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Hello everyone. So sad that KHNK has ended. I miss both Nimmo and Kunal. But atleast it was a happy ending. But i am not going to give up. Here, i am going to start my new fan fic "PYAAAR". Hope u guys enjoy it. It is a romantic story, the theme proposed by my friend at school-Soja. Well first let me write a brief description about the characters in the story.

MATHURIA FAMILY

They are a normal middle class family.

Anand Mathuria

He is the head of the family. He loves his daughters and son very much especially his eldest daughter Namrata. He is retired now. But his family is very happy.

Neeta Mathuria

She is Anand's wife. She is the eldest one of her family. She is strict to her daughters when it comes to doing the household chres as she thinks that a girl should always know how to keep her house tidy and how to cook.

Vallab Mathuriadoing

He is Anand's younger brother. He lives with anand. He is working. He loves his brother's family very much. And cares for them a lot. He is always content with what god has given him.

Ketki Mathuria.

She is Vallab's wife. She is very kind and does all the household chores without any complaint. But for her, her husband and children are first in everything and rest are next, even anand's family. But in the past years there has never been any "jagda" in this house.

Sundar Mehta

He is Neeta's brother. He is very rich and has a textile mill, which is going on full profit. He is not married bcos of personal reasons. No one knows why he did not marry anyone. His favourite niece is Namrata. He gives her evreything special.

NAMRATA MATHURIA( NIMMO)

SHE IS THE HEROINE OF OUR STORY.NIMMO IS ANAND'S FIRST DAUGHTER WHO IS EVERYONE'S FAVOURITE. SHE DOES THINGS WHICH FEELS IS RIGHT TO HER. SHE LOVES HER FATHER A LOT. WHEN IT COMES TO DOING ANY WORK SHE DOES IT WITH FULL ATTENTION AND AT TIME. SHE DOESNT LIKE BEING LATE BUT SHE NEVER REACHES HER DESTINATION AT TIME. THIS STORY IS GOING TO REVOLVE AROUND HER LOVE STORY, AN INTERESTING ONE. CURRENTLY SHE HAS FINISHED HER PG.

Naina Mathuria

She is Anand's second daughter. She is working as a model and has won many beauty peagent competitions. She is currenly working as a model in one of the Sehgal group of industries. She is very sincere in her work. She is very matured as whenever a problem is there in their house or with any of her family members she consoles them in such a way that they get some kind of confidence. She is very close to her brother Vishal.

Swati Mathuria

She is Anand's third daughter. She is working as a journalist in NC Channel. She struggles a lot for women's rights. And as a result she gets trapped in some kind of problem. But she is clever enough that she handles the situation very well.She is very close to her mother.

Vishal Mathuria

He is Anand's only son and the youngest one in the family. He is doing his MBA final year. He is very good at studies. He is very close to his sister Naina. But he loves all his three sisters very much. Even though he is ver close to Naina, he shares a special relation with his eldest sister NIMMO.

Candy Mathuria

He is Vallab's son. He is bit selfish in some things. To cure this Anand always did the same things for him and Vishal from childhood, so that there will be no clash between them. He likes his cousin Swati very much for some reason. He is doing his Engineering. He is good at studies but not as good as Vishal.

OTHERS:KB-same as our own KHNK KB.

o.SEHGAL FAMILY

They are a very rich family. They manage the whole of Sehgal group of industries. They are one of the best ten business company's in India. Now for a brief look into their family.

Amardeep Sehgal

He is the oldest one in the sehgal family. Mostly people call him Dadaji. His father was very poor once but worked very hard to bring up this big empire. Dadaji is also hard working. He loves his family very much and never goes against anyone's wish, whatever it is. He is very kind and a jolly person.

Preet Sehgal

She is Amardeep's wife(Dadiji). She cares for her family very much, and most of her characters are same as that of dadaji. If she doesnt like someone she doesnt showt her dislikeness in front of them but keeps it in her heart and tries to avoid that person. Her favourite grandson is Kunal. He is very special to her.

Aman Sehgal

He is Amardeep's first son. He is very good businessman. It is bcos of him that three of the industries are running at great success. He is polite and a kind person who loves his family very much.

Shradha Sehgal

She is Aman's wife. She is a very soft spoken person. She is very much religious. She is very clever but doesnt like to xpress it to anyone except her husband.

Raj Sehgal

He is Amardeep's second son. He is also very good at business and 2 of their industries are under his control.

Varsha Sehgal

She is Raj's wife. She is very talkative by nature and everyone loves her for that reason. She is very much optimistic. She loves her husband very much.

Samar Sehgal

He is Aman's first son. He is helping his dad in business. He is very clever and knows a lot of business tricks which are sometimes very dangerous.

