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PYAR HUMKO HONE LAGA(updt after long time (Page 4)

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Posted: 07 January 2007 at 6:39pm | IP Logged
wow woo

i love all the parts
i hate how kt crys it makes me laugh

and i bet her face was hallariouse when she was stuck in that room

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Posted: 13 January 2007 at 2:46pm | IP Logged
haha...i kno....she crys funny LOL LOL
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Manthan was eating and then when Archita said that he was all of a suddden surprised and he ram into the kitchen. Kt wasnt fainted yet.
Kt(before faintin): Manthan..manthan..mujhe..(den she fainted)
Manthan saw her beautiful face glowing cuz of the fire and was going to her then all of a sudden the light fell before her so if manthan wanted to go to Kt he had to go over it and he couldnt do that because he would get burned..Manthan knew this but still he decided to go save KT..Kt was unconsious.
Manthan decided to run into the fire...HE ran and saw KT he picked her up and then ran back outside...He got a burned and then he had fainted.
Karan ran and called the doctor. The doctor came.
Tulsi: Doctor saab kya Manthan aur KT safe hain kya
Doctor: Hain baghwan ka shkar hain ke dono theek hain varna Manthan ne joh kiya woh koi nahi kar sakta aur issme bohot katra hai
Manthan was the first one to gain conscious when Bhoomi was in the room. But the first thing he asked got Bhoomi shocked...He asked "Bhoomi..Kt kahan hain..woh theek toh hain na"
Bhoomi was now shocked she asked him: Bhai tum theek toh ho na. Aur tum all of a sudden uss KT ki kyun fikar karne lage..tum neh uss aag mein kyun kooda
Manthan was speechless even he didnt know why he saved KT. he was confused.
Bhoomi was like: Manthan...mujhe please jawab do..tum ne kyun aapni jaan kathre mein dal kar usski jaan bachayi
Manthan had a blank face but his mind was filled. Bhoomi asks again "Jawab do Bhai..kyun?"
all Manthan said was: Pata nahi
Bhoomi den looking at his face asks: kya tum usse pyar kate ho. do you like her?
Manthan didnt know this so he said: Pata nahi
Bhoomi: Toh phir kyun tumne aapne jaan katreh mein kyun dali
All manthan cud say was: Pata Nahi
Bhoomi: Bhai tum mujhe bata sakte me
Manthan: Agar mujhe kuch bhi pata hota toh mein tumhe bata tah lekin mujhe kuch pata hi nahi ke aaj kal jo kata hoon kyun karta hoon..lekin whenever i see KT's face I cant stop staring..mein dekhte hi rehja ta hoon...
Bhoomi interuppts: Tum kyun dekh teh reh jateho
Mantan: Yeh bhi Pata Nahi...aur phir after every encounter with her mein koi gehri soch mein aajata hoon
Bhoomi: Tumhe joh bhi hota hain woh hota hoge lekin kyun hota hain
Manthan: Bhoomi maine kaha na...Pata Nahi
Bhoomi: Yeh kya Pata nahi pata nahi..tumara dimag karab ho gaya hain..mein jah rahi hoon
Manthan: Sorrie mujhe kuch pata hota mein bata tah lekin mujhe kuch pata nahi...kuch bhi pata nahi
Bhoomi leaves.. Manthan was very hungry so he goes to the kitchen. It was now nightime and everyone was sleeping. When Manthan was going to the kitchen he heard some noise. Manthan was thinking: Koi chor he runs arounds around trying to catch the chor but he does it quietly so the chor doesnt realize someone is chasing him. He hears a vase fall and break so he goes there. but when he went tthere the chow wasnt there. He saw that the window was open right by the vase so he think thats where the chor came he waits there for the chor to come was now half and hour and he was hungrier the ever and the chors not back..then he hears someone in the kitchen he goes into the kitchen and saw...........(to be continued)

Edited by desichick4eva - 08 April 2007 at 8:10pm
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Posted: 24 March 2007 at 6:35pm | IP Logged
it's pretty good actually ...

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Part 5

Meanwhile KT was also looking for the so-called-chor. sHE was following the noises which where coming then manthan and KT both heard something around the corner. They went quickly and collided into eachother and bumped heads. Manthan was sitting on the floor with his eyes watery cuz he bumped his head n nose soo hard it hurted. KT was just looking at him and smiling like he was insane or something.

Manthan: KT tum yahan kya kar rahi.

KT: mein yahan kuch khana khane arahi thi aur kuch aavaz sunay di kissi chor ki shayad lekin phir mein tumse takraye.

Manthan: Tum bhi uss chor koh hi dhoond rahi thi

KT: tum bhi matlab..koi chor tah toh hum dono dhoond rahe honge na

They both giggled.

Manthan: hain hum dono ek hi cheez dhoonde aye the aur ek hi cheez mila

KT: kya matalb?

Manthan: mein bhi kuch khana dhoond ne aya tha aur hum dono ko chor mila

KT: tumara matlab mein chor hoon..tumari baat samaj mein aayi ke tum chor dekhte ho lekin mein kaise chor hoon.

Manthan: mein to(he paused and looked at her) tumara matlab mein chor jaise dekhata hoon…tumari toh

And he started chasing her around the house. They were causing so much noise that Tulsi heard. She came down and saw Manthan n kt chasing each other like little kids around the house. She smiled like she knew something.

Tulsi: yeh tum log kya kar rahe ho chote bache jaise ek doosre ko chase kar rahe ho

Manthan: Yeh bachi hi toh hain.

KT squinted her eyes and left to her room.

Tulsi: Manthan mujhe kuch shak ho raha hain.

Manthan: kya shak ho raha hain dadi.

Tulsi: mein kuch bura nahi keh na jahti lekin tum bohot badal gaye ho.

Manthan: kaise?

Tulsi: jaise aab tumhe sab ki chinta hone lagi hain aur tum bado ko izaat se pesha rahe ho. Yeh aisa aajanak itna badha change kaise.

Manthan: Baa mujkhe hi nahi pata lekin dheere dheere mein badal rahe hoon. Bhoomi said it too. Lekin kyun nahi pata.

Tulsi: Theek hain..joh bhi hua aacha hua aab tum soh jayo

Manthan left and Tulsi knew that Manthan was in love…but with who? Was it with KT? How would Tulsi know who Manthan talks to?

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