bhi koi zaroorat nahi hogi...........

awesome fanfic
continue soon
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Posted: 23 February 2007 at 2:43am | IP Logged
hehe.. who is ramu??
anywayz, continue soon
i cant wait to read the next part
i want angu and krips to meet fast, and...argh just forget abt that ramu...there's no need to find him

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Excellent part... hus ramu Confused .... Cant wait for the nxt part... im guessin they will A-K will meet in the next part... N i like da preview: fun begins Smile Smile Smile

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awesome part

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Posted: 23 February 2007 at 9:29am | IP Logged
gr8 part

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gr8 part

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