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PYAR HUMKO HONE LAGA(updt after long time (Page 3)

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i luved it!do continue!


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when is th next part....plz make it soon....
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In his room Manthan was thinking about what just happened...he was wondoring,"mujhe abhi kya hua tha? mein uss gawar ko asse kun dekh raha tha? mein usse chor kyun nahi raha tha...mujhe hosh tha phir bhi hosh nahi tha...mujhe pata hai ke kya hua phir bhi yaad nahi araha ke mujhe kys hua...mujhe asa kyun ho raha hai" he closed his eyes.(song pyar humko hone laga plays)when he closed his eyes he saw kt's face...he saw how beautiful it was and he looked at her rose cheeks, her shiney eyes, how her face glowd like the moonlight. he opened his eyes again.(song still playing but volumes down a little)then he thinks,"kya mujhe kt se...nahi yeh nahi ho sakta..mein kase usee pyar kar sakta hoon..kaun us gawar ko pyar kar sakta hain...mein to hrgeez nahi kar"(song volumes up again" flashbacks of all the time KT and Manthan fought...manthan thought about how much he hates KT..(song volumes down)manthan thinks,"mein kt se kitni nafrat karta hoon yeh mooje ehsaas hain...toh phir ajj abhi kuch pal pehle...mujhe kya hua."(song volumes up again)
manthan is just sitting there...lost in his thoughts(song stops)karan walks in saying,"manthan mujhe tumse kuch bohot zaroori bat karni hain"manthan doesnt move...he just sits there like a blinking breathing statue..karan says,"manthan?" but manthan still doesnt move...karan thinks"lagta hain kuch soch raha hain...bohot gehri soch mein hain..phir baat karuga"

kt, archita, pari, damini, tanya are helping to set up the table for dinner. it was almost done so damini says,"tanya...tum sab koh kane ki liye bulao aur mein yeh table peh sab kuch set kati hoon.tanya says,"thik hai...mein bulakar lati hoon." and leaves.then damini says to kt,archita,pari"tum theeno mein se ek zara stove par se woh pot leyana."kt says mein aati hoon.kt then saw that there was some kind of chutney on her hand and decides to wash her hands. she washes it and puts the cloth she used by the stove. she takes the pot outside...she didnt know that the stove was on and soon the cloth was on one knew.
tanys had callen everyone except manthan. she knocks at manthans door...manthan who was still in deep thought had lost the thoughts..tanya says,"manthan beta tum zara fresh hoke niche ana sab tumara kane ke liye intazar kar rahe hai."manthan says"ji maa" then tanya leaves. manthan in the bathroom washes his face and in the mirror instead of seeing his face he saw kt's face(i got this part of some add of a movie on tv...i dont remeber which)he thought,"forget not even gonna say anything...mujhe asa kyun ho raha hai yeh soch ke mere sar mein bohat dard ho raha hain."he turns off the faucet and wipes his face and goes down.
everyone is sitted down except for sahil's side of the family who were at sahil's friend's son's daughter's(lol...its long)5th birthday party...then they realize that they had forgotten something. kt said that she'll get it..poor kt didnt know that there was fire so she went in kitchen and saw the fire but then something fell and blocked the doorway. kt was trapped...kt screamed and then she fainted. baa yelled,"kya hua krishna...tumne chilaya kyun" there was no reply so baa told archita to check what had happened. archita went and saw that there is a fire and she couldn't see kt anywhere...she got scared and ran to the dining room and said all fast and scared,"baa ktichen mein aag lagi hui hain kar kt andar nahi dikai de rahi...mujhe lagta hai ke woh behosh ho gayi hain." manthan heard this and....(to be continued)

Edited by desichick4eva - 08 April 2007 at 8:09pm
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Posted: 06 January 2007 at 10:24am | IP Logged
dat was so gud plz update soon.
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Posted: 07 January 2007 at 4:01am | IP Logged
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwww.... its too gud....
Plz continue soon Clap Smile
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Posted: 07 January 2007 at 8:30am | IP Logged
that was excellent xxxxxx
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Posted: 07 January 2007 at 8:47am | IP Logged
awesome story Clap
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Posted: 07 January 2007 at 5:43pm | IP Logged
thnxx...i will try to think of what happens next.....
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