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Tere Bin- AK ff, part 5, pg 6

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Posted: 03 February 2007 at 10:49pm | IP Logged

Tere bin

Tere bin jindhaghi adhuri hey

In India

We see two boys drinking sitting on their car near a cliff

Boy 1: maine suna ki tumne sanjana ko reject kiya

Boy 2: haan tho

Boy 1: arey come on angad college ki beauty hey oh, college ki har ek ladka vuskey sath waqt gujrna chahtha hey aur thu hey ki , oh khudh akhey tujhe sirf ek dance ke liye pochi thi, vusme ghalath kya hey

Boy 2: arey prem I told you many times ki oh meri type nahin hey

Prem: sare ke sare ladkiya tujh per fida hey lekin thu hey ki kehtha rahegha ki oh tere type nahin, I think tere type ki asman se uthar kar ayeghi   

Angad: haan assman se uthar kar ayeghi

Far away in another place, we see a girl coming down with parachute shouting with excitement

Prem: acha aur batha tere uss pasand type ki ladki ke bare main

Angad: aur.............jab oh hasseghi tho sari dhuniya vuskey sath hasseghi

We see the girls lips which are curved into a beautiful smile

Angad: vuski ankhein(eyes) koi bhi dekhey ga tho vusse maan na hi padegha ki ankhein bhi bathey karsakthi hey

We see the girls eyes, she is removing her goggles

Prem: aur batha batha

Angad(looking at the sky):  uski lambey bhaal hawa key sath nachney lagtey hey, oh chalthey waqt uski payal ghane lagthey hey

We see the girls hair flying along with air, as she is walking her payal makes beautiful sound

Prem: jaha thak mujhe patha hey ayisi ladki maine abb thak nahin dekha hey, abb ye confirm hotha hey ki teri iss janam main tho shaadhi nahin hone vali hey

Angad just laughs at his friend

Prem: arey thu hass raha hey I am serious man, I doubt ke tujhe ye ladki kabhi mileghi

Angad: don't worry mere yaar, aghar bhagwan ne mujhe banaya hey aur mere iss dimakh main vuss ladki ke bare main soch payidha kiya hey tho, I am sure ke ek dhin main vuss ladki se jarrur milungha lekin ye patha nahin ke kab, kaha aur kaisey milungha

Prem: main keh raha hun thu pagal hey, chal abhi ghar chaltey hey mom tere liye wait kar rahi hoghi

Angad: chal chalenghey

Prem: ek bath bholo

Angad: haan bhol 

Prem: tujhe ayise bath suit nahin hothi yaar

they both laugh at that comment

We see boys both get in the car and drive away

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Hi friends this is my 4th ff , I am still thinking about who will be who, hope everyone likes even this ff as others

my fanfiction silence is going to finish soon , so i thought to start a new one

please do leave your comments

 

luv all

sweety



Edited by sweety223 - 18 March 2007 at 9:49pm

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Posted: 03 February 2007 at 10:53pm | IP Logged
Wow...nice confusing cuz dont no the chracters..but rlly gud..cont soon!!
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Posted: 04 February 2007 at 7:09am | IP Logged
Awesome Part
*dels* IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 04 February 2007 at 7:40am | IP Logged
Do continue soon sweety. Very nice Clap Clap
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Posted: 04 February 2007 at 10:05am | IP Logged
AWESUM!!!!! Clap Clap Kripa's entrance was VERY filmy!!!! lol!!!
i LOVE ur FF's.... continue soon!!!!! Big smile
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sounds great, and i agree with berkeleygirl818, kripa's entrance was very filmy!! lol.. continue soon Clap
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great part continue soon Smile

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