Pyaar Ho Hi Jatha Hai AK THE END PG118!!! - Page 2

The first part coming up in 1 hour hopefully 😊 Edited by unum ali - 17 years ago

awesome start di's 😃
im sure this will be another awesome fanfic.! 😉
waiting for the part! 😳 😳

A big thanks to Laiba for the lovely banner 🤗 

It's a beautiful sunny day, everyone in the mansion is busy getting ready, as its Monday morning a school/college day.

 

The servants in the house are very busy, some of them are cleaning the house, and some of them are preparing breakfast in the kitchen. 

 

Now we see Kanta behen the servant, is arguing with someone.

 

KB- Maine Kaha na apseh who abhi jaag jaygeh, bas paanch minute he kaha na.

 

Now we see the other person it is non other than Tulsi Virani

 

Tulsi- Paanch minute!!!!!! Paanch minute!!!!!! Kanta Behen ek ghantha hogaya hain school bhi janah hai uneh, ajj toh mein ineh nahiye choroonghi, ajj toh mein uneh (Interrupted)

 

Someone- Massi aap rehene dhijiye ajj in donah ko mein hi jaghthi hoon

 

Now we see the persons face its non other than Kripa Sharma, she is wearing her uniform, White Shirt, Grey Trousers and Red Jumper

 

Tulsi- Lekin Kripa beta, tum uneh chorrah tum nashtah karloh, tumhe school keh liye dher ho rahiye hai, une donah ko ajj mujseh koi nahiye bacha saktha

 

Someone comes  

 

Someone- Yeah Mom chornah nahiye donah ko, hamesha donoh aise he karthi hai, woh sochthi hain keh woh sabse chotti hai toh hum unki saari baatien manehghe I don't think so, aur aap Kanta Behen hamesha unka saat deti hai, aur tum bhi Kripa tumneh bhi une Donoh ko sar par charkar rakha hai, Idiots just h8 them

 

Kripa- Iqra tum fikr maat karoh who donah abhi jag jayghee

 

(Kripa goes upstairs)

 

 

Now Kripa enters a room, which is filled with boys posters, we see 2 big beds in the room and we see 2 people sleeping. Kripa gets 2 jugs of cold water and throws it on them. Now we see the 2 people screaming, they are non other than the 2 bratz Shazmin and Sanam.

 

Shaz/Sanam- AhAh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Kripa Di whats this why did u throw water on us

 

Kripa- U know what Massi aur Kanta Behen tum donah ko kitneh pyaar seh jagah rahyee thi lekin tum donoh u were sleeping, and saying 5 minutes again and again , u know what its 8am u have 30 mins to get ready, so hurry up  and get ready then come downstairs for breakfast, u know what if ur late it wont be good then ur teacher will give u a late mark and u will also get detention, and masi and mamu are going to shout and (Interrupted)    

 

Shaz- Kripa Di we get the point, we are sorry, we are coming downstairs

 

Sanam- Yeah Di  we are coming plz no lecture

 

Kripa- Fine hurry up

 

Kripa goes downstairs

 

Shazmin and Sanam get ready and come downstairs, they are wearingtheir unifrom Navy Blue short skirts, White shirt and Navy Blue Blazer.

 

Now everyone is at the breakfast table, having breakfast

 

Mihir- Shazmin, Sanam time dekha hai, it's 8.30am you have to be in school by 9am, tum donoh ko parwa hi nahiye hai studies ki, tum donah keh school seh bahuth complaints aiye hai, tum donah aur tum donoh keh nalyaak dosth, especially ur friends Shaz, sareh keh sareh lafunghe hai school ka naam badlaam kardiya hain.

 

Iqra- Yeah dad especially Shaz boyfriend Rishi, woh toh sabseh barah lafungha hai, maine kitni baar kaha Shaz seh, don't hang out with him lekin yeh hain keh sunthi he nahiye

 

Mihir/Tulsi- (Angrilly) WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  BOYFRIEND!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

Shaz- U lier Iqra Mom, Dad shes lieing me and Rishi are only friends u get it only FRIENDS!!!! Dad believe me all my friends are good, not all of them are bad if u don't believe me ask Kripa Di

 

Kripa- Mamu, Massi,  Shaz  aur Rishi sirf ache dost hai, aur Shaz keh sab dost dill keh bahuth ache hai, some of them they just get involved in fights and that's how they get a bad reputation, lekin woh dill keh bahuth ache hai

 

Mihir/Tulsi- Beta humhe tumhari baat peh yakeen hai, tumhe saafia deneh ki koi zaroorth nahiye hai

 

Mihir- As all of u have finished ur breakfast I will drop all of u to school and drop Iqra college.

