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guju_girl1 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 09 February 2007 at 7:19pm | IP Logged
cute part continue soon Smile

hIra_89 Senior Member

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Posted: 09 February 2007 at 9:26pm | IP Logged
cont soon i can't wait 4 da part when every1 reaches college n' meet each other
laksh - kt 2gether 4ever
illuminated. IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 09 February 2007 at 9:50pm | IP Logged
awesum parts....veryyyy cute.....gr8 jopb....keep the gr8 owrk up u both Thumbs UpThumbs Up...will be waiting for more to come Smile cant wait for the love stories to begin!!

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HhAaNnAa IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 10 February 2007 at 5:58am | IP Logged
Clap awesome parts Clap
janu_2006 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 10 February 2007 at 6:01am | IP Logged
gr8 part suajl luks handsome as ever so does al other guys i.e.omi n angad Wink
Marauders IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 10 February 2007 at 11:33am | IP Logged
Hey guyz
here is a lil change in the story. From now on Prem is going to be Anu-prerna's son instead of Karam Nandini's and Laksh is going to be Karan Nandini's son not Anurag-prerna's.
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Posted: 10 February 2007 at 11:34am | IP Logged
Next Part.
College day.
All the 3 families kids reach the college.
Prem: So Amit, your last year in this college. After a year, no more studies for u bro.
Amit: I know... I am so happy. Infact I didnt even wanted to attend this year. But u know mom,dad
Prem: Yeah/.
Amit: I wonder who ur gonna flirt with today?
Prem: Me too, I have been thinking for quite a while.
Amit: Well, tu soch, mein chalta hoon.
Prem: Peace.
Omi: feels great to be bak at college.
Angad: Back? Today is our first day and first year in this college
Omi: I know. I meant feels great cuz u get to study again.....
Angad: Study? R u crazy? Parhai karney mein itna mazza aata hai?
Omi: Yeah. and he whispers something into ANgad's ear.
Angad: Oh I See. Ab samaj mein aaya.
Omi: Anywayz See ya at lunch.
The bell rings and everyone goes to their classes.
The first 2 classes is a principal's speech(pretty boring).
The classes get over somehow.
Sneha catches prem in the hallway.
Sneha: Prem, I have been looking for u for a long time.
Prem: Why? What do u want?
Sneha: I wanna know abt the Basket ball tryouts.
Prem: I think they r today after college in the gym.
Prem: Are u gonna join the team again?
Sneha: Ofcourse. is that a question to ask?
Prem: Basket ball freak.
Sneha: PREM!
Prem: Sry. COme on sneha get over it! You have been in all the basktet ball teams since grade 7!
Sneha: So? I like Baskbetball.
Other hallway.
Omi: Yaar angad, when r the b.b tryouts?
Angad: I think today after college in the gym.
Omi: Ok, thanks.
At Sujal's cabin.
Sujal: Today is my doctor's appointment. I better get there fast.
Sujal at the doctor.
"Knock Knock"
"Come in"
The doc: Have a seat.
Sujal sits.
Doc: AAp ko kya problem hai?
Sujal to himself: This person is very weird. I just came here for a regular checkup. Didnt she read my file?
Doc: Hello? and she turns arnd and it is none other then Kashihs.
Sujal just kepps on looking at her.
Kashish: Hello? I asked u someething!
Suja;: Oh, ye.... I came for a regular checkup.
Kashish: Ok..
The checkup is done.
Kashish: Aapka checkup ho gaya. Aur aapki reports aap key ghar aa jaye gi.
Sujal: Ok.
He doesnt move, he just sits there and stares at kashish.
Kashish to herself: Strange. Why isnt he going away? He is wasting my time.... Doesnt he know what to do when ur check up is done.
