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PYAR HUMKO HONE LAGA(updt after long time (Page 4)

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it's pretty good actually ...

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Part 5

Meanwhile KT was also looking for the so-called-chor. sHE was following the noises which where coming then manthan and KT both heard something around the corner. They went quickly and collided into eachother and bumped heads. Manthan was sitting on the floor with his eyes watery cuz he bumped his head n nose soo hard it hurted. KT was just looking at him and smiling like he was insane or something.

Manthan: KT tum yahan kya kar rahi.

KT: mein yahan kuch khana khane arahi thi aur kuch aavaz sunay di kissi chor ki shayad lekin phir mein tumse takraye.

Manthan: Tum bhi uss chor koh hi dhoond rahi thi

KT: tum bhi matlab..koi chor tah toh hum dono dhoond rahe honge na

They both giggled.

Manthan: hain hum dono ek hi cheez dhoonde aye the aur ek hi cheez mila

KT: kya matalb?

Manthan: mein bhi kuch khana dhoond ne aya tha aur hum dono ko chor mila

KT: tumara matlab mein chor hoon..tumari baat samaj mein aayi ke tum chor dekhte ho lekin mein kaise chor hoon.

Manthan: mein to(he paused and looked at her) tumara matlab mein chor jaise dekhata hoon…tumari toh

And he started chasing her around the house. They were causing so much noise that Tulsi heard. She came down and saw Manthan n kt chasing each other like little kids around the house. She smiled like she knew something.

Tulsi: yeh tum log kya kar rahe ho chote bache jaise ek doosre ko chase kar rahe ho

Manthan: Yeh bachi hi toh hain.

KT squinted her eyes and left to her room.

Tulsi: Manthan mujhe kuch shak ho raha hain.

Manthan: kya shak ho raha hain dadi.

Tulsi: mein kuch bura nahi keh na jahti lekin tum bohot badal gaye ho.

Manthan: kaise?

Tulsi: jaise aab tumhe sab ki chinta hone lagi hain aur tum bado ko izaat se pesha rahe ho. Yeh aisa aajanak itna badha change kaise.

Manthan: Baa mujkhe hi nahi pata lekin dheere dheere mein badal rahe hoon. Bhoomi said it too. Lekin kyun nahi pata.

Tulsi: Theek hain..joh bhi hua aacha hua aab tum soh jayo

Manthan left and Tulsi knew that Manthan was in love…but with who? Was it with KT? How would Tulsi know who Manthan talks to?

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nice going Smile Smile
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great fanfic continue soon Tongue
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Posted: 09 April 2007 at 6:47am | IP Logged
WOW>> I luved it Clap ....... .. ur fanfic rulz...
PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ continue soon Clap
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Posted: 09 April 2007 at 7:34am | IP Logged
kiya fanfic hai mwa love it
yaar mujhe kt or manthan ki jodi pasand ane lagi hai is fanfic main mwaaaaaaaaaaa
cont soooooon
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Posted: 09 April 2007 at 6:13pm | IP Logged

Part 6

Manthan was in his roon that night thinking about why he was changing then he thought that he's in love with KT which brought a big smile to his face. He wanted to spend the rest of his life with KT so he knew that Tulsidadi would do it for him.. HE wasn't sure how he would tell her. So he decided to write her a letter. So he got a paper and pen. This is what he wrote.

Dear Tulsidadi,

Mujhe KT se pyar hua hain.

Then he thought that it was too plain so he threw it away..he thought it should show more suspense…so he kept wasting paper like 5 times and finally came up with the final piece

Dear my lovely Tulsidadi,

It is 3:oo in the morning. I am up this late to write u this letter. I figured out why I have changed. It is because I have started to love someone. Actually I have started to love everyone n that is because I love someone. The someone I love is the person I want to spend the rest of my life with. I haven't told that special someone yet but I will do it before I deliver this message to you. I think she loves me too but I am not sure. I want to marry her and have your great-gradchildren with her. I hope you will like her…no actually you will like her because you know her. She is very pretty. Her name is….Preity. She is very pretty. She works in films and I love the film Kabhie Alvida Na Kehna of her. Please I wanna marry her. Can you go to her house and propose to her daddy for me…Please.

Your Very desperate Grandchild who loves you a lot,

Manthan

PS. I LOVE KT!!!!

He thought that Tulsi baa wouldn't understand it so he wrote it again in Hindi. Then he fell asleep with the following schedule planned.

  1. wake up and get ready looking all sharp.
  2. call ramukaka and tell him to send KT in the room
  3. tell KT I love you
  4. Give the letter to dadi.
  5. Marry KT
  6. suhaagraat
  7. honey moon
  8. kids
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>i loved that that... Clap Clap Clap
it was too funny LOL LOL LOL
im still laughing LOL LOL
continue soon Smile Smile
             
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