 

Shaz/Sanam- NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

Iqra- Dad I don't mind u can drop us

 

Just then Mihirs phone rings, its Lalit

 

Lalit- Mihir office mein ek business conference hai aur hamareh American delegates aneh waleh hai toh tum aur Tulsi Bhabhi jaldi seh ajoa

 

Mihir- KYA!!!!! Business conference ajj hai tike hain hum arahaye hai

 

Shazmin and Sanam are very happy, as Mihir and Tulsi are going office, so now they won't go to school with them

 

Mihir- I am sorry kids ajj mein tum sabko school nahiye drop kar poangha, so the driver will drop you mein aur Tulsi office ja rehay hai, Lalit ka phone aiya tha ajj ek business conference hai

 

Shaz/Sanam- (Happily) That's great Dad!!!!!!!!!!!

 

Iqra-(Sadly) But Dad that's not fair

 

Mihir- I am sorry Iqra Beta

 

Iqra- Its ok Dad

 

Mihir- Shazmin aur Sanam tum donah zyada khush maat hua ok from today onwards u both will have tuitions, for 5 hours everyday after school and 6 hours every weekends, I have also arranged for a teacher to come, so aaj seh tum donah keh tuitions shuru  

 

Shaz/Sanam- NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Dad we have dance practise after school its really important and on the weekends we have dance practise and sports, plz Dad no tuitions Mom u tell him we promise we will be really good

 

Tulsi- Beta I agree with ur dad u both deserve it

 

Shaz/Sanam- That's not fair!!!!!!!!!! Kripa Di plz tell them, they listen to u

 

Kripa- I agree with them u need u both need tuitions, they are very necessary for you and ur education

 

Shaz/Sanam- That's not fair!!!!!!!!!!!! STUPID TUITIONS

 

Mihir/Tulsi- Beta Kripa lots of good luck ajj tumhara History aur maths ka exams hai, lots of good luck again, u will do great, aur haan phir school keh baad tumhaari revision class hai, for ur Food Technology exam

 

Shaz/Sanam- Good Luck Kripa Di

 

Iqra/KB- Good Luck Kripa

 

Kripa- Thanks everyone Mamu Massi revision class will finish at 7pm so send the driver exactly at 7pm

 

Mihir/Tulsi- Itni late beta chaloh koi baat nahiye, shaam ko tumhe driver leneh ajaygha

 

Kripa- Tike hain Mamu, Massi

 

Now the driver comes and he drops everyone school firstly Kripa, then Shaz, Sanam, Iqra.

 

Now we see Kripa going in her school Selly Park School for Girlshttp://www.sellyprk.bham.sch.uk/welcome.htm  (this is my school heres the website, u can find out more about the school if u want too)

 

 

 

Kripa does all her classes revises for the exams, and now its lunch time all of Kripas friends are really excited, especially Gauri. Kripa is sitting in the canteen eating her sandwich and reading her notes on the maths exam, which she has next after lunch. She's not really paying attention, to her friends.

 

Gauri- Kripa are u listening or what, Kripa we just had an exam atleast stop revising now, u need to have some fun u need a break from all this revisions and exams and these books.

 

Siya/Riya- Gauris right Kripa all the time into books and study isn't good u need time for urself to have fun

 

Kripa- The word FUN just doesn't exist in my life, I want to study get the best grades and make a good future for myself, I have all the luxuries in the world I have everything, a mansion house, money, Dad and uncles business which is known worldwide, I can join that any time but I am not going to coz I want to achieve everything myself, I want to be independent, I want to make my family proud of me

 

Gauri- We understand Kripa but still u need fun, u need to enjoy ur life, today after revision class we are going to Cannon Hill Park, the revison class finishes at 4.30, my boyfriend Zayed is coming and his mates are coming also, so Riya, Siya and u can hook up with his mates, or just be friends.

