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Posted: 15 January 2007 at 9:49am | IP Logged
Oh My Goodness.... this is absolutely awesome...
Clap
keep it up devyani... u do hav the talent....
do write long parts coz its too small for me Confused Confused Confused

anyways... I loved all the dialogs and my fav was Yudi's mom's.... so typical LOL

and Naina.... kya kahe.... maine us part ko abhi tak 3 baar padh liya hai.... and hav been imagining it since then....'
i really wish this happens in the show too Embarrassed

btw... one question... who is Neelu going to get married to???

do write soon
waiting eagerly for it Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed

luv
kanak

Edited by tere_bin - 15 January 2007 at 9:50am
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Posted: 15 January 2007 at 10:54am | IP Logged

Originally posted by tere_bin

Oh My Goodness.... this is absolutely awesome...
Clap
keep it up devyani... u do hav the talent....
do write long parts coz its too small for me Confused Confused Confused

anyways... I loved all the dialogs and my fav was Yudi's mom's.... so typical LOL

and Naina.... kya kahe.... maine us part ko abhi tak 3 baar padh liya hai.... and hav been imagining it since then....'
i really wish this happens in the show too Embarrassed

btw... one question... who is Neelu going to get married to???

do write soon
waiting eagerly for it Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed

luv
kanak

thaaaaaaaaankssssss kanak!!!!!Embarrassed

u know what even i love naina's part....EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

hey can you make a siggy for my fanfic??EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

i love all ur siggies...Smile

and about neelu....that's a secret!EmbarrassedTongue

thanks a ton a million stars for liking my FF!!Smile

i will post next part soonSmile i have my MODAT tomorrow...yeh IMS wale maar dalenge!Angry

take care,

devyani.

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Posted: 15 January 2007 at 8:35pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by drymaple

Originally posted by tere_bin

Oh My Goodness.... this is absolutely awesome...
Clap
keep it up devyani... u do hav the talent....
do write long parts coz its too small for me Confused Confused Confused

anyways... I loved all the dialogs and my fav was Yudi's mom's.... so typical LOL

and Naina.... kya kahe.... maine us part ko abhi tak 3 baar padh liya hai.... and hav been imagining it since then....'
i really wish this happens in the show too Embarrassed

btw... one question... who is Neelu going to get married to???

do write soon
waiting eagerly for it Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed

luv
kanak

thaaaaaaaaankssssss kanak!!!!!Embarrassed

u know what even i love naina's part....EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

hey can you make a siggy for my fanfic??EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

i love all ur siggies...Smile

and about neelu....that's a secret!EmbarrassedTongue

thanks a ton a million stars for liking my FF!!Smile

i will post next part soonSmile i have my MODAT tomorrow...yeh IMS wale maar dalenge!Angry

take care,

devyani.


umm.... i dont know much about the story..... is it a "only RN story" ? or is it like all the 6 cadets are there too?
seems like everything.....
plz clarify......
but if u just want Naina in the siggy I can make RN in love.....
FC ke liye banate banate kaafi practise ho gaya hai WinkWinkWink

anyways.... il surely make it..... dont worry be happyWinkWink

also.....plz could me PM me any specifications u want in the siggy... it wud be easier for me.....

btw... all the best for ur MODAT (dont know what it is... but seems like IMS hai to obviously CAT preps ka hi kuch hoga....LOLLOL)
all the best for that tooEmbarrassed

luv
kanak
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Posted: 16 January 2007 at 1:26am | IP Logged

PART  2!

