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thanks keep it up

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I've Just Started TO Read It , But Awesom Going.... Hope For More improvement Tongue

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great story Clap  Clap 

pls continue soon

 



Edited by Ravinder duggal - 16 January 2007 at 1:18pm

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Really really good!!

Fabuloussss!!


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Hey guyz
sorry i wont be able to update for a few days, im rlly sick, my sis is writing all this for me cuz i cant move from my bed...
sorry!!!Will update as soon as possible Big smile

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Okay guyz...im feeling much better!

Recap:Shweta and Rohit are introduced, Kashish finds out that Sujal has taken the twins but doesnt tell Piyush.

Yeah after Kashish helps Sh. they leave and wtv...LOL
Its like 12:30am and Piyush is asleep, but Kashish can't.Piyush thinks the twins r sleeping.
Kashish thinking:Why did Sujal take the twins??

Scene Changes to Sujal:
(they r in the car)
Vikram:Uncle, where r u taking us?

Gayatri:Haan uncle, mumma humari intazaar kari hogi.its already 12am and we have school tomorrow!!

Sujal:Kids, ure mom and dad have gone out of town, so she told me to take care of u guyz until they come bak..

Vikram:Okay.

THey reach Garewal House:

Veena:Sujal!where were u and who r these kids?

Sujal:Mom..these are my friend's kids, she and her husband have gone out of town so she told me to take care of them until she comes back.

Veena:Okay

Vikram:Namaste Aunty, mera naam hain Vikram.

Gayatri:Namaste Aunty aur mera naam Gayatri hain.

Veena:Vikram aur Gayatri, bohaut pyare naam hain.

A while l8er when the twins r asleep, Sujal enters Veena's room.

Sujal:Mom, mujhe aapse kuch kehna hai.

Veena:Kaho sujal

Sujal:Woh,..mom..Vikram aur Gayatri..

Veena:Woh dono to guest room main sora hai hain kyun?

Sujal:Nahiin, mom yeh mere bache hain.
Veena stops whatever she is doing.

Veena:Matlab?

Sujal:Haan mom, yeh mere aur kashish key bache hain.

Scene changes to Kashish/Morning/

Piyush is eating breakfast.

Piyush:Kashish, bache kahaan hain?

Kashish:Woh..unki tebiyat theek nahiin hai,toh woh aaj skool nahiin jara hai hain.

Piyush:Okay,main office jaraha hoon.

Kashish:OKay bye

Piyush:bye oh ill bring medecine for the kids.

Kashish:ok.

After he leaves Kashish calls Sujal:

Sujal:Hello?

Kashish:Sujal why did u take the twins?

Sujal:Oh Kashish, they r my kids.And besides they think u have gone out of town with ure husband.And that im supposed to take care of them.

Kashish:well tell them that we came back because Piyush is now asking about them and i cant keep making excuses.
Sujal please!

Sujal:Tum itna beg karahi ho to theek hain.Ill bring them over now.

Kashish:Thank u sujal
and she cuts the phone.
she turns around and is shocked!

Pre-cap:Who is the guy?Will Sujal return the twins??
Okay i think thid is a full update instead of the bit by bit update.LOL

Edited by iloveroses95 - 20 January 2007 at 12:16am

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thanks can't wait! hurry back!!!

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Please continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Edited by Sara_K95 - 20 January 2007 at 3:45pm

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