Payal Sehgal

She is samar's wife. She is very intelligent but doesnt use it at the right time. She is always late in understanding things.

KUNAL SEHGAL

HE IS THE HERO OF OUR STORY. HE IS GOOD LOOKING AND CUTE. HE LOVES GOING TO DISCO AND DATING WITH GIRLS. HE IS AN EXPERT IN BUSINESS. APART FROM OTHER INDUSTRIES AMAN & RAJ ARE LOOKING, HE HAS 4 INDUSTRIES UNDER HIS CONTROL. HE IS VERY MUCH CONFUSED ABOUT EVERYTHING. AND SOON HE IS GOING TO FALL IN LOVE WITH NIMMO.

Rishab Sehgal

He is Raj's son. He is doing his final year in MBA.Vishal and Rishab are very close friends as they are in the same college. He is also very close to Kunal.

Rithi Sehgal

She is Raj's daughter. In fact she is the only girl child born in the family. So she is everyone's sweet little angel. Everyone loves her. She is doing her second year in Medicine.

Sanjay Sehgal

He is the youngest one in Sehgal family. He is Samar's son. Very naughty and plays pranks on everyone. But everyone enjoys his little pranks. Samar is the only one who scolds him.

OTHERS: KK-same as our KHNK KK.

Chapter one

Nimmo is getting ready for her first day at office. She comes out of her room wearing a pink salwar. Her physical appearance is the same one when KHNK started like the pony tail, a ring on her nose and is wearing salwar.

nims: mama,mein ready hoon.

neeta: aa rahi hoon.

anand: are nimmo, itni jaldi thayyar ho gayi

nims: jaldi isliye, kyunki aapko patha hai na ki agar mein waqt par nikloongi tab mein dher pahunch jaati hoon. isliye! abh mein chaloon?

neeta: ek minute nimmo, bhagwaan se praarthana karke toh jao.

nims :mama please. aaj mera ek bahut bada dhin hai. isliye please mujhe baghwaan se praarthana karvaakar aaj ke dhin ko kharab math banao.

neeta: aise math kaho nimmo. woh hamesha humaara balaayi hi chahega. lo, prasad.

nims: mujhe nahi chahiye. waise bahut dher ho chuki hai,mein chalthi hoon.

She heads to the door, when Sundar comes inside.

nims: are, mamaji aap? aap pune se kab aaye?

sundar :bas do dhin pehle. aur aaj mein tumaare liye ek gift laaya hoon. neeta ne kahaa ki aaj office mein tumaara pehla dhin hai. yeh lo

nims :thank u so much mamaji. kholkar dekhoon?

sundar: haan haan, zaroor

She finds a cell phone, a very costly one.

nims :wow, mamaji. yeh toh bahut achchca hai. lekhin yeh bahut mehengi hai na?

sundar :tum uski phikr math karo.agar mein apni beti ke liye nahi karoonga, toh aur kisko karoonga? woh sab chodo, tumhe office ke liye dher ho rahi hai.

nims: are, mein toh bhool hi gayi. bye mamaji, bye mama, bye papa.

She catches an auto and gors to her office. but halfway, the auto stopped.

nims: bhaisaab, kya hua?

driver: patha nahi madam. dekhtha hoon.

nims: its ok, mein doosri auto pakadkar chali jaoongi. waise bhi dher hoon.

She gets out of the auto and on the opp side of the road she sees Lord Ganesha's temple.

nims: abh samaj mein aaya ki yeh auto teek yahaan kyun rukh gayi. yeh sab tumaara hi khel hoga. lekhin nahi. tum joh chahthe ho, woh nahi hoga. mein tumaare praarthana nahi karoongi.and that final. bye.

She catches another auto and goes to her office.Near the gate its written on a big board:

KS GROUP of INDUSTRIES

She looks at the board, takes a deep breathe and goes inside.

The title track plays(instrumental).ooh la la laa, oooh lala la lala.

So guys, please post in ur comments, if i should continue or not.

LUV NANDINI



Edited by nandini90 - 26 February 2007 at 11:35pm

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Posted: 21 January 2007 at 8:58am | IP Logged
u should definetly cont nice ff yaar it rocks

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yeah...cool wrk...continue pls. Smile

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you must cont. writingas ur story , u & ur friend is brilliant & rocks. u know that i was woundering what to do from 22nd of Jan as i got addicted to see KHNK at 10'o clock but now i think that i have got a very good alternative way with which i can keep myself entertained & happy . THANKS A LOT

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thnx it s awesome...

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Its awaesome. Continue soon Big smile

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nice ff Clap Clap Clap

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great ff

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