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Posted: 06 February 2007 at 6:22pm | IP Logged
awwwwwwww, bit parts r REALLY cute!!!!!!! Embarrassed Embarrassed Clap
PLEASE introduce Angad soon!!!!! i miss my baby!!!! LOL
PLEASE continue soon!!!! Big smile
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Posted: 06 February 2007 at 8:59pm | IP Logged
awww its soooo cute
omg i was reading the last part its totally hilarious   ap scene with their children is too good i can imagine seeing all of them in one scene

lovely fanfic,u have shown ap as rocking and chilled parents sooooo the fanfic going to be fun and i loved the characters u chooosed for it.last part was amazing Clap Clap Clap
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Posted: 06 February 2007 at 9:35pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by puji_cezzu

awww its soooo cute
omg i was reading the last part its totally hilarious   ap scene with their children is too good i can imagine seeing all of them in one scene

lovely fanfic,u have shown ap as rocking and chilled parents sooooo the fanfic going to be fun and i loved the characters u chooosed for it.last part was amazing Clap Clap Clap

Thanks poooja. I am glad u liked the ap part.. That is my fav as well...Embarrassed...

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Posted: 07 February 2007 at 1:50pm | IP Logged
thanks for the lovely comments guys i will cont today! Tongue
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Posted: 07 February 2007 at 2:32pm | IP Logged
cute parts n waitng for da next part
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Posted: 07 February 2007 at 7:44pm | IP Logged
continue soon!
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Posted: 09 February 2007 at 3:55pm | IP Logged
Walia Family.
Like the other two families this family(Jai-Bani) are also doing Pooja.

Upstairs all the kids are sleeping except Sujal but their sleep gets distracted cuz of the pooja.
Upstairs, The kids rooms.
Angad: AHHHH, What is their problem? Everyday their pooja, It is soo irritatinggggg.

In the other room.
Omi: Oh god. Mom-dad really pisses me off... Saari neend kharab kar di..... Angry

Other room.
KT wakes up with a jerk: Ahh what is that? Oh no. I totally forgot today is the first day of college and again I got late for the pooja....

Anjali: Oh no.... I am late for the pooja again! SHIT.

ALl of them get ready and go downstairs.
Angad-Omi yells: MOM, DAD!
Jai: Omg, yeh kya tha?
Bani: None other then Angad and Omi.
Both turn arnd to find Angad-Omi there.
Jai: What happened children? Why r u two yelling?
Omi: Dad, U know very well.
Jai: Oh, Do I?
Angad: Plz dad, Subha subha mood kharab kar diya hai.
Jai: Kyun meine kya kiya? Confused
Angad: Pooja ki.
Bani: Angad, Pooja karney sey din acha guzarta...
Omi: Mom, yeh sab aap KT ko sunaey, She only believes this crap..
Bani: Mind ur toungue. Bhagwan ko aisey nahiin kehte.
Omi: WHatever.
Anjali-KT comes down.
Anjali: Mom, Prasad.
Omi-Angad shocked.
Angad: Anjali, tum kabse yeh prasad...?
Anjali: Aaj hi sey.
KT also takes prasad.
KT to Omi and Angad: Bhai, appne nahi leyna?
O-A: No way....
Sujal comes.
Sujal: Ley lo.
Omi: No bhai. Plzzz.. Mujhe nahii....
Sujal: do(2) saal puraana thapad bhul gaye. 

Omi gets a flashback of wat happaned.
Omi nervous: Nahi bhai, yaad hai..Bahut achi tareeke sey yaad hai infact, Dont worry, Mein abhi prasad leta hoon.
Sujal smiles: Good. Angad tum bhi.
Angad makes a face but takes the prasad anyway.
All of them leave for college.
Jai: Sujal, kya har baat pey Omi becharey ko uska thapad yaad dilllate ho? Bacha hai....
Sujal: Dad, Apne voh idiom sunna hai? Lathon key bhoot baton sey nahiin mante,and bye mujhe office key liye der ho rahi hai.....


Edited by anu-pre4eva - 09 February 2007 at 3:59pm
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Posted: 09 February 2007 at 7:16pm | IP Logged
awesome update Clap sujal is sooooo hotttttttttttt Embarrassed can't wait 2 read their luv stories especially pmz n sujalz Embarrassed update soon Wink

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