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great story... i think if u keep writing this way.. it'll turn out way better than the original.. try to include some funny antics of KB as well.. n u cud even do a wee romance b/w KB n KK.. that wud be a fun parallel track.. ur doin a gr8 job.. thanks for ur effort..

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Chapter five
the same day nimmo comes back home with jaanvi. she tells her what happened at the road that morning. jaanvi simply laughs. on her way kunal calls her..............
kunu: hello, mein kunal bol raha hoon.
nims: haan bolo. mein nimmo hi bol rahi hoon.
kunu: actually i'm sorry. pichli baar meine tumse bahut bhuri tharah se baat ki.mujhe asie baat nahi karna chahiye tha.
nims: i'm also sorry. mein bhi tumaare baare mein bhuri tharah se baat ki.
kunu: so, that means, compromise right?
nims: right. kunal, toh mein apne cell kab le sakti hoon
kunu: aaj nahi. aur kal bhi mein tumse nahi mil sakta. kuch zaroori kaam hai.
nims: its ok. how about friday? barso toh tum free ho na?
kunu: patha nahi. check karna padega. ok then; bye
nims: lekhin tum.......................
but he had already cut the phone.
jaan: kya hua nimmo?
nims: kuch nahi. kunal keh raha tha ki kal woh busy hai. isliye mujhe aur wait karna padega. khair chodo, koi baat nahi.
they go home and the rest of the evening goes smoothly. the next morning, nimmo is heading towards jaanvi, who is waiting with the scooter. just when nimmo sat, KB came runing..........
kb: nimmo..........nimmo...........jaanvi............. rukho. ek minute rukho.
jaan: kya baat hai kantamaasi?
kb: tum donon ko anand bula raha hai
nims: lekhin baat kya hai.
kb: mujhe patha nahi. bas woh tum donon ko bula raha hai.
jaan: teek hai kantamaasi. chalo nimmo.
they go inside and the whole family was gathered there.
nims: kya baat hai papa?apne hume kyun bulaya?
anand: ek zaroori baat kehna hai beta
nims: haan papa, toh baat kya hai?
anand: aaj hum sab ek party mein jaa rahe hain.
nims: party main?
swati: wow, kitne dhin ho gayi ek party mein jaakar.
naina: haan, woh bhi humaare poore family ke saat. kitna mazaa aayega
nims: lekhin party hai kahaan?
anand: sehgals ki party hai.
naina: oh my god, unka toh bahut bada party hota hai
nims: lekhin hume kaun invite kiya hai?
anand: dadaji ne
nims: dadaji? woh kaun?
anand: woh mere boss the. jab mein kaam karta tha, woh mere bahut achche dosth ban gaye. toh mein unhe pyaar se dadaji bulatha hoon. aur unhe bhi wahi pasand hai.
nims: oh.......toh unhone aapko kyun invite kiya?
anand: meine bhi yahi kahaa tha. lekhin woh maan ne waale nahi the. isliye hum sab shaam ko che baje jaa rahe hain. sab thayyar rehna.
nims: lekhin papa, mein aur jaanvi toh che baje hi office se nikalenge. toh phir hum kaise..........
anand: tum donon, ghar aakar, phir thayyar hokar party mein saat saat aa jaana.
nims: ok papa. toh mein chalthi hoon. aao jaanvi.
they leave for their office. in the evening jaanvi takes nimmo to a beauty parlour.
nims: jaanvi, hum yahaan kyun aaye hain?
jaan: mein tumaari make over karne waali hoon
nims: what????? nahi bilkul nahi. aur tumhe toh patha hai ki mujhe yeh sab make up ya make over mujhe pasand nahi hai. toh phir tumne mujhe............................
jaan: relax nimmo!! dekho! hum sehgals ki party mein jaa rahen hain . kya tum wahaan aisi jaogi?
nims: haan. wiase mujhe natural rehna hi pasand hai. isliye chalo.....
jaan: nahi. aaj tumaara make hokar hi rahega. chalo mere saat. chalo..........
jaanvi forcefully takes nimmo inside and there starts the make over.
i cant put her appearance in words. so remember the day when kunal sees her after the photoshoot, before going to the tender office(7th september), now she looks exactly like that. but wait. we dont see her face now. lets now jump to the party.
kunal is walking around talking to all the guests. and suddenly he sees a girl entering at the door. he looks at her from the side, not from the the front. she was wearing a blue saree, open hair, matching ornaments. and then "oh no", the pallu of the girl's saree got stuck near the door. another girl who was coming with this girl did not notice this and she walks off. kunal goes near her, does not see her face. and straight away bends down to release the saree.
kunu: let me help you ma'am....
girl: its ok, i can manage.
kunal successfully releases the saree and turns around to see*****************************thud************************ ************* NATASHA...............................
I WAS ONLY JOKING, IT WAS NIMMO............................not natasha.
IT WAS NIMMO< NIMMO<NIMMO
at first he doesnt recognise her.
nims: tum??? tum yahaan???
kunu: lagta hai meine tumhe kahin dekha hai, lekhin kahaan???...........................
and then there is a circle of flashbacks--shop, road.....
kunu: tum??? tum yahaan kya kar rahi ho?
nims: pehle meri sawaal ki jawab do. tum yahaan kaise?
kunal was just staring at her beauty.

                                                          to be continued.......................

will they fall in love now? hope u enjoyed it. post in ur comments.
i would like to say something. i saw that my fan fic has been viewed by 411  members, but only  25  replies, including mine. i am happy that many are reding it, but i will feel happier if u comment what u think about it. and u can also suggest ideas, to improve it, as i am only a beginner in writing fan fics, that too in hindi.
LUV NANDINI


Edited by nandini90 - 01 February 2007 at 3:36am

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awesome pat
cont soon

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great part Clap

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interesting fan fic.. would like to see where and how it goes... keep on continuing...

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Can't wait for the next part Clap Clap Clap

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I was scared to see natassha's name first. Good going. Clap Clap

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please continue

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