 

Riya/Siya- Yeah that's great

 

Kripa- (Angrily) NO!!!! I don't think so I am not interested, I have better things to do then go stupid parks, u all go after revision I am going home  

I have to study for tomorrow Food Technology paper, I got A grade for the coursework I want to achieve for a A grade in the exam atleast, if I fail it wont be good I just hate food technology, its so boring but I have to pass my GCSE in it

 

Gauri- Kripa food is crap boring I am not bothered about the exam, plz come to the park with us look our moms trust u the most, we are also going back with u so plz u have to come if u don't come then we cant go, there are benches there u can study there also plz don't say no

 

Riya/Siya- Plz Kripa

 

Kripa- Ok fine we will go Park, but we have to be back at 7pm, coz that's when the driver will come to collect us

 

Gauri/Riya/Siya-(Happily) Thx Kripa ur the best

 

Kripa- Yeah I know I am the best

 

Now we see the Sharmas/Viranis industries, the conference has been done and their company has won the biggest American contract and they are very happy.

 

Lalit- Contract toh humhe milgaya, Vasu sunkar bahuth khush hogi

 

Mihir- Haan aur hum sab neh bahuth mehannat bhi ki hai aur tab jakar humhe yeh contract milah

 

Tulsi- Waise lalit bhai sab woh Vasu ka koi phone nahiye aiya, bahuth din hogaye hai mein soch rahiye thi, keh hum Vasu ko phone kareh contract keh bareh mein batanah hain auseh, aur yeh bhi poachnah hain keh woh kab wapis arahiye hai

 

Lalit- Woh Bhabhi India ka business Vasu dekh rahiye hai aur projects ki  official business meeting hai char (4) mahineh keh baad ajayghee

 

Tulsi- Acha Bhai sab shaam ko phone karenghe, ajj Kripa beti ka exam hai aap auseh phonekarkeh good luck zaroor wish karma auseh acha lagegha, mujhe poora yakeen hain keh iss baar bhi she will top the school like she always does

 

Mihir- Iss baat peh toh koi shaak nahiye hamarri Kripa beti ko zaroor kamyabi milenghee

 

Lalit- Bhagwan kareh aisa hi ho mein abhi auseh phone karkeh atha hoon, kaam keh chakkar mein mujhe yaad bhi nahiye raha keh ajj Kripa ka exam hai

 

Lalit goes and rings Kripa

 

Kripa- Hello Papa kaise hai aap

 

Lalit- Mein tike hoon beta tum batoa sab kuch tike to hain na tumhare exam kaise teh

 

Kripa- Pehela exams History ka subha tha paper tike tha maine sareh questions answers kiye I tried my level best like I always do aur abhi ek ghanthe baad mera maths ka exams hai, Papa aap batiye contract milah

 

Lalit- Haan beta contract milgaya

 

Kripa- Congrats Papa

 

Lalit- Thx beta lots of goodluck on ur exam

 

Kripa- Thx Papa

 

 Lalit- Bye beta

 

Kripa- Bye papa

 

Now its 1pm and its lunch time in Hall Green School

Hall Green is a popular, vibrant and highly successful Secondary School. We set high standards in all areas and turn out young people who invariably move onto Further and Higher Education, successful Modern Apprenticeships and productive employment.

http://www.hallgreen.bham.sch.uk/subject_areas.htm to find out about the school

 

We see Rishi running around the School, coz he is trying to find out where Shazmin is

 

Rishi- Sanam u seen Shaz

 

Sanam- No bro I haven't seen her

 

Rishi-(to himself)  Where is Shaz?(Now he sees Akash coming so he goes to ask him) Akash have u see Shaz

 

Akash- No Bro I haven't

 

Rishi- Ok (to himself) Where is Shaz?  

 

Now we see Shaz who is coming towards the playground, Rishi sees Shaz and is very happy and he goes running to her and gives her a hug, Shaz is very shocked, Iqra who was in school regarding some work saw this and got really angry

 

Iqra- ( to herself Angrily) Shazmin ki baachi to ajj ghar to chal I will tell mom dad everything just wait and watch

 

 Shaz- Rishi whats this hug why

 

Rishi- I am so sorry Shaz u know what I am so happy guess what Mr West isn't here, so we will have a free lesson so that means no teacher wow and that also means we don't have to hear Mr Wests boring lecturers on science, and no science work

 

Shaz- U serious Mr West isn't here

 

Rishi- Yeah I am serious Mr West isn't here

 

Shaz- YES!!!!!!!! Mr West not here (In excitement Shaz hugged Rishi)

 

 Rishi was really happy as he loved Shaz a lot from primary school, but doesn't know what Shaz thinks of him, he does know they are best friends.

 

Shaz let go and said

 

Shaz- I am sorry in excitement I hugged u

 

Rishi- Yeah I know and anyways it doesn't matter as we are best friends

 

Shaz- Yeah

 

Just then the bell went and it was time for lesson, so Shaz and her friends went to the lesson.

