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Tere Bina (RajivAmna ff) last part updt!

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Posted: 02 February 2007 at 3:04am | IP Logged
Clap very interesting continue soon
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very nice... Clap
please continue soon... Big smile
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Nice...cont soon!!
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Posted: 03 February 2007 at 5:10am | IP Logged
thank u evryone for ur comments Smile
      will update soon...
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Posted: 04 February 2007 at 5:09am | IP Logged
                                             part-1

ek naya din..ek nayi subha hai. andhere ki chaadar ko hatate hue suraj ki halki si kirne nikhar aayi hai...
Patto per shabnum ki bunde hai jinhe dekhkar lag raha hai jaise ki wo baahe phylakar iss naye din ka swagat kar rahi hai... Is khubsoorat se mausam mein ek pyari si ladki un patto ki aor dekh rahi hai..ya u kahe wo shabnam ki bunde uske liye prerna hai...wo un shabnum ki bundo aur un phoolo ko is kadar dekhti hai maano wo unse baatein kar rahi hai..kuch keh rahi ho.... wo bas unhe chune hi wali hoti hai ki peeche se koi use bulata hai....
person: memsahaab aapko dadima bula rahe hai...
{wo ladki palatti hai.... aur hawa se uski zulfe udkar uske chehre per aati hai... wo badi nazakat se apne chehre se zulfe hatati hai}
girl: aap chaliye kaka.., hum abhi aate hai.. person: ji betiya...
{yeh kehte hue wo naukar chala jata hai}
{ wo ladki bas un patto ko doubara dekhti hai...phir achanak muskurati hai phir palatti hai..aur daudti hui ander jaati hai...
uski payal ki awaaz saare ghar mein maano kisi dhun ki tarha bajti hai... ., wo ander dinning table pe jaati hai aur apni dadi ko waha baitha dekhti hai..aur unhe peeche se jakar pakadti hai}
Dadi: ah..aa gaye apne dosto se milkar... [laughs] meri pagli beti... chal aa baith aur naashta karle...
{wo ladki saamne aati hai... aur yeh aur koi nahi balki hamari pyarisi Saima [aamna] hai}
Saima: sahi kaha dadima aapne.., yeh subha subha suraj ki kirne.., wo shabnum ki bunde..inhe dekhkar hume itni khushi milti hai ki kya kahe.. baaki to aap jaante hi hai...
Dadi: ha ha..tumhe bhala mujhse bhehtar aur kaun jaan sakta hai...
{both laugh}
Dadi: acha beta.., ab to tumhari saari padhayi bhi puri ho chuki hai.., to ab aage kya socha hai?
Saima; sochna kya hai dadima, bas apne business mein aapka haath batana hai, aur kya..
Dadi: yeh bhi thik hai..., meri thodi zimmedariya kam ho jayenge...
Saima: oh dadima, ab aap apni saari zimmedariyo ko bhul jayiye..ab hum sab kuch dekhenge..aapko office ki thodi bhi fikar karne ki zaroorat nahi hai..
Dadi: {smiles} zimmedariyo ko kaise bhool jaye beta.., hamari zimmedariya to tab puri ho jayengi jab tumhari shaadi hokar tum apne ghar chali jaogi..
Saima: nahi dadima.., hum aapko chodkar kahi nahi jaane wale...
Dadi: to kya tum kabhi shaadi nahi karogi?
Saima; karenge na..per hum uss ladke ko ghar jamai bana lenge..phir to sari problems hi solve ho jayenge..
{both laugh}
{tabhi Saima ka cell ring karta hai.., wo cell dekhti hai..aur bas daudte hue apni room mein chali jaati hai}
Dadi: are sun to....
{per Saima bas chali jati hai}
Saima: hello...Ar...Aryan
{aryan hai hamare pyare aur naughty se chaitanya}
Aryan: hey Saima... kaha ho tum? pata nahi peechle do dino se tum mujhse milne nahi aayi ho... Ho kaha tum?
Saima: main yehi ho baba... bas zara aise hi..
Aryan: acha wo sab chodo aur yeh batao ki aaj kab milogi?
Saima: jab tum kaho
Aryan: ok...to phir ek ghante baad baristas mein
Saima: thik hai..,hum aa jayenge.. per Aryan please intezar mat karvana