Ritu was looking aimlessly at the ceiling…sitting on her big chair, not being able to concentrate on her case studies. Just then her mobile rang…ritu picked it up and smiled.
"Hello jaan"
"Hi Sameer"
"Bas hi?…its been days I have met you and you greet me with just a hi?"
"What shall I say then?"
"Never mind…I was expecting something romantic…. hey tell me a thing."
"What?"
"Are all psychiatrists like you…beautiful and unromantic?"
"Shut up sameer…I am just too tired of these case studies…they end up nowhere"
"That's why I offered you to come with me…Australia is a very beautiful place…you could have felt nice here, and at least I could have cheered you up, I am getting worried about you honey, you sound too tired, shall I come back?"
"Oh no sameer…I am perfectly alright…and you will be happy to know that I am planning to go to shimla to meet Shalini"
"Wow! That's great. You should get out of that den of yours now and then…when are you leaving?"
"Tomorrow…I will call you up"
"Yeah you better do…"
"Hmmm"
"Ritu?"
"Yeah?"
"I love you"
"Yeah, I know"
There was an unusual silence that was growing more before sameer stopped it…
"Bye my dearest wife, I will miss you"
"Me too, bye"
Ritu felt guilty…she knew sameer loved her more than anyone in this world but she couldn't give her 100% in the relationship…she was still haunted by her past…somewhere…HE was still there in her mind…
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Naina was sweating profusely."Why can't I forget that incident?" it seemed like it happened yesterday. Just then her bedside phone rang loudly tearing away her thoughts apart. She ran towards it to pick it up, wiping her sweat and taking a deep breath. "Hello?"
"Ms Ahluwalia?"
She instantly recognized that voice…it was her boss.
"Yes ma'am"
"I think your presentation is ready for the meeting?"
"Yes ma'am…I just have to adjust the profit graphs"
"Good. The company's car will drop you at the airport, tomorrow. And don't forget to enjoy yourself. Shimla is a beautiful place"
"I will ma'am, thank you."
Naina admired her Boss, she was helpful, friendly, strict at the same time, she remembered someone familiar to her…and couldn't stop hating him.
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Pooja was in Delhi having the time of her life.
"oye pooja…kahan thi itne din! Mausiji ne bataya ki tujhe gwalior se aaye hue dus din ho chuke hain…aur tu ab aa rahi hai!. Ab yaad aa rahi hai teri behan ki!"
"Sorry prabho, woh mera network jam ho gaya tha…aur yeh sade hue army wale mujhe connection lagane hi nahi de rahe the. Aur waise bhi main aa gayi hu na…ab kya tension hai?"
"Gwalior posting kaisi rahi?"
"Thik thak thi…bahaut akeli pad gayi thi main…subah shaam training …saans lene ko bhi time nahi tha…bas incoming hi tha…outgoing ke liye saare calls unreachable hi reh gaye"
"chal chod in baaton ko, tere liye ek surprise hai"
"kya?!!"
"humare saare cousins ne yeh decide kiya hai ki hum ghoomne jaaenge!"
"ghoomne? Kahan?"
"SHIMLA! "
"Shimla?! Really!! Wow now this is a treat!...I am dying to have some time to myself"
"And you will…chal parson nikalna hai humein..ab ghar jaa aur packing karle"

Pooja sighed. She wanted to go somewhere desperately. But somewhere in her heart she felt odd about this trip as if it was going to be something she never wanted to see. Maybe she was too used to staying alone, she discarded that thought and looked forward to the trip.
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(A day later)
Ali and alekh….were heading towards shimla army headquarters. They had been warned about a possible curfew going to take place in the city.
"alekh bhai, do you know anything about this curfew?"
"why do you want to know, and what is there to know?…same old thing…clash of two communities, clash of limitless demands….aur kuch nahi…tu khali pili mera bheja mat kha usool..aur waise bhi…we are going to be under some new officer..we just have to follow orders" and started whistling enjoying the landscapes on their way.
"aap kabhi kuch bhi seriously lete hain kya?"
"leta hai na……daaru" and smiled mischievously .
"aap ka kuch nahi hone wala"  replied ali defeated from the useless argument and went on driving.
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Shimla was going to see something which was equal to a storm…. storm of emotions, feelings and desires.
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Edited by drymaple - 16 January 2007 at 1:33am

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Posted: 16 January 2007 at 1:35am | IP Logged
howz it!!! Embarrassed
i know its long again...and too many dialogues Confused
but please comment! Embarrassed Embarrassed

kanak!! Embarrassed Embarrassed
you can make the siggy later when the fanfic gets to a strong point! Embarrassed Embarrassed you know even i was thinking about it Confused
and thanz for the best of luck...modat is an exam conducted by IMS for monthly assessment. Maths was bad! Angry
but i will pass LOL
thanks again! Embarrassed DEvyani! Embarrassed
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Posted: 16 January 2007 at 4:17am | IP Logged
dat was an awesome part devu dear! Clap i simply luvvvvvd da scene b/w alekh and ali Clap
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Posted: 16 January 2007 at 4:44am | IP Logged
Guuud goin Devyani.Bt Naina is not in d army....y???????
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Posted: 16 January 2007 at 11:39am | IP Logged
Clap
no words to say how much I liked this part....
I feel that the new officer is Capt Rajveer... or shayad Major Rajveer (agar unki promotion hp gayi ho to LOL LOL )

waiting eagerly for the next part devu....
btw..... I know that I shud wait till the story matures a little ... phir collages ki baadh aa jayegi Wink

luv
kanak

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