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Posted: 25 January 2007 at 10:26pm | IP Logged

Jassie had been frustrated that her marriage preparations was taking place without even her consent and she realized this when she returned to India for her vacation..She looked at the gate and called up one of the guyz out there and asked abt the preparations....And right then she was about to go off when her sister and brother-in-law saw her.....

She was:Arrgghh......Crap...In dono abhi aana tha..Ufff...And she turns around.....

Had the brother-in-law not been there….i wud have become ur sis Razz …but dun worry..i ve got a suitable sis for u….our very own sapu Wink ….hehehe(u decide who'll b the bro-in-law Razz )…this marriage proposal was btw brought up by her…(wicked sis.. Twisted Evil )


Sapu: hi jass…welcome back!! Very Happy
Jass: hi sis…wat hav u done? Surprised Y this marriage? U know I wanted to complete my studies first… Sad
Sapu: oh c'mon jass…u have to get married one day Razz …n believe me…this guy is really very gud..u wudnt find some1 like him anywhere….. Cool
Jas: but sapu di………. Surprised
Sapu: u know what?? he's ur jiju's sisters-friends-bhua's-sons-cousieen…… he's done MBA from London Wink ….very handsome..guy…I m sure u'll b happy wid him…. Very Happy
Jass: but di… Confused

Jassu tries hard Mad …but sapu conitues praising the guy….jass thinks isse baat karna to bekar hai….i'll try talking to jij's Embarassed …he might understand………………hopefully Rolling Eyes )

Jassie calls her jeeju, Sardar Alexu

Sardar:Hello jassu
Jassu:bhaijaan, aap ko mere ek kaam karna padega.....Agar aap ne mere kaam kardiya toh aap ko yeh milengey!!!!
Sardar starts to look behind and takes it from Jassu's hand.....

Sapu looks at him strangely........Sardar in a natural way brings Sapu to have a cup of coffee where Sapu and Sardar have their sweet moment....

Jassu feels so elated!!!!!Finally Stupid Sardar has fallen into my trap!!!Hahaha...Yippie!!!!!!Now i will do what i want ......

That night, Sardar helps Jassu elope from her own house while every1 sleeps soundly.......

Jassu knew this was da moment as she took a cab to the airport.......Sardar.....don't u realize the cheque i gave u was a fake??Lollz....

Jas tries to escape the marriage by returning to US….she takes a cab to the airport….everything was goin as per the plan Razz ….she was dreamin to herself………gr8 way to escape a wedding Wink ………by the time everybody wud realize…….i wud b already gone….yippeee..me such a smarty……Wink

Suddenly the cab stops….jassu, Surprised woke up from her dream…asks d driver wats wrong? Driver informs her that due to the bad weather all the roads are closed….there's no way that she cud go to the airport now…..she wud only go once the weather is fine…(that is not expected until the morning..)

Now poor jass has only two ways left……… Confused

1) Either to go back home…..n marry the "handsome-london return-guy" (whom jassu has not seen yet) Sad
Or
2) To wait till the weather gets fine..n return to US---- but this is not known wen the weather wud b fine………also she wud have to find a place to spend the night….so that she can go to d airport next morning….. Confused Confused

now imagin d scene…………………………. ek sunsaan sadak…..charo taraf andhera hi andhera…………………………. aur itni tez baaarish………………………..in sab ke beech mein ek kaali-peeli jaasu ki taxi Mr. Green …………………. Jiska khadus sa driver jassssu se poochta hai……….oye madam…………….. ab kidher jaana hai????? Exclamation

Bechari jassu – thodi confused si…thodi dari hui….kuch samajh mein nahi aa raha kya kare….kahan jaaye……. Sad Shocked Surprised Confused Embarassed Sad Shocked Confused




Now wat will jassu do? Which way wud she go???? Rolling Eyes

Kya hoga jassu ka??? Exclamation

She enter TAXI-no 420......................

