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Badly Arranged- Last part -- pg 88 (Page 85)

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Posted: 22 April 2007 at 1:25pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by munizaaa

Originally posted by ishu124

Originally posted by love_jaan

Originally posted by ishu124

OMG...i cant believe muniza would write something like that.Embarrassed muniza is the last person who would write something like that. Disapprove....LOL why she did great job actually beter then a lot of peopleClap

anyways...good job.Clap

ishu. Tongue

p.s. im only 13Evil Smile...and i read this part.
 

what you naughty ishu buit don't tell many people Wink

btw great writhing you are so good pls don't be embaresse its just cute part i was reallty like EmbarrassedEmbarrassed while reading but now i amLOL kirpa is like wild cat (haha shr don dialogeWink)

when you meet muniza in real life...she is way different....plus id expect my 17year old cousin to be a better role model.

pity.... but anyways i agree with rejected part 13 was soooo PG13!

it was part 20 lol... Embarrassed 

Well i wanted to tone it down a bit since most of the ppl reading this are like little kids, but i didnt just cause i went so perfectly with kripa's character and because the kids reading this are probably more mature then meLOLLOL. I am glad you guys liked it, cause i personally didn't. And yes there are parts after this i think about 2 or 3. I am never sure since i always change around the story according to my mood.

 

you might want to re-pharse the kids word to teens. Embarrassed and obivisouly we are much muture than you. LOL why your the one, who looks at me at JK and blushsEmbarrassed on saturday.LOL

plus muniza im only like 4 years youngerDancing than you and i have seen and read worse thingsConfused than you might have at the age of 13. ConfusedOuchCry

 



Edited by ishu124 - 23 April 2007 at 8:53pm
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Posted: 23 April 2007 at 1:49pm | IP Logged
lol hahahaha
lmao omgggg
munizaaa it wasnt dat baddd u were going on as if sum1 was gonna b raped hahahaha
ive read ahem more unappropriate parts before:P lol
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Posted: 23 April 2007 at 2:38pm | IP Logged
LOL
Originally posted by ishu124

Originally posted by munizaaa

Originally posted by ishu124

Originally posted by love_jaan

Originally posted by ishu124

OMG...i cant believe muniza would write something like that.Embarrassed muniza is the last person who would write something like that. Disapprove....LOL why she did great job actually beter then a lot of peopleClap

anyways...good job.Clap

ishu. Tongue

p.s. im only 13Evil Smile...and i read this part.
 

what you naughty ishu buit don't tell many people Wink

btw great writhing you are so good pls don't be embaresse its just cute part i was reallty like EmbarrassedEmbarrassed while reading but now i amLOL kirpa is like wild cat (haha shr don dialogeWink)

when you meet muniza in real life...she is way different....plus id expect my 17year old cousin to be a better role model.

pity.... but anyways i agree with rejected part 13 was soooo PG13!

it was part 20 lol... Embarrassed 

Well i wanted to tone it down a bit since most of the ppl reading this are like little kids, but i didnt just cause i went so perfectly with kripa's character and because the kids reading this are probably more mature then meLOLLOL. I am glad you guys liked it, cause i personally didn't. And yes there are parts after this i think about 2 or 3. I am never sure since i always change around the story according to my mood.

 

you might want to re-pharse the kids word to teens. Embarrassed and obivisouly we are much muture than you. LOL why your the one, who looks at me at JK and blushsEmbarrassed on saturday.LOL

plus muniza im only like 4 years youngerDancing than you and i have seen and read worse thingsConfused than you might have at the age of 13. Wink

 

Well i am sorry but this is so like, against my personality, if you know what i meanWink and i feel a bit guilty putting those kinds of part seeing the KIDS that read it. 

I have read things that are probably worse then you can imagine(you'll know what i mean when you get to my age) but it still doesn't mean that i would want to put something like that up there. And i wasnt blushing it was a smileLOLLOL

 



Edited by munizaaa - 23 April 2007 at 2:40pm
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Posted: 23 April 2007 at 2:42pm | IP Logged
God Munizaaam i just loved the last part.OMG ur fanfic is so interesting,please update it fast,I'm dying to know what happens next.By the way,we all are mature to read this,it wasn't embarrassing,in fact it was perfect.Trust me,we know   all this stuff from skool,that's where the knowledge comes from.Anyways,continue soon!       Maria! Smile Smile
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Posted: 23 April 2007 at 2:48pm | IP Logged
awesome updae!!!!!!!!!!!n it was so romantic and funny! *sorry though because i am 13vand i read it
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Posted: 23 April 2007 at 8:57pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by munizaaa

LOL
Originally posted by ishu124

Originally posted by munizaaa

Originally posted by ishu124

Originally posted by love_jaan

Originally posted by ishu124

OMG...i cant believe muniza would write something like that.Embarrassed muniza is the last person who would write something like that. Disapprove....LOL why she did great job actually beter then a lot of peopleClap

anyways...good job.Clap

ishu. Tongue

p.s. im only 13Evil Smile...and i read this part.
 

what you naughty ishu buit don't tell many people Wink

btw great writhing you are so good pls don't be embaresse its just cute part i was reallty like EmbarrassedEmbarrassed while reading but now i amLOL kirpa is like wild cat (haha shr don dialogeWink)

when you meet muniza in real life...she is way different....plus id expect my 17year old cousin to be a better role model.

pity.... but anyways i agree with rejected part 13 was soooo PG13!

it was part 20 lol... Embarrassed 

Well i wanted to tone it down a bit since most of the ppl reading this are like little kids, but i didnt just cause i went so perfectly with kripa's character and because the kids reading this are probably more mature then meLOLLOL. I am glad you guys liked it, cause i personally didn't. And yes there are parts after this i think about 2 or 3. I am never sure since i always change around the story according to my mood.

 

you might want to re-pharse the kids word to teens. Embarrassed and obivisouly we are much muture than you. LOL why your the one, who looks at me at JK and blushsEmbarrassed on saturday.LOL

plus muniza im only like 4 years youngerDancing than you and i have seen and read worse thingsConfused than you might have at the age of 13. Wink

 

Well i am sorry but this is so like, against my personality, if you know what i meanWink and i feel a bit guilty putting those kinds of part seeing the KIDS that read it. 

I have read things that are probably worse then you can imagine(you'll know what i mean when you get to my age) but it still doesn't mean that i would want to put something like that up there. And i wasnt blushing it was a smileLOLLOL

the word is Angry"TEENS"Angry get it right woman.LOL

and you were blushingEmbarrassed...i know the difference.WinkLOL

nobody wants to go all to desriptive.....Confused......at least i hope not.Smile

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Posted: 25 April 2007 at 5:44pm | IP Logged
Awesome Part Continue Soon Clap
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I am typing the last part up right now... wait about an hour. Tongue

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