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Tere Bin- AK ff, part 5, pg 6 (Page 3)

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Awesome Part
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wonderful part. very sweet. continue soon
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great part i love the brother sister relationship its soo cute continue sson Smile Smile
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awesome fanfic....plz cont soon Tongue
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Thanks to all for your comments

here comes the next part

Part 2

new character

dadi: she is a old and lovable lady who helped naina in raising angad and mukthi, she stays with khanna's, everyone treats her like a family member,

now..........  

mukthi is holding the tray with food and angad is trying to wake up prem so that even he can eat some, mukthi looked at prem who is trying to open his eyes and said to angad " tum iss uluu ke pate ( i think you got what i mean sorry if speeling is wrong LOL ) ko kyun lekhar aye ho jab tumhe patha hey ki mujhe ye bhilkul pasand nahin hey" angad said " arey aghar ye iss halath main ghar ghaya tho aunty ko bura laghegha na iss liye" angad thought its waste to wake him up so he took the tray from mukthi's hand and started eating, mukthi looked at angad and said  " aghar ajj prem nahin atha tho apko mom dhant nahin kani padthi" and she bit her tongue, angad stopped eating and looked at mukthi with a surprise look on his face and said " iska mathlab tumne kudh mom ko bathaya tha" mukthi just nodded her head saying yes and she ra from their followed by angad who kept his plate beside and went to catch hold of mukthi but mukthi was too fast that she went inside and locked her room

angad bangad her room door " mukthi come out" but mukthi said " sorry bhaiya mujhe neend arahi hey good night", angad is more furious now " ajj nahin milli tho kya huva kal subha kaise bhi mujhe hi tumhe college main chodna hey na thab dekhlungha tujhe " saying that angad went back to his room, finished his dinner and slept

next day morning

angad and prem are sleeping peacefully in angad's room, we see a lady dreesed in salwar kameez entering angad's room with a big bucket of water, we see her splash the bucket of water on angad and prem, angad and prem wake up saying "mukthi, what the **** is this",now we see her face and its mukthi not but dadi, angad and prem look at dadi shocked and angad asks "ye sab kya hey dadi", dadi in return asks him "pehle tum bathao kaal rath ko kya huva tha" angad was now sure that naina told dadi everything "oh dadi..." dadi interrupts him " angad patha hey naina kaal kithna pareshan thi, tumhara cell nahin lagh rahatha, aur tumne bhi ek bhar bhi phone karke nahin bathaya ki tum kaha ho, tumhare dosth ke mobile ko try kiya tho patha chala ki thum party se bahuth pehle hi nikhal ghaye ho aur tum prem atleast tum tho apne mom ko phone kar sakthey tey naa" prem was not able to say anything so he looked at angad for help , so angad said " lekin dadi hum pehle bhi late aya kartey tey na tho..." dadi was more angry now " angad abb tum yeh naa kaho ki tumhe kal ka dhina yaad nahin hey" angad asked dadi " kal kya tha dadi" dadi " angad kaal tumhe delhi janna tha tumhare MBA ka application ke liye aur kal hi last date tha, yaad aya" angad " oh no damn it , now we need to wait 6 months, prem ye sab tere vajhe se" prem said " arey abb maine kya kiya maine kaal subh bhi tujhe yaad dhilya tha na" angad was about to answer to prem but he got interrupted by dadi " ufff........ atleast aghle bar tho tumhare ye natak badhlo" and she left from their murmuring " har bar koi naa koi ghalath kaam karna badh main ek dusre per dhalna"

angad and prem got fresh up and went downstairs for breakfast where his dad and mukthi are waiting for them and naina is in kitchen. angad looked at his dad and said "dad i am sorry" dilip seriously looked at angad and said " angad jindhaghi main sirf maksadh (goal) rehne se kaphi nahin hogha angad uske liye proper planning aur vuss planning ko implement karna bahuth jarruri hey" naina was shocked hearing dilip, dilip never scolded or never got angry on angad or mukthi, she wanted to stop dilip so she tried to interrupt but dilip stopped her saying " naina tum kuch math bholo isse lad pyar bahuth hoghaya hey aur tum angad as soon as your exams finshes you are going london maine vaha already tumhari MBA seat ke liye fee pe kardhiya hey" 

angad was so much happy " thanks dad i love you so much", then prem said " arey tho ghaya tho mera kya hogha", dilip let a small laugh and said kabhi ayisa huva ki tum dhono ko alag alag rakha gaya phir abb kaise tumhare papa aur main dhono milkey hi sara intezam kiye tey" naina was more shocked now and said " vare vah dekha mukthi kehtey hey ki baap ek numberi tho beta dus numberi lekin yaha tho dhono 100 numberi hey, maine socha tum vusse thoda dhantoghey oh apna responsibilities jane ga lekin tum ho ki vuss ke liye london main fee bhi pay kardhiya aur dilip tum ne mujhe kyun nahin bathaya"

before dilip can say something dadi who is silently watching everything said "naina kabhi ayisa huva ki dilip angad ya mukthi ke liye kuch kare aur hume pehle bathaya, har bar tho akhir(last) main patha chaltha hey"

*****

i know this part is so boring, story gets interested once kripa enters and that will be in another 2 or 3 parts

hope everyone enjoyed this part

next part: suspence

luv all

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Edited by sweety223 - 08 February 2007 at 8:42pm
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gr8 part
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awwwwwwwwwww awsome fanfic
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Awesome part... waitin for kripas entry!!!

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