Driver=vinu......galli.......choor bazar...room no --420

Oye chookiri kidar jaana hey booolllllllllll........apun ke pass time nahe....
Cool

Driver vinu falls for his passenger jassu Embarassed …. …being the kindest soul dat he is Embarassed …he cudnt see this poor gal so sad n depressed….he decides to help her out…asks jassu…wat the matter is……….jassu…cudnt think of anything else herself Confused ….tell the entire pblm to vinu………

After hearing her pblm…vinu tries to find a solution for this Idea …..(trying to impress jassu at the same time…)
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First of all kahani mey aise twist nahe hey...........

Driver jassu ka kahani sunaa...........paisa liyaa ...uthardiyaa chala gayaaa..............
Embarassed Wink
Apun impress karne ke liye kuch be nahe karthaaaaaaaaaa okkkkkk

jassu realizing dat taxi driver vinu is of no help...gives him d money n gets out......still not knowing wat to do Rolling Eyes

Dannnyyyyyyyyyy is comming on her way....dum dum dum............


Slow motion..........danny walking....jassu walking .............

achanak...........that happen........................

achanak...danny comes out and yells boo

jassu get scared: ahh
danny: hahah..
Jassu: that was not funny ok
Sad

Jassu:Of all places how r u here.....

Danny:Mere priye dost....Jassu thr was a bar down thr...i had a boost thr....
Jassu:U stink!!!!!
Danny:Wad r u doing here???

Jassu tells him everything.....
Danny couldn't stop laughing!!!!!

Jassu:Uff stop it man!!!!!!I m gng
Danny:Kaha jaoge akele is raat ko???

Jassu:dun worrie nahin tera ghar ya mera ghar nahi uss bar-kyun ki mein peeta nahi hoon

Danny:Toh phir.....

Jassu:Airport....i'll walk and go thr.....

Danny:You dun haf enough stamina darlin

Jassu:Pehle apne stamina ko dekhlo

Danny:I'll come wid u..

Jassu:Kisliye???Moral support ke liye....Shut up.....I m going on my own...You just stay thr!!!!!

being a gud friend jass cudnt see danny Embarassed in such a bad "drunk" state…she decides to drop him at his place first….(which was close by..)

Tired by the previous hours events Confused Sad (first the vinu driver…n then danny the drunk) jass cudnt take it anymore….. Confused
She decides to return home Sad ….n accept whatever her fate had in store for her….
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jassu was thinking abt how she tricked sardar and felt bad at the point that she will haf to go back to da house which she had eloped from....

Just then she heard a siren from nowhere.........

She realized that some1 was running and a van was behind him....and the man turned behind Jassu adn Jassu gets shot......The guy got scared abt Jassu's life and decided to carry her and bring her to a hospital which he saw a few metres away from the bar......

the guy....like a true hero Cool ....takes jassu to the hospital....
gets all the specialised doctors....to save jassu's life.....


after 2-3 hour operation...doctors inform dat....jassu is safe n fine Very Happy ...all thanx to our "hero" who brought jassu..jus in time...




<btw....this hero is the same guy.....whose gonna marry jass> Wink
neither of the two know bout this.....as they havent met b4 Wink
Razz

Jassu regains consciousness.....She is obviously sure she's in the hospital.....She cals da nurse and asks her abt who sent her here and saved her life.....

She saw the same guy at the hospital....Wad is this creep doing here....Who endangered my life and also got me shot.....Look at him,so ragged ,no sense of style and dressing......

The nurse confirmed Jassu's doubts abt da person who saved her life....Jassu is surprised!!!!

Jassu is surprised......................she saw him........and try talk to him.....smile with him.........wink him........show some action to him.........

She again surprised.............cos she read the board...........

