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Kripa looked sideways, her eyes big with superise and shock, she couldnt beleive it she stood up, was this a dream, did Pritvhi just let kripa marry her biggest enemy, did she just ge married to Angad,

Pritvhi and Angad stopped hugging, Pritvhi turned around to face poor Kripa, her eyes were bloodshot red, and she ws trying hard not to cry, suddenly he puchs Angad and runs upto Kripa, and hugges her,

Pritvhi:Nahi...Nahi Angad u bursted, how could u do this, Kripa aur mere saath dohka, tum kya chahti hoon, mujhe mar kar, I hate u Kripa Imean Angad,

Angad shakes his head and laughs, Pritvhi lets go and laughs, they are both laughing away,

Angad:I think she'll stop screaming now,

He walked upto her and untied the mouth cloth, Kripa let go and stood up off the bed, and walked backwards to a wall, everything seemed to be moving, everything seemed like a dream, she suddenly felt the cold wall and lied her head back then looked stright, to face them both, swallowing her sliva she manged to scream out in lil tiny squeaky voice,

Kripa:Yeh sab.................

Pritvhi and ngad gave a lil laugh, then Pritvhis expression seemd to change he looked disapointed,

Pritvhi:I hate you Kripa, I hate you, maine kya kuch nahe kiya tumhare liye, sab kuch kiya, yaha tak uapne sare passa, ghar, aur pyarse chotise rishte bhi dow peh laga diya, aur tu ne, tumne toh sirf Angad ko chaha, kya main tumhare liye kuch ta nahi, sirf ek lousy stupid dost, aur dost kuch nahi is duiya meh, tumhare liye sirf Angad, u always loved Angad, aur ajj, aur ajj toh main uapne zindighi ka sabse bare gallthi karne jahrata, tumse shaadi karkat, par abb, nahi, abb Pritvhi tumhara asliyat dehck choka hai, tum ek aurat nahi hoon, par public propety hoon, joh abb Angad ki naam ki hai, Kripa ur life is goin to to be hell, Angad will ruin your life and no one will stop him, no one, no one at all,

The door opens and Naina, Damini, Mishti and Kartic enter, they all start laughing.................................................... .

WRITING NXT PART NOW........................



Edited by Amazin nd hot! - 10 August 2005 at 8:52am

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whoa.....that is one hell of a fan fic!!! somehow i can't imagine prithvi being evil or mean.....

love it!!!

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EEK! Poor Kripa!! :(

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wowww ouma what a different story!!!

ClapClap it'a amazing...poor kripa...

continuee soon..

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awwwwwwwwwwwww poor kripa ! everyone's 2 faced ! plz continue soon ouma! Cry Cry

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waah ouma dear tusi great hooo by the way aisi idea kaha se mili tumko yaar the story is awesome , midblowing Clap
abh jaldi se dusra part bhi post kar

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PLEASE CONTINUE

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The door opens and Naina, Damini, Mishti and Kartic enter, they all start laughing.................................................... .

Kripa looks at them all with her eyes even bigger and redder then they were, they all look at he face and the started laughing even louder,

Angad:Sab tummhare against hai, sab.............., tumhare liye koi nahi bacha Kripa koi nahi, jis logo ko tum uapne kehte thi, woh bhi paraya hogaye hai,

Kripa:Plz maine kya kiya hai, maine kissi ko, kabhi bhi, hurt nahi kiya, on purpose, sirf Angod ko, kyunki, woh bewaafa tha, bewaaafa,

Mishti:Oh Shut-up Kripa, uapne baqwaas bhande karoe, sab tum hare asliyee chehra, dehck coke, abb tum kuch nahi kar sako ghi,

Kripa:yeh sab toh eeeeeeeeeee...........kkk.............

Pritvhi:Ek jhoot nahi hai,

Naina:Yaad hai na, woh marridge citeficate, uss peh tumne lehka, ki tum ANGAD KHANNER, se shaadhi karoe ghi,(guys that bit isn't in the story,

Kartic:Abb toh tummhare pass pehisa hai, toh khush ho jawo,

Angad:Yes Kripa smile, because it will be your last smile, meh aur yeh sab log tum hare zindighi dabber karlenghe, u will be nothing, u r nothing, tum hara life hell bhangaya hai,

Pritvhi looks at everyone and jestures them to go....

Pritvhi:Mujhe lagta hai ki, hum yeh dohno ko akile chordehni hai,

Everyone agrees,

Kripa:lz, plz mujhe akile matt chohro, plz, plz.................. She screams

No use Angad ties the mouth cloth around her face again, and picks her up, everyone leaves, Angad drops her on the bed, and locks the door, and slowly walks upto her, takeing his kurta thing off, Kripa jumps upto run, but Angad grabs her, and pushes her onto the bed, Kripa still struggling to get out of his grasp, but had allready lowered his face to................................................U NO WHAT......

That it for today!

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