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Suraj hua madham 4 Kunal-nimmo (Page 8)

jasminerahul IF-Sizzlerz

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Part14   Naina:palash,leave my hand
                          P:no,u can go only after I finsh talking 2 u
                          N:whats dere new 2 tel?
                          P:nothing new.the same old thing dat I luv u.but as long
                          as u don't listen 2 me,I'l repeat the same thing.i luv u

                          N:I'm repeating my answer.i hate u
                          P:but why?I'l try 2 change myself.i'l do whatever u tel
                          N:no use.i cant never luv a loser like u
                          N goes.P's eyes get filled up with tears.

                          Na 2 Nimmo:palash has reached mumbai
                          N was surprised:really?why?
                          Na:the same aim.2 marry me.dat'l never happen
                          N:but he's a nice boy.he was so sweet wen he came 2 c
                          our dad 2 ask 4 u.but u insulted him
                          Na:r u on his side?
                          N:no.but he' nice
                          Na shouts:no
                          N:why r u becoming angry 4 such a silly thing?
                          Na:its not a silly thing 4 me
                          Na goes.N is dull.

                          N is on her bed.Na cums.
                          N:can u plz bring my medicine
                          N:why r u treating me like a servant?I did'nt cum here 2
                          b ur servant.i came here 2 stay here & study
                          N is upset:why r u talking like this?I did'nt mean
                          dat.if u feel so,den I wont desturb u anymore
                          N gets up & goes 2 take medicines.Na feels quilty:sorry
                          di.i'l bring medicines
                          N smiles & thinks:naina has changed a I cant
                          understand her

                          While Na was walking on the road,palash kidnaps
                          her.he sprays sumthing on her nose.she fals asleep.
                          Na is sleeping on the bed.she opens her eyes.was shocked
                          2 c P near her on the bed.

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great part
jasminerahul IF-Sizzlerz

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Part 15 Naina screams at palash:why did u do dis 2 me?
                          Nai slaps him manytimes.P is upset.

                          All r tensed not seeing Na back.Na cums.nimmo:where were
                          Na cries & hugs N:di,I'm spoilt
                          Na:palash raped me
                          N & kunal r shocked.

                          Na is shattered completely.she's continuously shedding
                          tears.N is comforting her.Na falls asleep.

                          N cries on K's chest:den also how did it happen 2 my
                          lovly sister.wenever she told abt palash's character I
                          did'nt believe her.but I was wrong.i cud'nt save my
                          K's eyes r ful of tears.K is going crazy.

                          K goes 2 Na's room.Na is weeping:I got punished jeeju
                          K:why don't u marry palash?
                          Na:after happening this much also u want me 2 marry
                          him?how cud u think so?bcuz u hate me?
                          K:no.u remember once I came late.dat day I went 2 c
                          him.its bcuz I told him he came 2 mumbai
                          Na is shocked:what?
                          K:I came 2 no abt palash who luvs u very much.wen i
                          enquired abt him I realized dat he's a nice man.he suits
                 I went 2 him.i introduced myself 2 him.his rooms
                          were decorated with ur photos.i saw his luv directly.i
                          asked him why he's not marrying u if he luvs u like
                          crazy.he was very upset 2 tel dat u avoids him.i told
                          him 2 marry u.he said,he does'nt hav hope as u hate
                          him.i told him 2 express his luv 2 u.but he realized dat
                          dere is no use of it as however he expresses his luv u
                          neglect I yold him even 2 force u,2 compel u 2
                          marry him.but I never thot dat he'l do dis 2 u 2 gain
                          u.i'm sorry tanu
                          Na cries:don't b sorry

                          Anand-neeta cum & hug Na with tears after cuming 2
                          no what happened 2 her
                          Nee:2morrow we r taking her back
                          Na cums near N:di,shal I sleep with u as it's the
                          last chance
                          N weeps:why r u talking like dis?

                          Na-N in the bedroom. Na:u r very lucky 2 get a gud husband
                          like jeeju.he's the best husband
                          N:dat I no b4 itself no
                          Na:no,u donno I'm going 2 reveal how nice

                          WIL NAINA CONFES?HOW'L NIMMO REACT?

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plz read
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jasminerahul IF-Sizzlerz

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Part 16 Naina tells everything.Nimmo is shocked.N cant
                          believe:no u r lying.i don't belive sister cant
                          do dis
                          Na weeps:no di.its true.i'm a I repent.plz di
                          don't hate me.since childhud u used 2 4giv me.plz 4giv
                          dis time too.i promise dat I wont hurt u again
                          N cries & hugs her:how can I hate u my sister?

                          Na goes near kunal:I'm going jeeju.b4 going I want 2
                          apologize with full heart.sorry 4 the trubles I gave u
                          K:no need of dat.u r my little sister.a brother 4givs
                          his sister without any apology
                          Na:thx a lot.i confessed everything 2 di & apologized
                          K is shocked:wht was the need 2 tel her?she mayb upset
                          Na cries & goes out.N sees it & goes near K.K cant face
                          N:I no u r angry with tanu.but plz don't b angry with
                          her.plz 4giv her.she's smal.did a smal mistake.she wont
                          repeat it
                          K hugs N:u r a gr8 wife & a cud u take it
                          N's eyes r ful of tears.

                          N,K,Na,parents go near the car 2 go.They were shocked 2 c
                          Anand beats him heavily:how did u get the courage 2
                          appear b4 me?
                          Palash goes near kunal.K slaps him:I never thot u'l do dis.its
                          my fault dat I called u here
                          P:plz listen 2 me.i want 2 marry naina
                          P goes near N:bhabhi
                          N:how dare u cal me bhabhi?a girl's worst fate is 2 get
                          raped.u did dat 2 naina & u've cum here with no
                          hesitation 2 propose.a girl cant marry her rapist
                          Pbut I did'nt rape naina
                          Al r shocked. P:I made her sleep.wen she woke up she
                          thot she thot she has been spoilt by me.i did'nt try 2
                          clear her misunderstanding.bcoz I thot he'l marry me
                          thinking dat she's spoilt by me.usually girls try 2 do
                          dat.but tanu is different.she is a woman of substance &
                          selfprestige.i admire dat.after my luv 4 her increased
                          Na:no u r lying
                          P:u no how much I lov u think a lover can do
                          dat?if u don't believe me,u can do medical
                          mistake was dat I tried the wrong method 2 get my true
                          luv.bcoz Im dat crazy of u dat I cant liv without u
                          Na weeps. K goes near Na:luk at palash's eyes & tel
                          whether u need medical test 2 prove his innocence?
                          Na cries. K:I dunno whether I'm wrong.but I think naina
                          shud go with palash,not with her parents.
                          Na is shocked & luks at K.
                          K:we shud conduct naina's & palash's's wedding
                          immediately.i'm sure dat she'b hapy with him.1 shud
                          marry 1 who luvs him or her.naina,do u think I'm wrong?
                          Na weeps:never jeeju
                          Na luks at P:I'm sorry 4 not seeing ur luv
                          P:don't say sory.i respect 1 expects dis kind of
                          a talk from the person whom he respects
                          Na weeps:why do u luv me dis much after getting so much
                          of insult from me without doing anyting wrong?
                          P:dat's luv.i luv u
                          Na smiles with tears.Every1 smiles


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gr8 part
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wat??? its over??? Cry tell me u r joking it is very very very nice plsssssssssssssssssssssss continue don't end it plsss Cry Cry Cry

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