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Posted: 15 January 2007 at 4:59pm | IP Logged

Since a couple of you were interested in my short story here it is its just the introduction. Haven't decided a name for it ideas would be great.

The story starts with the 3 girls Bani, Pia and Rano getting ready to go to collage. That day seemed soo much sad and Boring to Bani. The day gets worser when they find out about there father being in Hospital due to a health problem he had been hiding since the girls Mother died. And there father dies there after telling them about Mr. Jai and Mumbai. So the girls start heading twords Mumbai. But one thing that they find out after returning from hospital was that there father was in Debt so there house wasn't there anymore either. So they asks the lawyer about the owner of there house now. The lawyer tells her its owned by a  person name Mr. Walia. From there Bani takes a step forward to get there house back from Mr. Walia.

ab kya karagi bani..?

(Now a little bit about the girls Bani, Pia  and Rano.)

Our Bani is sweet, takes care of others and makes sure no one gets hurt espically whom she loves.

Now Pia she is little to stylish she dreams for a lot.

And Rano the youngest and the sweetest who understands bani di very well.

And the Story takes a great turn when the Girls end up at Mumbai..

Thats it for the Intro. Comments would be great.

All the parts:(just click on the link)

Part 1:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=519302&T PN=2

Part 2:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=519302&T PN=3

Part 3:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=519302&T PN=4

Part 4:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=519302&T PN=5

Part 5:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=519302&T PN=7

Part 6:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=519302&T PN=7

Part 7:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=519302&T PN=9

Part 8:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=519302&T PN=9

Part 9:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=519302&T PN=11

Part 10:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=519302&T PN=12

Part 11:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=519302&T PN=13

Part 12:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=519302&T PN=14

Part 13:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=519302&T PN=15

Part 14:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=519302&T PN=16

Part 15:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=519302&T PN=17

Part 16:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=519302&T PN=18

Part 17:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=519302&T PN=21

Part 18:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=519302&T PN=22

Part 19:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=519302&T PN=23

Part 20:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=519302&T PN=24

Part 21:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=519302&T PN=25

Part 22:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=519302&T PN=27

Part 23:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=519302&T PN=27

Part 24:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=519302&T PN=28

Part 25:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=519302&T PN=29

Part 26:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=519302&T PN=31

Part 27(end)

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=519302&T PN=32



Edited by aman123 - 26 February 2007 at 4:55pm

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Posted: 15 January 2007 at 5:04pm | IP Logged
mine! Wink

I love it Aman!!!

It sounds really cute, and kinda different from the actual story!!!

Please start it soon....

Luv ya,

MeeraEmbarrassed


Edited by indiandoll89 - 15 January 2007 at 5:05pm
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Posted: 15 January 2007 at 5:18pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by indiandoll89

mine! Wink

I love it Aman!!!

It sounds really cute, and kinda different from the actual story!!!

Please start it soon....

Luv ya,

MeeraEmbarrassed

Thanks

Also If you have any suggestions let me know by PM or post it here.

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Posted: 15 January 2007 at 5:24pm | IP Logged
Sounds good to me! Smile

It's actually a very good starting block for a story. This should turn out to be a good one! Thumbs Up

It has the potential to be a longer story as well if you want it to be.

God bless.
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Posted: 15 January 2007 at 6:16pm | IP Logged
Not alot of you are interested. Cry
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Posted: 15 January 2007 at 6:28pm | IP Logged
already lovin' it. pls post the first part soooooon! waiting.... Smile
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Posted: 16 January 2007 at 4:25pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by aNsHu_tEjPaL

already lovin' it. pls post the first part soooooon! waiting.... Smile

Thanks will try starting it soon.

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Posted: 16 January 2007 at 5:22pm | IP Logged
great intro, can't wait for more.


-Rimpy

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