Aryan: nahi baba... ab tumhe kya batao..tumse milne ki kitni jaldi hai mujhe...anyways tum aa jao..phir tumse bahot zaroori bat karni hai..aur iss baar bas ek tum hi meri help kar sakti ho..
Saima: ab aisi bhi kya baat hai Aryan?
Aryan: oh ho..pehle milo to sahi.. chal then will catch u after an hour..
Saima: ok..bye
Aryan: bye...
Saima: {to herself} ab aisi bhi kya baat ho sakti hai... yeh Aryan bhi na.. [smiles]
{kuch der baad Saima Aryan se milne ke liye jaa hi rahi hoti hai ki dadi use rok lete ha}
Dadi: are beta kahi jaa rahi ho to saath chalo main chod deti hu....
Saima: nahi dadima.., hum chale jayenge..waise bhi hume jaldi pohochna hai...
Dadi: thik hai..per zara dhere drive karna...
Saima: ji dadima..acha hum aate hai...,byeee
Dadi: bye..
{Saima.., drive karte hue bas Aryan ke baare mein hi sochti rehti hai.... wo puri tarha apni soch mein khoyi rehti hai ki saamne se aate hue ek bachche ko wo dekti nahi aur
uske haatho acident ho jata hai... wo immediate gaadi rokti hai aur uss bachche ki taraf jaati hai... bachche ke sar per chot aayi hoti hai aur kaafi khoon beh raha hota hai.. wo yeh dekhkar bahot darr jaati hai.., kuch pal ke liye wo samajh nahi paati ki wo kya kare... phir wo kisi tarha uss bachche ko uthati aur hospital le jaati hai..aur bachche ko admit karvati hai..,
per wo kaafi dari hui hoti hai... tabhi doctor aakar use bache ke bare mien puchte hai}
doctor: ji aap iss bachche ki maa hai?
Saima: nahi doctor..per baat kya hai? wo thik to hai na?
doctor: dekhiye bachche ki treatment to humne kar di hai..per chot lagne ki wajah se kaafi khoon beh chuka hai..., aur iss waqt hamare blood bank mein iss bachche ka blood group available nahi hai..
Saima: {ghabrayi hui} oh god... kaunsa blood group hai?
doctor: B-positive
Saima: ji hamara blood group bhi B-positive hai
doctor: oh that's great! waise aapne bataya nahi ki aap iss bachche ki kya lagti hai?
Saima: doctor..wo..wo hamari gaadi se hi iss bachche ka accident hua tha.., per doctor humne yeh jaanbhujkhar nahi kiya tha..wo to bas ekdum se...
doctor: what? yeh to police case hai.. hume immediate police ko inform karna hoga..
Saima: per doctor.... humne yeh jaan bhujkar nahi kiya hai..
{tabhi waha nurse aati hai}
nurse: doctor.., hume immediate dusri khoon ki bottle chadhani hogi...
doctor: oh god.. blood ka arrangement hua?
nurse: ab tak nahi...
Saima: doctor hum uss bachche ko apna khoon denge.... , aap chaho to baad mein police ko inform karna per abhi uss bache ko dekhiye..
doctor: ji ji..chaliye...
{Saima uss bachche ko blood deti hai..tabhi waha hospital ke bahar ek gaadi tezi se aakar ruk jaati hai..., aur ek shakss bilkul pareshan sa gaadi se bahar nikalta hai,
usne lite blue color ka suit pehna hai.., aur wo daudta hua reception counter tak jata hai..}
nurse: yes sir.., how can i help you?
person: yaha abhi ek chote bachche ki accident case aayi hai..
nurse: ji sir.... may i know your name please...
person: Rayan Garewal... {aur yeh rahe hamare dashing & handsome.......... rajeev}
nurse: yes sir.. first floor, second room to ur left.
Rayan: thanks...
{aur wo daudta hua room tak jata hai..aur waha Saima aur apne bete Aditya ko aise haal mein dekhkar hairaan hota hai..}

thatz it in part-1.......
pls do comment!


     

Edited by ruksaar_khan - 04 February 2007 at 5:15am

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Posted: 04 February 2007 at 5:47am | IP Logged
areeee ruksar masth part likha hai kya baat hai hum toh fida hai apki story paar Clap cntinue soon
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Posted: 04 February 2007 at 6:21am | IP Logged
thank u so much dear...aur hum aapke comments per fida ho gaye Wink

Edited by ruksaar_khan - 04 February 2007 at 6:22am

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