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tanvi_lovely Senior Member
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Posted: 23 January 2007 at 12:45am | IP Logged
i didnt get it why you wrote groom undergoing forced wedding.... ali loves pooja so he must be happy to marry pooja n same for pooja.... please dont create tense moments between pooja n ali let them enjoy their wedding..please i am waiting when ali sees pooja in wedding outfit....
tanvi_lovely Senior Member
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Posted: 23 January 2007 at 12:45am | IP Logged
i didnt get it why you wrote groom undergoing forced wedding.... ali loves pooja so he must be happy to marry pooja n same for pooja.... please dont create tense moments between pooja n ali let them enjoy their wedding..please i am waiting when ali sees pooja in wedding outfit....
freakandnut57 Senior Member
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Posted: 23 January 2007 at 1:58am | IP Logged
he he.....i thought u all would gt it rite....ok....lemme explain....all the kmaiites hate raj....and by hearing his name....as someone coming for his wedding....dont u expect ali to behave negatively....but since its his duty.....he obeyed!

its a perfectly cute wedding...do not worry....!
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Posted: 23 January 2007 at 2:50am | IP Logged
ok now i get it thanks for explanation .... pls continue as soon as you can .... i am loving your fanfic especially ali pooja part....
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Posted: 23 January 2007 at 3:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jivora

Ritu's behaviour, raj's manner and her collong him colonel five years after marriage shows the distances in the couple.....it shows that after soo many years of aquaitance they have not gone further than "dr.ritu" and "captin/colonel".............it shows how dull, lifeless, dry their marriage is...........

and do u really want me to say whoz the reason????? LOL LOL LOL

nope.... u dont hav to.... i guess we all know WinkWinkWink

but just tell me.... why did Raj say "Im sorry Navin"????ConfusedConfusedConfused

luv
kanak
angeliclooks_me IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 23 January 2007 at 4:40am | IP Logged
dat was amazing jivora! Clap like kanak alredy sed, ur damn fast! Clap so.... i dun think i need 2 say PLZ POST ASAP since u r gonna post it soon Clap
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Posted: 23 January 2007 at 6:53am | IP Logged
sure. i will be glad if u all can tell me what u want in the story and ys, what you dont want to happen.....

u would like raj-naina/huda-naina tog?.....etc.....etc....
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Posted: 23 January 2007 at 7:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jivora

sure. i will be glad if u all can tell me what u want in the story and ys, what you dont want to happen.....

u would like raj-naina/huda-naina tog?.....etc.....etc....


me wud luvvvvv it if it was RNSmile

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