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devilangel

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'I wish you would drop dead right now.'

'You are the most annoying self centered person I have ever met. I hate you.'

'Every slap I give you, you deserve. I hate to love you, but I just don't seem to able to stop.'

'You came to my life and ruined it. And then you made it bright. And then you ruined it again. You're filthy.'

'You are one of the worst people I've had the misfortune to love.'

'And you're one of my best friends I've had the misfortune to lose'

Fate works in cruel ways, it brings you together and then separates you. Just like them.. they speak ill of each other, hate each other, curse each other, but at the end of the day feel guilty. Is this lust, angst, depression or maybe even love..?

 

 

 

Hi Guys!

as most of you might now, i am almost finishing my fic aka Forever This Way, and I was thinking of starting a new one, And Then I Saw The Real You.. b

This fic will be much longer, funnier, relaxing and no one will die! i hope you like it and give me advise to improve my writing skils. there are a few points which have to clarified before the fic which are as follows:

    It is set 5 yrs after KMA Naina is best friends with Alekh, Pooja and Ali. Huda has died in a war (will be clarified later) and Yudi is settled in the States. Naina and Ali are both Majors in the Army, and Alekh is a Captain. Pooja is a hockey coach happily married to Ali.
  • Naina is currently posted in the Army Headquarters in New Delhi, while her friends are in Mumbai.

now for the important ones:

    Rajveer and Naina did not end things happily. they basically stopped speaking because of the way he was being rude to her. Rajveer married Ritu some time during their second year in KMA. Rajveer is still, after five years, an Army Captain, meaning Naina is senior to him. (will be clarified why) They haven't spoken in five years but they know where the other is from army records. Naina at this point DOES NOT love Rajveer. Rajveer at this point DOES NOT love Naina (or maybe he does, we'll see) Ritu will NOT appear in the story. There will be no love triangles. Huda will NOT reappear as a human being to claim his undying love for Naina.
  • This is primarily a Rajveer-Naina story with a fair bit of other characters.

Do you like it? please tell me if you dont, i wont mindEmbarrassed.. but i will only start if you guys respond well. these were just a few clarifications which might come in handy in case i do start the fic. and i would discontinue it at any point if you ask me. so please feel free to reply.

happy guessing what will happen!Wink

shreyasi

The link to my fic: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=506938&T PN=1&#8581559

Chapters and Page Numbers:

    Part 1 : Pg 4 2 : 6 3 : 8 4 : 10 5 : 12 6 : 14 7 : 16 8 : 18 9 : 20 10 : 22 11 : 23 12 : 25 13 : 27 14 : 29 15 : 31 16 : 34 17 : 35 18 : 37 19 : 39 20 : 41 21 : 43 22 : 45 23 : 47
  • 24 : 51

 



Edited by devilangel - 28 March 2007 at 8:33am

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Posted: 02 January 2007 at 9:48am | IP Logged
me cant wait 4 ur next fanfic shreyasi!! Clap ur idea is AMAZING!! Clap plzzz do write soooooooooon Wink

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Posted: 02 January 2007 at 9:52am | IP Logged
nice idea
but pls pls pls pls
mere huda ko mat maro
plssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss ssssssssssssssss

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Posted: 02 January 2007 at 10:13am | IP Logged
Yeah..Even i am waiting for it.. Plzz do continue writing!!!

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Posted: 02 January 2007 at 11:21am | IP Logged
Oh wow! Me cant wait already!
Start it soon!
The promo sounds exciting! Clap Clap Clap

Edited by kiran87 - 02 January 2007 at 11:21am

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LOL Hey wow...it sounds interesting...

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Posted: 02 January 2007 at 12:00pm | IP Logged
plz continue Clap
plz post the first part
its sound more interseting Clap Clap Clap plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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plzzzzz naina ko raj ka senior mat banoo yaar

all other concepts rocks

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