Hey guys, Reemz's FF inspired me to write my own...its definately not as good as a lot of SV fan-fics...but its my 1st attempt..so please bare with me and give me helpful comments and suggestions😳 thnx...Enjoy
----------------------------Sagar is brought home from the hospital----------------------------
(Maa is waiting for Sagar with an Arti along with Bharat, Chachi, Shalu, Harsh and Karthik)
(Aniket and Chinu are giving support to Sagar while he is walking towards the house as he is still weak)
(Vidya is behind sagar and is grabbing on to his back to keep his posture straight)
(Sagar reaches the doorway and his Maa does the Arti)
(Sindura is very tensed along with her two other side-kicks since that now Sagar is normal again and he may reveal her secret anytime)
Chachi: (in her fake caring voice) Hay Shabunaauth, aapka laak laak shukre hai! Aapne humari jamai babu ko thik kardi…
Sagar : (his face turns confused seeing all these new people *vidya's relatives* )
Vidya: (smiles in happiness) haan Chachi…agar Shabunauth humare saath nehi hote tho pata nehi kya hota
Sagar: (in a confused - soft - annoyed voice) Tum log kaun ho?
Chachi: Hai, Haiiy, Haaiiiy! Ye kya hogaya…isko khuch yaad nehi hai kya?
Maa: Nehi hema, shayad Sagar thaak gaye hoge…vidya tum sagar ko lekaar aapne kamre mein jayo…aur tum bhi thaak gayi hogi naa? Tum dono jakaar so jayo.
Sagar: (seems very sleepy..and kinda dozes off)
Vidya: Ji maa (vidya carries him to their room)
--------Arti and Welcoming is done -------
--------Sagar & Vidya's Bedroom ---------
Vidya: (brings sagar to the bed) Aap so jaye
Sagar: (grabs on to Vidya's aanchaal) Ek minute (in a very very tired voice) Tum mujhe bataya nehi ki tum log kaun ho? yaha pe kyun ho?
Vidya: (shocked) arre hum apke patni hai! aap bhool gaye? ya phir aapka shararati hurkaat abhi bhi nehi gaye? (laughs)
Sagar: nehi mein serious hu! Who are you!? You have to be kidding me! How can you be my wife?
Vidya: (confused) Ji, kya kaha aapne...aap tho jante hai na...ki hum unpaar hai...humme..apke baath
Sagar: (now is really excited) Arre! tum mere patni kaisai! tum tho! (laughs) kya chaate ho humse? paisa? Daulat? yaha kyun aye?
Vidya: (her eyes start getting moist) arre ye aap kya kehrahi hai? mein bhala aapse paisa aur dalaut?
Sagar: (stops her with his hand) arre! tho kyun yaha ek pagal se shaadi karkar aye ho? agar daulat nehi chahoge tho kya?
Vidya: (scared & shocked) arre!! app kaisai kaisai baath karahe hai!
Sagar: (yells) MoM!!!! MOM!!!!!!! MOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*the story still hasnt started yet...this is just an intro😳*
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