ABC Mental hospital...............lol Razz Very Happy ..

jassu obviously was in another ward. Wink

After hearing wat nurse jus said… jassu realized how wrong she was… that guy was not all that bad…he saved her life after all….n jassu was real impressed by his heroic act…but also confused bout his choice of hospital...(y mental?? Confused )...guess it was all b'coz he wanted to save her life so badly Wink Wink


On the other side that guy (lets name him.."Prem"- something like a suraj barjataya's hero Wink ) ….was really relieved to c the girl (who was almost killed b'coz of him) being safe n fine…he thanked god for that…(c how gud he is Wink )

Jassu's parents came to know of the accident the next morning…they immediately rushed to the hospital…................................


(ab bhagwan hi bachaye jassu ko ....uske parensts se Razz Razz Razz )

Jassu was neither close to her parents so when her parents were trying to ask her things she answered them to da point and not a single word after....Sapu and Sardar was also present!!!

Sardar still haven;t told Sapu anything yet......

Jassu:If u want to thank any1 then it is Mr...
Prem:Prem..Prem Suroor
Jassu:Yeah..exactly

Sapu,Sardar and Jassu's parents were disgusted by his hair and appearance

Jassu told each and every1 to leave since that if they can't appreciate him then why bother staying....

Prem got surprised to hear words from Jassu....He starts thinking otherwise...

Jassu says if he has saved my life then he deserves to be my friend and holds great respect in my life......

(Prem was like Ali in Dhoom)....sapna toothi..lol...continue

To be continued

Story continued by jassie_17,Star_on_Earth,vinu and sweethoney

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Posted: 26 January 2007 at 7:46am | IP Logged
Wow guys, great story till now...funyy too! LOL

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Posted: 27 January 2007 at 5:10am | IP Logged
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Posted: 29 January 2007 at 6:30pm | IP Logged
Jassu and PRem met up often.....

One day they were talking abt marriage
Prem:I listen to my parents advice first and then decide for myself
Jassu:Thatz good but wad if u do not agree wid ur parents...like letz say for marriage...u prefer arranged ya love???
Prem:Arranged marriages work better than love
Jassu:I don't agree wid u.....Why won't love work...Love and trust drives all relationships!!!!But u shud marry the one who loves u....Let me tell u my demands ..if i do engaged after my degree, i'll take at least 2 yrs to be married...I can't commit myself so easily.....

Prem:But why r u telling me all this.??
Jassu:Since u r my very good friend
Prem:Icic.....isn't that too long?
Jassu:Nah....
PRem:Shall we haf some coffee???
Jassu:Sure..I'll treat u!!!!!

PRem thinks:Valentine's day is approaching but how do I tell her???

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Posted: 29 January 2007 at 8:00pm | IP Logged
nice story...keep writin..i luv it so farBig smile

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Posted: 30 January 2007 at 12:58am | IP Logged
For all those who are wondering wat this is….
Let me tell u all the rules of this play….

Well wat we all do here is start up a story…(maybe jus a situation) and the next person who posts continues this story..in her own imaginative way…doesn't have to be an essay but jus continue from one scene to another scene..making it more dramatic or humorous and giving any kind of twists and turns u like..to make it even more interesting…

the present story that's goin is given above… its story bout a gal called "jassu"
whoever posts next can continue the story… (can even include more characters, either IF members or imaginary). If any story is dragged on too long…. or is boring… u can give it logical ending n start a new one…

so guys…get goin..no rules n regulations here… everybody is welcome to join…
maybe we can even make a serial out of it…..lol LOL

jassie_17

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Posted: 30 January 2007 at 6:17am | IP Logged
oh Star..i m so loving it!!!!

continue pls!!!!

We r sure to rock da channels if our story becomes a hit....And then we can do series of our stories

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Posted: 02 February 2007 at 12:27pm | IP Logged
Umm...Im a bit confused..... tho I like the way the story is going. However couldn't u people give a plot summary first? Cos first there goes the story and then a description which is pretty confusing!!! Wink Wink Anywayzz love the first post-it was funny tho I had never read a part of this story before!!!!

Tongue Nutzie Wink

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