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Amazin luved da intro, pls do ocnt soon. Smile

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Posted: 04 February 2007 at 11:58am | IP Logged

Hi frienda

Thanks for ur lovely comments, this ff is going to be more filmy style and I am trying to make it look like a comdey ff, their will be no negative charcters in this ff and most of the ff is only between angad and kripa and one more character who will be introduced along with the story

luv all

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AWESUM, no EVIL characters!!!! yay!!! cant wait for u to continue!!! Big smile

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Great part continue soon Embarrassed

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Kool!!! I really like the filmy idea!!! LOL LOL LOL

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Posted: 05 February 2007 at 9:20pm | IP Logged

Hi friends ,

Thanks for all your comments, here is the first part

Part 1

Angad Khanna: 20 years old, doing final year of his BBA, always in his own world, plan to look after his dad's garment business, loves his sister alot

Prem Kapoor: 20 years old, he is also doing his BBA along with angad, he is the only son of Rohit Kapoor and Nandhini Kapoor, they have a vast business of shopping complexes and hotels, prem and angad are friends from childhood.

Mukthi Khanna: 18 years old, she is in second year of music, she loves her brother alot, always help in escaping from their parents 

Dilip Khanna: angad and mukthi's father, loves his family alot knows about angad's every act but stays quiet like he doesn't know anything

Naina Khanna: mother of angad and mukthi, wife of dilip, she loves her family, she used to help dilip in the begining of his business but stopped when angad and mukthi where born, she helps him sometimes if he needed.  

angad and prem went to home we see the name plate out side the house it says Khanna Mansion, angad got of the car and said to prem " chal main chaltha hun thu bhi ghar jaa", prem coming out of the car " no way yaar aghar mom ya dad mujhe dekh liya tho main marjaovungha" angad laughs at prem's statement , prem got  angry at angad's reaction " hass yaar hass, tere ko kya, mukthi jo hey har bar tujhe bachaney ke liye, kash mera bhi koi behen hothi tho" angad interrupted prem " abb jaldhi se chal varna ajj mukthi humne kudh pakadvayeghi"

they both headed back side of the house, angad called mukthi from his mobile and after a minute a rope ladder came down from the first floor room balcony, angad and prem went upto the balcony with the help of the mukthi and they both went inside the room, room was dark slowly angad crept and switched on the lights, as turned he saw mukthi along with naina , angad was shocked " mom oh actualy kya hey na ki........." naina folded her hands and said " kya hey angad " angad looked around and found prem on the bed unconsious " mom ajj prem ka mood thik nahin tha issliye thoda....."  naina wa more angry now " angad kab sudhroghey huf...." angad hold his ears " sorry mom  phir kabhi ayise nahin karungha"

naina left angad, prem and mukthi in the room and went dowstairs, angad looked at mukthi with a "kill you" look , mukthi looked at him " sorry bhaiya ajj mobile vibration main nahin tha jab apki call ayi tho mom mere hi kamre main thi , sorry bhaiya please" angad can't be angry with her for a long time so he said " chalo iss bar maaf kardhiya, mukthi bahuth bhook lag rahi hey" as mukthi turned she saw naina coming up with the food tray, she handed the tray to mukthi and went back. 

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I know this is a short part, hope you enjoy this part      

please do write comments

luv all

sweety

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Posted: 05 February 2007 at 9:35pm | IP Logged
hahaha!!! cuteeee!!! bro sis loveeee!!!!

continue sooooooooonnn

miss_neha

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Posted: 06 February 2007 at 6:53am | IP Logged
Awesome part... love the relationship between angad n mukthi... soo sweet!!! Embarrassed

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