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part 2- flirty beginning fan fic

recap: gauri is not impressed by city playboy Shiv and his condesending remarks. Shiv is perplexed as to what he feels for Gauri and is annoyed by her obvious dislike of him.

Gauri: chalo gari main ja kur beht joi, tum ab bore nahi ho rah hai? With that Gauri flounces past.

Shiv stands annoyed. No one has ever bossed me about like this. He steps forward to head to his car but then thinks of what gauri said, he did not want her to think he had listened to what she had said. He takes a step back. But he really wanted to go and sit in his car. He steps forward. But the she has won. He steps back.
Gauri returns and watches Shiv.
G: is this a new dance you have been taught in the city?
She giggles.
Shiv: ahem...no..em..i mean yes. So what if it is.
To make his point he steps backwards and forwards more quickly and begins to click his fingers. All of a sudden a crowd begins to form around them. Gauri giggles harder and tells Kaya to put the music on as the wedding entertainer has arrived. The crwod begins to clap and Shiv is now in a pickle as to how to end this parade without making an idiot of himself. In the backround "Say Shava Shava" is playing. A thought occurs to Shiv.

Shiv: Well friends I can't take all the credit it was Gauri who taught me these fantastic moves and I would like her to join me.
He goes to pull her onto the floor with him. She protests and trys to make a quick escape. But Shiv is much stronger and faster and holds onto her hand and drags her to the middle of the circle, he begins spinning her.

G: What the hell do you think you are doing? You are a fool anyhow, must you make me endure this to?
Her eyes spark fury.
Shiv: I thought you liked entertainment...no?

The music continues and changes into a slow song..the crowd continue to cheer and urge them to continue dancing.

G: i am a gaoun ke ladke though...i only make tea...
S:I can see you are the odd one out, there is always a rotten apple...
G:So you prefer the tea making types?
S:I prefer the ones who don't make it a habit to make a fool of me!
G:You are able to do that all by yourself actually..

With that Gauris eyes sparkle and she bursts into giggles. Shiv also laughs at the sight they must make. They dance grinning and laughing. Until the end of the song comes. Shiv continues to hold onto Gauri.

Gauri:this is the end of the song. You must let me go.
Shiv:oh..I ..yes...

Deep male voice comes from behind.
Man: yes I think it is about time you let go off my fiance.


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A quick note to say thankyou to everyone who has read my fanfic and thankyou for all the lovely comments...it is really appreciated

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awesome!!!but fianceShocked??????

Edited by shivgauri - 05 February 2007 at 9:00am

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omg Clap

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Clap

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amazing part Clap

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great part Clap
well, r u introducing shashank as gauri's fiance Confused ?
continue soon

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awesome Clap Clap
is shanky her fiance

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