 

Rishi was being really silly and so were all his other friends

 

Rishi- So everyone today the old man Mr West isn't here, so therefore I will be taking the class (he gets the board marker and pretends to be Mr West and makes fun of Mr West)

 

Just then Mr West has entered the room, and Rishi has no idea that Mr West is here, he is carrying on making fun of Mr West.

 

Shaz- RISHI!!!! Mr West Mr West

 

Rishi- Calm down Shaz the stupid old man isn't here, hes such a trampy I swear he so old its about time that the old man retires but not the tramp wont retire. He is still in this school to make my life (Interrupted) 

 

Mr West- (Angrily) A LIVING HELL

 

Rishi- Yeah a living hell by the way who are u, you sounded just like the old man Mr West (Rishi wasn't looking as he was too busy writing on the board)

 

Mr West- (Angrily) BECAUSE IAM MR WEST U RISHI SHERGILL RIGHT NOW WITH ME TO THE PRINCIPALS OFFICE HOW DARE U MAKE FUN OF ME I WILL GET U SUSPENDED. LISTEN EVERYONE I WILL JUST TAKE THIS RISHI TO THE PRINCIPLES OFFICE THE REST OF U TAKE UR SCIENCE TXT BOOKS OUT AND READ THE CASE STUDIES ON PG234-236 AND ANWSER THE 20 QUESTIONS RIGHT NOW AND ALL THE CLASS WILL GET 2 HOURS DETENTION AFTER SCHOOL FOR THIS INAPPROPRIATE BEHAVIOUR.

 

Everyone gets out their books and does the questions quietly

 

Now in a year 11 class we see 4 boys talking they are non other than Angad Khanna, Lakshya Kapoor, and Zayed Khan, and Vivan Lamba

 

Zayed- So Angad ur coming right to Cannon Hill Park I am going to meet my girl Gauri, she has some friend also I will hook u up with them what say

 

Angad-  I say no coz I got a lot to study there is an exam tomorrow and I am busy and all so I am not coming

 

Zayed/Vivan- Angad it will be great fun come well Angad when u went to that boring museum we came with u and u can't even come with us to the park that's not done

 

Lakshya- Yeah Angad come it will be fun

 

Angad- Fine I will come

 

Zayed/Vivan/Lakshya- That's great 

 

Just then Laiba Malhotra comes

 

Laiba- So where are u guys going

 

Angad- Cannon Hill Park the one by Selly Park School

 

Laiba- Right but Lakhsya u cant go coz u have to take me shopping after school, I need to buy the new maxfactor designer make-up

 

Lakshya- But Laiba I just bought u a new designer make up 4 days ago

 

Laiba- The new ones out now that ones old so Lakshya ur taking me or not

 

Lakshya- Fine I will take u how can I say no to u

 

Laiba- (hugs Lakshya) ur the best Lakshya I love u

 

Lakshya I love u too

 

Now we are back to Kripas school and their revision class has finished they are heading to Cannon Hill Park, and so are Angad and his friends.

 

PREVIEW- THE CANNON HILL PARK

 

 

 

 

Edited by unum ali - 17 years ago

Originally posted by: .:KYPHlOvEr88:.

awesome start di's 😃
im sure this will be another awesome fanfic.! 😉
waiting for the part! 😳 😳

Thanks a lot 😃 I have posted the first part

simply amazing and very nice 😃 its very interesting. so many characters and its going to be wonderful to read. continue soon unum. looking forward to the next part 😛

Originally posted by: del_geo

simply amazing and very nice 😃 its very interesting. so many characters and its going to be wonderful to read. continue soon unum. looking forward to the next part 😛

Thanks a lot 😃

wow yaaaaaaaaar awsome story....mwahh just loved it guys...awww i m so sorrryyy shaz but 2 tell the truth i love uuu..............anyway keep going


Iqra

it was awsome sista! luved it 😃 u rocked!i'm with my hubby nd he cants ay no to me how sweet of him 😳 😆 specialy when my jiju make fun of the teacher 😆 😆 shaz dunt worry shaadi se pehle iss tarahn hai lekin shaadi ke baad tumpe hi marega! he'll make fun of u 😉what say??? 😆 contsoon sista 👏 👏

Laiba😳

exellent ff and an exellent part unum 👏 again exellent 😆

wow that rocked yaar
amazing part
cont soon