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Badly Arranged- Last part -- pg 88 (Page 84)

berkeleygirl818 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 21 April 2007 at 10:25am | IP Logged
i cant stop laughing... ur so funny... its not that embarrassing... i didnt
blush at all... AWESUM prt!!! Clap
WHOA kripa... she jumped on him... i guess she wanted him... BAD!!! hehe
that poor boy!!! but he didnt back up either... so i guess he wanted her...
BAD too... hehe!!! i CANNOT wait to read more... so continue soon!!! Tongue
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Posted: 21 April 2007 at 10:37am | IP Logged
great plz cont soon. Clap
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Posted: 21 April 2007 at 10:43am | IP Logged
aawww that was such a good part, and you thought it was retarted lol I like the part and you do know even though you post that you shouldnt read it unless your 18 come on that was like pg13 right there, that was no where close to R rated anything so if you post more parts like the last one and i will keep saying its only pg13 lol
ishu124 Goldie
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Posted: 21 April 2007 at 12:36pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by love_jaan

Originally posted by ishu124

OMG...i cant believe muniza would write something like that.Embarrassed muniza is the last person who would write something like that. Disapprove....LOL why she did great job actually beter then a lot of peopleClap

anyways...good job.Clap

ishu. Tongue

p.s. im only 13Evil Smile...and i read this part.
  what you naughty ishu buit don't tell many people Wink

 

 

btw great writhing you are so good pls don't be embaresse its just cute part i was reallty like EmbarrassedEmbarrassed while reading but now i amLOL kirpa is like wild cat (haha shr don dialogeWink)

when you meet muniza in real life...she is way different....plus id expect my 17year old cousin to be a better role model.

pity.... but anyways i agree with rejected part 13 was soooo PG13!



Edited by ishu124 - 21 April 2007 at 12:38pm
munizaaa Goldie
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Posted: 21 April 2007 at 1:08pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ishu124

Originally posted by love_jaan

Originally posted by ishu124

OMG...i cant believe muniza would write something like that.Embarrassed muniza is the last person who would write something like that. Disapprove....LOL why she did great job actually beter then a lot of peopleClap

anyways...good job.Clap

ishu. Tongue

p.s. im only 13Evil Smile...and i read this part.
  what you naughty ishu buit don't tell many people Wink

 

 

btw great writhing you are so good pls don't be embaresse its just cute part i was reallty like EmbarrassedEmbarrassed while reading but now i amLOL kirpa is like wild cat (haha shr don dialogeWink)

when you meet muniza in real life...she is way different....plus id expect my 17year old cousin to be a better role model.

pity.... but anyways i agree with rejected part 13 was soooo PG13!

it was part 20 lol... Embarrassed 

Well i wanted to tone it down a bit since most of the ppl reading this are like little kids, but i didnt just cause i went so perfectly with kripa's character and because the kids reading this are probably more mature then meLOLLOL. I am glad you guys liked it, cause i personally didn't. And yes there are parts after this i think about 2 or 3. I am never sure since i always change around the story according to my mood.

    

 

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Posted: 21 April 2007 at 1:16pm | IP Logged
lol if it makes u feel any better lol im 18 lol ohh man LMAO continue soon k!
brainychild92 IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 21 April 2007 at 2:02pm | IP Logged
woow!!! GO KRPIAA!! a gurl gotta do wat a gurl gotta do.. even to get her hubby!!!

lolz.. and i guess angad khanna gotta wsin even in this.. tsk tsk..

continue sooooooonnnnn
candyprincess IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 21 April 2007 at 10:19pm | IP Logged
great part
wooo kripa was little too jumpy she just jumped on the boy LOL
cont sooon

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