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great part

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Posted: 09 February 2007 at 3:31pm | IP Logged
AWESUM prt!!!!! Clap Clap cant wait for Kripa's entry!!!! Wink
continue soon!!!!!! Big smile


p.s. can u PLEASE write in English, its kinds hard to read Hindi!! Embarrassed
      sorry about that, THANXXXX!!!!!! Big smile

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Part 3

its been 5 years now, dilip has died in a car accident, which made somany secrets to come out

angad got to know that their business is in total loss, dilip has taken so much loan but was not able pay it back, after his death, bank people sealed the company, even angad's fees for his MBA was paid with the loan taken on their house , hearing all this angad canceled his london trip everyone tried alot to make him go to london and fulfill his dream, but angad decided to take over business and pay all the loans which made him a workolic he worked so hard for 2 years which won him young acheiver award, the cool aatitude of him is gone, naina was worried looking at angad, he smiles just to make his family happy , even prem and his father both tried alot to help him but he denied their help

new character

Josh mehtha: he is angad's lawyer cum advisor and a good friend, angad met him when he was searching for lawyer who can help in reopenning his company . at that time josh was also looking for a case to prove his talent .

josh and angad became quick friends, josh helped him alot and he got to know angad alot as a friend, as a boss and as a person

now angad is a successful MD of khanna empire, he spreaded his company throughout India and asia, mukthi got married to prem and they both shifted to london where prem is looking after his dad's business and mukthi is pregnant now, naina is going to stay with mukthi for while

in khanna mansion

angad is busy in his study room looking through some files ,

na: angad

a:(still looking at the file) kya bath hey mom, apne packing karli kaal subha ki flight hey apki aur app abb thak soye(slept) nahin, is something wrong mom

na: angad goto sleep

a: mom i will just let me finish this file , and i am no more a kid

na: i know that beta but ...........

a: mom please this is the last file

na: angad why can't you come with me it will be a change for you

a: no mom i am fine here and i have so much work to do

na: angad from past 5 years you are just doing work nothing other than your work, you earned more angad rest for a while now

angad closed the file he was looking at, went towards naina and made her sit on the small couch , he sat down and kept his head in her lap , naina started carresing his hair

a: mom i wish i can go back 5 years where i was having just fun and enjoying my life, where i had my dad with me who thinks about me and fulfills my wishes before i can ask him, we can see tears in his eyes, even naina has tears in her eyes

na: slowly said, even i wish the same angad

next day at the airport angad, dadi, josh and naina are arguing

na: angad take care of yourself, time pe khalena, aunty app iska dhyan rakhna mujhe tumhari phikar rahey ghi, josh take care that he doesn't work continously for days 

j: aunty, i will take care of him and dadi bhi tho hey yaha 

a: mom app jao varna you will miss your flight

da: tum jao naina, aur mukthi ko mera pyaar dhena main iska khayal rakhunghi , thik hey

na: angad tujhe yaad hey na main london se  athey hi thu shaadhi karegha

a: haan mom i remember now go

atlast naina left after taking promise from angad that he will marry when she comes back from london

angad dropped dadi at the mansion and left for his office along with josh, on the way to office josh is driving and angad is working on his laptop

j: i am happy for you angad

a: why, did we get the paris contract again this year

j: kya yaar, do you always think about work and nothing more than that

a: kyun abb kya huva

j: i was talking about your marriage and you are talking about business

a: meri shaadhi?

j: haan, you just now promised aunty that you will get married as she cames back from london

a: i promised to make her happy josh , its nothing more than that

they reached office

j: get a life man, jindhaghi main kaam aur money hi sub kuch nahin

a: josh as we reached office lets talk about work not about personal life

j: murmured, when did speak something other than work

a: kuch kaha

j: nahin tho

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Posted: 13 February 2007 at 11:53pm | IP Logged
awesome fan fic...plz cont soon..

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Posted: 14 February 2007 at 10:41am | IP Logged
Awesome part.... i preferred da old angad, i think kripa is gunna change him bck n cnt wait for her entry

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great part continue soon Smile

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cant wait for kripas entry...

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