Kashish finds Sujal very weird and sujal finds kashish ver charming.
Kashish: Aapka checkup ho gaya hai.
Sujal: I know, not taking his eyes off kashish. U said that before.
Kashish: I have other appointments. Will u plz u kno leave?
Sujal realizes it has been 2 hrs since he has been sitting there and staring at kashish.
Sujal: Oh, I am soo sorry.... Plz. I am s..sory..I wasted ur time.. Sorry.
Kashish angrily: ITS OK.
Sujal: Bye.
After sujal leaves.
Kashish: THank god he left. Meray 2 hrs barbad kar diye. Ab mein bacho ka checkup kab karron gi?
At college(Lunch Time)
Amit: Hi Prem. Ktini GFz so far?
Prem(very sad) : none.
Amit shocked: NONE? YOU'RE JOKING? It is impossible, I mean u and w/o GF.
Prem: All the good ones are hooked up.
Amit: Oh I see. That is sad, very sad indeed.
Prem jus gives him a dirty look.
Angad and Kripa are coming into the caffeteria with lunch trays and both bump into each other accidentally.
Kripa: Dekhai nahii deta?
Angad: Tumhe nahii deta kya..STUPID.
Kripa: IDIOT! meray sarey kapre kharab kar diye.
Angad: Tumne mujhe idiot kaha?
Kripa: Yes! WHo else?
Angad: Sweety I am the smartest guy here and how dare u call me an idiot!
Kripa: Right. Shakal sey nazar a raha hai key kitney Smart u.. Bhoosa bhara hoa hai dimaag mein, uske siwaa kuch bhi nahi.
Angad really mad now: Excuse me?
Kripa: Excuse u, my foot!
Dev: I better get kripa other wise agar uska hath uthgaya to....
Anjali on the other table.
AnjalI: issey pehle angad apne hosh koh behte I better get him.
The whole cafeteria is enjoing AK fight.
Both Anjali and Dev get off their tables but too late. Kripa already gave a hard punch to Angad in his stomach.
Dev stops in his way. Dev's mouth drop open.
Dev: Kripa.....
Anjali goes to Angad before he loses his full temper..
Anjali: Angad chalo yahan sey...
Angad: :@
Anjali: Angad, and she drags him by his sleeve.
Angad yells while Anjali is taking him away.
Angad: Tumhe to mein dekh loon ga.. You..!
Kripa: Dekh loon ga kya? Himmat hai to abhi kuch karo.
Angad: YOU!.
Kripa: COWARD!
Anjali takes Angad away as quickly as she can. Dev comes up to Kripa(mouth still drop open)
Kripa: Kya hoa? Moon kyun khula hoa hai?
Dev: Kripa, today is the first day of college and u already started fighting.
Kripa: ME? THe dumb-head was the one who started.. But anyways why am i telling u this. u never believe me.
Dev: yeah right.
Prem-Amit on their tables.
Prem: Man, that women si strong,. I was thinking abt going out with her but tanhk goodness her "Usliyat" came in front. U know I really dont have the habit to get beaten up and that too by a girl.
AMit laughs: right.. I would call that woman a bully.
Prem: Me too!
When Dev-Kripa comes to their table kavya is staring at Kripa.
Kripa: What is it Kavya? Mujhe yoon akhey phar phar key kyun dekh rahe ho?
Kavya: Tumne uss bechare par haath kyun uthaya?
Dev: Bahi, sirf uthaya nahi, Mara bhi...
Kripa: Bechara? He dropped my food. The entire tray.
Kavya: It was an accident.
Kripa: Oye! Confuse item.. ab itne confuse ho gaye ho key tumhe ghalti se aur jaan pujh key karney mein koi farq nahiin aata.
Dev: Kripa, go join the wrestling team. Waha par jee bhar key sab ko maar keyna. There are tryouts after school today.
Kripa: Ahhhhhhh...SHUTUP!

plz comment guyz

Edited by anu-pre4eva - 11 February 2007 at 3:27pm
mandy07 Goldie

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Posted: 10 February 2007 at 1:24pm | IP Logged
LOL ak r hilarious i luved their fight LOL think their hatred is gonna turn into luv Embarrassed seems lik sujal has already started 2 fall 4 kashish can't wait 2 read more bout em Embarrassed wonder if amit n prem r gonna fall 4 da sam chick since they don't hav gfs yet Embarrassed update soon can't wait 2 read da next part Wink

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